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Joseph Papandrea:
Glow: Your presentation was very detailed and easy to follow. The visuals were connected to what you had to say, and I liked how you included your personal job with working at the ticket sales of Seton Hall. It was nice to add this personal example in your presentation, as well as visualize it in your Sway.
Grow: I think your presentation had some great content in it, but believe it be easier to highlight important ideas with bullet points in place of paragraphs. While your thoughts flowed nicely, I think this would have made it easier for viewers to understand what key ideas were the ones they needed to truly focus on.

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Jenna Bellucci:
Glow: I really enjoyed your presentation and think you did a successful job at utilizing Sway while incorporating your ideas. I liked how you split your ideas up with few words in your visual tool, but expanded on them within your video. Your voice carried very well throughout the presentation, you paused when needed, and had great inflection throughout. Great job!
Grow: I think you did such a great job in including details from the book as well as your personal life. My only suggestion would be to add in the survey details in order to gain another perspective into your presentation. While your visuals and content were very strong, this would have added another angle for you to take a look at technology from.

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Shiman Wang:
Glow: I loved the visuals you had in your sway presentation, and think you did an excellent job in organizing your topics with your headings. Your perspective on technology was interesting and I liked how you supported your bullet points in your Sway, with further details in your video.
Grow: I would have loved to hear about your personal examples on technology in your work, personal life, and education. While you did an excellent job incorporating details on all three, they were a bit more general statements. I think using some personal examples would have helped connect you with the audience a bit better.

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Nicolette Curran:
Glow: I really enjoyed your sway presentation! The graphics and visuals were extremely appealing and I think you did a great job in including your own perspectives on creativity & technology, as well as summarizing others within your survey. I liked how you used excel charts to express survey answers, and how you set a question on how we can focus on fixing this for the future.
Grow: I really enjoyed your presentation, but if anything would say to cut your paragraphs into bullet points to make topics easier to highlight and follow. Your content was very strong, but as a visual device was a bit overwhelming to read everything at once.

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Myles Powell:
Glow: I really liked how you set up your presentation and made it very personal. You did not include many words on your PiktoChart, and only visuals, while you expanded on these topics within your video. I enjoyed this and think it made it much more relatable for viewers. I liked what you had to say and how you brought in your own personal experience on education from when you grew up.
Grow: Since your video displayed your face while you were presenting, I recommend focusing on strengthening your eye contact with the audience. I think including the video of your face made it much more interesting and personal, but eye contact and voice inflection would have helped strengthen the presentation as well.

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Cherise Hennigan:
Glow: I loved your presentation, and was very impressed with your Piktochart usage. I did not feel as comfortable using this tool, but it was very nice to see someone use it as their visual tool and I think it was very successful. Your ideas flowed very nice and I think you used inflection in your voice to present your topics very well. Everything was organized and clear, and I liked hearing about your honesty as an innovator.
Grow: I think your presentation had a perfect balance of visuals and content, however I would have loved to see you expand your ideas even further. You referenced the book and how it helped you rethink creativity, however I would have loved to hear specifics on how it was able to do this for you. Other than that I thought your presentation sounded great!

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Edina Raisin:
Glow: I think your presentation was very interesting and visually appealing! I like how you set up your sway with the clear individual headings, to divide each topic in an organized way. I also think you did a great job in explaining your perspective on not just technology, but creativity as well, within education & your personal life.
Grow: I really enjoy how you included the survey in your presentation. I would have loved to see this included a bit more throughout your presentation, and not just in one section. I also think it would have been much more appealing if your pie chart had numbers on it to see the comparisons much more clearly. Other than that I really enjoyed your presentation!

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Kasey Mitchell:
Glow: I really enjoyed your presentation especially the visuals you included! It was so great to have you mention the healthcare software you use at work, along with the pictures of them. It was something that made it much easier for the viewer to follow along. I also enjoyed hearing about your overall perspective on technology, including the positive and negative.
Grow: I think your perspective on technology within your work was very detailed, however I would have loved to hear you voice on creativity and technology in education. It seems like you have a very strong perspective on its positive and negatives, and would have loved to hear your voice on this on other angles.

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Matthew Smolen:
Glow: I really enjoyed your personal opinion on the healthcare industry. It was very interesting for me to gain insight into this industry, since it is not something I am very knowledgeable about.  I also like how descriptive you were with your ideas, like on specifying the details of the Epic software you use.
Grow: I thought your presentation was very interesting, but I think it would have been more appealing to have had bullet points instead of full paragraphs in your sway. It made it a bit more difficult to keep track of the key ideas and seemed like it took away from your own voice in the video.

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Keara Reilly:
Glow: I think you did an exceptional job at focusing on multiple different topics and expanding your own perspective on creativity across all of them. It was nice to see a summary in education, work, and your personal life, and how technology has impacted them all.
Grow: I would have liked to see more creative visuals and pictures within your sway presentation. While the content was there, it could have been a bit more visually appealing with more pictures added.

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Xiaoxie Zheng:                                                                                 Glow:The presentation is very informative and well-organized. I like the way you opening and you put the survey report on your presentation, which makes your statement more conversing. Great Job!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Grow:  My suggestion would be maybe you can try to use bullets to summarize the key point. Overall, Your presentation is great! I enjoyed watching that!

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Glow: I like your presentation. your voice and tone are great. Also you thesis is interesting for me. Overall ,good work!                                    Grow:  Your voice tone and speed was great. It was very clear for me to head your and I think  I don't have any critiques!                                                                                        -YING GAO