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I made this mistake because I was to afraid to ask because I had a fixed mindset and that means that I didn't want to ask even though I knew I needed it. Next time I need to be brave and try to make effort in the assessment so instead of getting a 4 I need to aim for an 8

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I did a review opurtunity because I did not have alot of facts. I think I  rushed this a little and I did not focus alot. I can improve in this review oppurtunity mistake by taking my time and write detailed.

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He made the review opportunity mistake , because if he reviewed he could have used better vocabulary and used a better claim. He made the mistake because he did not apply his full attention to the work.
He can fix this by simply reading over his answer again and evaluating his claim to make it more specific.

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Bobby was rushing. I think he made  this mistake because he has very little information and doesn't
really go in depth or analyze the picture. To not make the same mistake we must double check our information  and work slowly and give in depth observations.

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1rushing
2 he looked at the photo once and wrote 2 sentences
3 not revving ( his claim seems very rushed )

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by not reviewing his work and not using the evidence on the picture.He also odid not look at the feedback that he got from the teacher.

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by not reviewing his work and not using the evidence on the picture.He also odid not look at the feedback that he got from the teacher.

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Rushing
The first mistake Bobby did was rushing his work because the quality of the work is limited because he does not have a lot of evidence to support his claim. Bobby also did not have a lot of facts which shows that his understanding of the picture is not good, making him not have a lot of information.
Reviewing his work
The second mistake Bobby did was reviewing his work becsue I feel like Bobby did not try to understand what he wrote. He did not focus on the work given because if he was focused, he would not have missed so many important details in the picture. He missed some obvious details like the cows, farmers, and many more important details. Nest time if Bobby focuses on his work, then he will not miss important details making him get a higher grade.

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He also made the slow down opportunity mistake because if he took more time he could've added more text to his explanation supporting the claim and to fix this mistake he could've take more time and worked slowly.

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Two mistakes that he did was that he rushed. I think he rushed because maybe he didn't want to do the work and he thought it was boring. You can see that he rushed because his work is very limited and it doesn't have enough evidence to support the claim. To avoid this mistake next time, he can check his work after he is done and add on more work to support his claim.