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Project Title: Elements
Good:
3x shoots completed-
1x Forest
1x Local Park
1x Yorkshire
Completed photographer write ups
Needs improvement:
Landscape photography needs editing

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Title: Envy
Good:
2x Shoots completed. Taken in Manchester Town. Parks, backstreets, Churches.

Needs improving: I Need to complete my 3rd shoot as it was not done to the way I wanted it to be.

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Project Title: The Land
Good:
3x shoots completed-
1x Forest
1x Local Park
1x Yorkshire
Completed photographer write ups
Needs improvement:
Landscape photography needs editing

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Title: Absent Minded
Good-
3 shoots completed, uploaded to weebly and annotated. Taken in Heaton Park, Prestwich Clough and back garden. First 2 shoots went well but the 3rd, I think, could have more long landscape images. 2 extra shoots in Prestwich Clough.

Needs improvement-
Find photographers to link to the 2 extra shoots, edit the images, upload to weebly and annotate.

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2 shoots completed
One shoot completed in London Town centre.
Other completed at boys nope park golf club.

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(from nowhere)
Good:
I did two successful shoots and one shoot that I needed to go back and re-shoot.

I shot in the style of Bill Brant, Ian Hoskin and Micheal Mckenzie.

improvements:
I am going to go and re-shoot so I can the edit and up load on weebly

edit the other pictures and upload and write up.

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2 Shots have been

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Annabelle Pearson           Good:-Completed 3 shoots, two in Chinatown and one in the area where I live and edited the pictures in response to artists. -Done write ups and annotation     Needs improvement:-Need to improve the annotation in more detail and explain what went wrong in one shoot, e.g the camera was on the wrong setting and I didn't use a tripod so some of the images were blurry. 

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Annabelle Pearson           Good:-Completed 3 shoots, two in Chinatown and one in the area where I live and edited the pictures in response to artists. -Done write ups and annotation     Needs improvement:-Need to improve the annotation in more detail and explain what went wrong in one shoot, e.g the camera was on the wrong setting and I didn't use a tripod so some of the images were blurry. 

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Title-Light after Dark

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Title: Side By Side

Good-
3 shoots completed Manchester city centre
afternoon before dark

Need to do-
artist research to be completed
write up of pictures to be completed

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Title:  good rant
good:

done three shoots in town near the huge buildings
done two write ups
made a Pinterest account so I can find photographs to relate and also ideas

needs improvement:

find 3 artist linked to my 3 shoots
edit my 3 shoots

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title - about as subtle as an earthquake.

good - completed 3 shoots (town, home, backstreets), good ideas like the artists I chose

needs improvement - more personal annotation of the shoots and artists, go to different places, go further and better more

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good:
completed 3 shoots
wrote about 2 artists who nspired my shoots
edited 3 pictures for my weebly
went to trainstation near me, picadilly station, and around manchester
wrote a breif description of what i am planning to do
will go to another trainmstation & bridge near me to do a 4th shoot

improvements:
edit more pictures
explain how my artist links to my shoot
shoot write up
forgot tripod for one shoot

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Good:
-Completed 3 shoots, and edited the pictures in response to artists.
-Done write ups and annotation

Needs improvement:
-Need to improve the annotation in more detail and explain wha went wrong in one shoot.

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Good:
2 shoots (1 needs redoing but second is good)
Good description of initial idea

Needs improvement:
Development of ideas based on outcome
A third shoot and possibly fourth one needed (can be done during the week - in local area eg )
Comparison of photos to original artist

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Good-
3 shoots completed, upload ed to weebly and

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Good:
2 shoots completed for project.
1 taken at Moses Gate Country Park.
The other taken near my house of streams.
Did a shoot for Helen Popinchalk
Did another shoot for Lewis Baltz because needed more responses.

Needs Improvement:
Need better artists for my independant project. (don't like the ones I found)

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Good-
3 shoots- 1sy one rubbish but other two ok-

will go back this week to

Needs improvement: