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I was at the fair on Tuesday.  I went with my friends.
-Capitalize your proper nouns

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I do not like pizza.

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I was in class and I was so bored . All I wanted was to go out to recess . My friend arlready gave me a check so....OH NO!!!! My friend just gave me another check. I don't want to get another check so bye.
- capitalize I

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'''My cars are missing'' I screamed and guess what I saw i saw my z little brother flush all my cars down the toilet.
-capitalize your I's and put dialouge in quotations.

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I was very cold when I couldn't know if Jill was cheating on me.

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You were cold, right?

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James thought it was cold.

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James thought it was cold!
Jill thought "I hope he doesn't know I am cheating on him with Jona!"

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I like dogs.

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I ate my breakfast fast so I can get to school early.

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I was looking for my pencil.

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I love my family.
-edit your sentence. do not write in all caps

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Your brother is annoying, you are also trash.

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I got a new dog today! I named her Ruby. She is ten months old.
-capitalize your proper nouns. edit

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I know that we are best friends.              We are going to the park.
we climed a tree in the woods

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Ifell and hurt my knee and foot.
-edit your sentence

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I went to the mound.

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It's just me myself and I solo ride until I die.
-edit your sentence, capitalize and punctuation.

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It's just me myself and I solo ride until I die.

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You are the best.

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Your're thinking what just happened
to her.
-edit and punctuation

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You and your friend are so cool. Your friend is not cool.

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You went to the mound.

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You are wearing a red shirt.

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this is so onying.

-this is not 3rd person

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He went to the mound.

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You must do you're work.

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Jacky is very hot. Johnny thought that it was cold
-this is not 3rd person

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Chole was sad because she was scared of dogs.

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He went to the mound.His friends were relived.
-add another persons perspective

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You must stop reading this.
-youz is not a word

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You are just a girl by the water.
- punctuation

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I walk in the beach.
-punctuation

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"Ethan is awesome cool and smart Josh thought to him self."
-punctuation, quotation marks

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The boy is having dinner.

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He is getting his clothes. John felt embaressed that he could not find anything to wear.

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You have to try coco puffs!

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"Jose looks really cold.Reily thought." so Reily gave her coat to him". "Reily is really nice to me i don't know why.'
-complete sentences

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you can go  home now or spend the night at my house to night.
Your my new best friend and i'm yours

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You are thinking," how did I get here?"
"where am I?"
-capitalization, put thoughts either italics or in quotation marks

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You're in a taxi.
-this is first person

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They have cake Jeff has milk and BIG SAUQ has barrys.

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Maya thought she is dumb but then Jenn made her happy because she was wondering what was wrong. Then Matt  saw it then he thought what was wrong.
-edit! this is a run-on sentence

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Bob thought ''yay another test''.
-place thoughts in italics or quotation marks

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I fell out of my bed.

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''You were like ahh when you saw the spider! Ha Ha Ha Ha.Your mom was so scared when you screamed.'' ''Your mom was like are you ok?And you said yes.''
- edit, there are too many quotions marks makes it confuising.

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It was time for the test, Jen was so scared! She hadn't been studying because she was at her brother's soccer practice.
-capitalization

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(They are talking about them selves.)
-this is not third person

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(Hmm... I wonder how many jelly beans she has in this jar.)
this is not third person

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you need to get your paper and draw anything
-capitalize and punctuation

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He is lying.

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(Hmm... I wonder what he is thinking about  (Hmm... I think he should stop day dreaming)
- this is not third person

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Tyra and Alana are both excited for their sleepover.
you need to write the thoughts of AT LEAST 2 people

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(I wonder what she is having for lunch?)(I might have pizza for lunch.)
this is not third person

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he thought whoop whoop its almost time for recess she thought yes almost time to go home.

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He is being mean.

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He went to the park with his new best friend and they had ice cream and he was happy

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there was a girl that loved her friends and her family.
capitalization

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Your feet are stuck in a sticky slime.

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She is happy with her work. Her mom was proud. She felt very happy.
-capitalization

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I lost my dog.

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Mrs.Doumas was nervous. It was her first day teaching at a new school." Will the students like me?!"
on the other side of town Alex was excited to have a new teacher. "i hope that she is nice!"

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He went with them to the park with  out a parent.
She and her friend were happy to go the ice cream story yesterday

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Addison thought is was so so so so hot outside.

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She is not happy about her grades. Her mom feels unhappy to she is going to get in trouble

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Addison thought is was hot. Jillthought it was cold
-these need to be separate thoughts/sentences

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He came home from school and got a balloon from has party.

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I went to the store.

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You are a beast.

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He got stuck in a long.
punctuation

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Ethan thought it was going to rain but it didn't rain.

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Bobby thought he was going to ride the unicorn.Toby was going to space.

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the teacher is teching ''I want to go home''. belinda is doing her homework''i want to know what is the dinner for today''.

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The kids in the class hide f n