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Move in partnership with community to after citzens?

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M3 “We inspire and encourage acceptance” I don’t think that makes sense to inspire acceptance. Can we use a different word? 

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M3 “We inspire and encourage acceptance” I don’t think that makes sense to inspire acceptance. Can we use a different word? 

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Good to finally have a mission statement, but too wordy. More emphasis on involving the community and emotional needs of students. We need more translators.

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If you are responsible and respectful...do we need to add trustworthy?

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If you are responsible and respectful...do we need to add trustworthy?

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I like how we emphasize that creating responsible students is a home and school partnership

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While we do many of these thing?  What is school wide specific plan to implement these ideals?

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Maybe say “we strive to include... “ because it’s a mission statement not what we are doing but what we want to do.

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What does taking risks have to do with a culturally diverse community?

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Instead of telling students to celebrate their diversity, we should be celebrating diversity with them.

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Yes to “collaborative responsibility”

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Possibly remove "inspire" as it doesn't seem to fit in the sentence, based upon this definition: verb

1. fill (someone) with the urge or ability to do or feel something, especially to do something creative.

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Instead of “WHO” utilize creativity say “TO” utilize creativity

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Maybe remove the word inspire. It doesn't fit in the sentence

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A bit wordy to start off, but I love the message its trying to send.

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LOVE IT, but M1 is a bit wordy - does "in partnership with the community" need to be included?

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to empower (students to become)independent thinkers...

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I like how "trying your best leads to success" was added to the mission statement!

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M1 How are partnering with the community?

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Love the Trying your best leads to success!