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I think I could have spent more time on editing but overall I think that I did good.

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I need to work a little on my grammar

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I can write more

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Use better word choice

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I think that I could improve on word variation. Maybe next time I should work on finding more synonyms for one word.

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I think I could have made my conclusion and introduction better by using more powerful vocabulary and having a stronger hook.

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i think i could do better by writing a bit more on one topic

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Smooth transition words

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I worded my essay really well

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I think I need to work on transitioning from one paragraph to another.

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I elaborated on my body paragraphs and my stroy flowed

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I did a good job but I didnt get to write more about the book

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Good flow of sentences and paragraphs

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I liked my claim it was very good

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I could've expanded my essay and fixed gramatical errors

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I think i did well with the words i used

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I think that I did a good job with putting in elaborate details. This helps the reader understand more about the story I read and am writing about. I also think that I did well with adding a quote to each paragraph.

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I think that I should give more evidence and examples from the book to support my thesis.

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I think that I did a good job of finding the meaning of events in the story.

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i think that i did a good job on staying focused on the topic

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I think I did well on ending my essay in my conclusion.

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I need to at more background information because if the reader did not read the book it would of been confusing

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I think that I good job elaborating and providing sufficient evidence and information

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I used original thoughts and ideas

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I did well on relating my examples from the text to a real life situation

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