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Presentation 1
Topic 50

Rationale 50

Support 55

Delivery 50

PPT 55

Total = 53

Presentation 2
Topic 45

Rationale 50

Support 55

Delivery 60

PPT 50

Total = 52

Presentation 3
Topic 55

Rationale 50

Support 55

Delivery 50

PPT 55

Total = 52

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Topic 50 Research aim & question(s) and associated objectives identified with clarity – (but not enough detail about why Leeds and Reading (location - (#2).   47
Agree high 40s

Rationale Identifies but with some lack of clarity and explores in little depth the practical and academic significance of their research. Identifies methodology, but justification weak – nothing for why she is asking shops and restaurants about what benefits the festivals bring to them – unclear of why she needs interviews in particular and the data analysis needs explanation as to which belongs with which approach. (46)

Value - clear

Interview restaurants' and shops' managers?

questionnaires to be used to "improve accuracy"?

some unclear parts - couldn't understand what the student was saying

limitations - the bullet point didn't align with what student said, confusing (49)

Agree - high 40s

Support Supports some points with examples or reference to the literature review in the first slide, but these may not be explained clearly in enough detail. Shows an understanding and awareness of the current research and insights in the chosen area but does not demonstrate a critical evaluation of these. (48)
Agree - high 40s

Delivery - well organised but lacking variety - voice monotonous

PPT 64 - too much text distracting reader

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