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A comma is required before the word "but" in paragraph 2.
Lola hates swimming, but she loves to groom herself.

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A comma in the second paragraph, before "but".

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A comma is required before "but she loves to groom herself" because this conjunction, but connects two clauses.

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We need to put comma before but.

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In paragraph 2 you need to put comma before but. Lola hates swimming, but she loves to groom herself.
Because those are two  independent clauses.
Second is: Since she loves grooming herself, so she always pristine.

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1.Lola is tiny,tan and white dog with short fur.
2.Lola hates swimming, but she loves to groom herself.

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needs comma after tiny, tan, and white dog:swimming, but: ,so

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needs comma after tiny, tan, and white dog:swimming, but: ,so

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Erika D.

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In paragraph 2 that I found two mistakes. First one: Lala hats swimming(, )but she loves to .....Second is: Since she loves grooming herself , (so) she always pristine.
In two brackets are my answer.

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in paragraph 2 weneed to put comma before but

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in paragraph 2 weneed to put comma before but

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amer

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In 2nd paragraph , 2nd line we need a coma before but.

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In 2nd paragraph , 2nd line we need a coma before but.

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In paragraph 2 you missed a comma before but .

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In paragraph 2 you missed a comma before but .

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Loubna.

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Stephanie

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In paragraph 2 we need to put comma before but.
Because those are two  independent clauses.

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In the paragraph 2, "," before "but" is missed.

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Click anywhere on the red poster. Write  your name and your idea about what the grammar error in the video is.

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Click anywhere on the red poster. Write  your name and your idea about what the grammar error in the video is.

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(Hint, look at the 2nd paragraph in the video.)

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Now that you have learned about combining independent clauses with coordinating conjunctions and comma rules, can you find the error in the essay at the end of the video? (Hint, look at the 2nd paragraph.) To view a larger version of the video, click here.

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