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Your opening paragraph should clearly lay out your topic.

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-avoid generalizations;
do not abuse plot summaries

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-include transitions

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Avoid summarizing the plot (don't retell the story) and focus on analysing the story.

Include a clear statement that explains or justifies something important about the theme or the literature.

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-use relevant, strong and clear precise language

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a.      What am I arguing?

b.      What is my reasoning?

c.       How should I organize my reasons/evidence?

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☑ avoid summarizing the plot of the story

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☑ write in the present tense

☑ use the third person (keep yourself out of the literary analysis)

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DO NOT announce plans in clauses like these: « I will talk about… » or, «  I will discuss about … » Presenting your point directly.

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- Use pronouns to replace frequently repeated characters (he, she)

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- Do not go off subject/topic (stay in context) and try to not mix the order of the structure.

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-Use the present tense to make more strong/direct statement (usualy the topic sentence)

-Use the third person (and not you or I) to state and opinion more generalized or less subjective

-Use literary terms (direct vocabular) (theme, point of view, plot, protagonist, charcter...

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Once you've started your paper, using present tense, MAKE SURE you have not ping-ponged between present and past tense.

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Make sure the quote is properly introduced, stated and explained. Do not forget quotation marks and page number.

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- Develop convincing explanations.

- End with firm conclusion

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- Write in the third person

- Use literary terms

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- Use varied vocabulary

- Write in present tense

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Do not repeat the same idea since it will not give any more insight or information than the first time the idea is stated.

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Avoid repeating the same words multiple times, try to diversify your vocabulary.

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Avoid the use of contractions and prefer the use of a formal language over a more familiar language.

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- Stay on topic ( don't change the subject)

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- Make sure you keep the order of the structure of the paragraph.

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- Never use "I" or "you"
- Use transition words

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- Pay attention to the verb tense.

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- In the first explanation, always remember to be the most precise possible (when?, where?)

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- Never use "I", "You", "Us", "We" etc. It has to be formal.

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Try finding the best words to properly describe or help the point that you are trying to make.

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Make sure that your sentences aren't unnecessarily long.

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Edit your pragraphs and sentences to have strong and meaningful phrases.

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Avoid using empty words to deepen the meaning of the phrase

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Always use precise and rich vocabulary.

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Emily Bai, Mélia Venditto, Vivian Xin, Greta Zu

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Emily Bai, Mélia Venditto, Vivian Xin, Greta Zu

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Find quotes and examples beforehand (page numbers...)

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Emily Bai, Mélia Venditto, Vivian Xin, Greta Zu

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Emily Bai, Mélia Venditto, Vivian Xin, Greta Zu

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Relate back to topic sentence

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Emily Bai, Mélia Venditto, Vivian Xin, Greta Zu

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Emily Bai, Mélia Venditto, Vivian Xin, Greta Zu

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Use precise language, Be clear

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Emily Bai, Mélia Venditto, Vivian Xin, Greta Zu

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Emily Bai, Mélia Venditto, Vivian Xin, Greta Zu

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Write in the present tense

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-Use transition words
-Make sure to not repeat the same words many times (use synonyms)

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-Make sure that you answer “so what” in the analysis
-Use the precise (best) quote that represents the situation

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--Elaborate topic sentence

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-revise the structure of your paragraoh and make sure you put an analasis to justify your example

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-Be as precise as you can in your vocabulary

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-Search ways to elaborate your vocabulary