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Overall your explanations were very well, but I think you may have spent too much time on your digital dialogues. The whole project was very pretty and exciting though. I also like how you talked about your field experience you had and you have tried these technology games already on students.

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I really enjoyed the first page including the visual appeal of her symbalo and digital identity. She also did a great job having her voice match up exactly with what she was showing on the screen. I would have put an example of what a student could have possibly wrote on the Padlet review in the lesson plan for the students so that we could see how it might look when a student completes the assessment, but overall the padlet was a great idea!

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The theme on the homepage was really cool and fit together very well. I think sometimes you spoke too fast and the recording was not very clear.

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I really liked how you set up the kind hurts versus hurting words. It was a very interactive and technology based way to make sure the kids got the most out of the lesson.  Video sounds choppy from the recorder, next time try to be more fluent and speak a little slower.

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I love how you showed all of the websites that you loved the most on your symballoo. I did not think to do this and after watching yours I wish that I had incorporated this! It was cool to get to see the different things you were interested and what you believed would help your students. On homepage, maybe have had the digital identity and symballoo right next to each other. For the most part, it is all very visually appealing though!

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I like how you read some of the examples from your symballo. I also thought your digital identity was very visually appealing and well designed. The variety of questions in the nearpod review was good as well. All of your smore assistive technologies were absolutely amazing and would be so beneficial in classrooms. On the other hand, I could not really see the plickers review for the lesson plan review.

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You spoke very clear and slow which was good because it was easy to understand. I really like how you went into depth with all of your explanations. The lesson plan was a little confusing and lengthy, maybe next time make it more clear and to the point.

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Your video was amazing! I could understand every word perfectly and took you appropriate pauses between each page was very good. I would have tried to zoom in on things when showing them more, for example the tech grant so I could see what the presentation was really saying and the pictures involved.

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The speaking was clear and I was able to understand most of what she was saying. All of the pages were also appealing and the theme worked well. I think she could have cut the length of the explanations of her digital dialogues.

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The explanations were good, but I could not see the actual presentation so I could not really follow.

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I think it was cool how he inserted himself into the video so that we could see him. Also a very nice introduction and I like how he opened up everything so we could see it. It would have been nice to see more on the symballoo page, but the apps that were there were good ones!

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Spoke with such enthusiasm, especially in the beginning! Great explanations and examples for the symballoo. I like how you related it to a real classroom and how one could use it. I could not really see the lesson plan, it would have been cool if you could have zoomed in a little more or clicked on the link so that I could read it.

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You spoke at a great pace and had very good explanations to all of your items. I really loved your digital identity, it was so cute and friendly. I didn’t really get to see the digital dialogues though which would have been nice. Overall imagine presentation and great recording skills, you could tell it was very rehearsed.

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The guiding throughout the video was very good, especially with the speaking and timing of when she was switching the pages. Her explanations were a little short for some of the pages, but overall great work!

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Absolutely love the colors and deign of your digital identity. I also thought the audio recording as a whole was very clear. When talking about kahoot, it would have been better if you got to the kahoot page as soon as you started talking about.

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Spoke with a lot of enthusiasm instead of monotone which was great because it kept it interesting. I think you may have spent too much time explaining everything, for example, the digital identity could have been explained a lot simpler. Great effort and enthusiasm!

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All of Carly’s images and themes went together so well. Her explanations were very good, but sometimes it was hard to hear what she was saying.

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All of the colors and the overall theme tied in very well together. The audio recording could have been more clear, and maybe take more pauses and longer explanations. Overall, I loved all of your pages and content provided.

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I loved all the colors of your presentation, it was very bright and exciting. It would have been cool if you could have explained some of your apps on your symballoo but all your other descriptions were great.