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Em Beasley
First, countless embryonic human beings were killed in the process that led to the live birth of these two genetically modified children. Like all so-called "assisted reproductive technologies," many more embryos are created than are implanted and subsequently delivered. The remaining embryonic human beings are either frozen in perpetuity or destroyed. This research poses an immediate threat to the right to life of the unborn.

The risks of the gene editing is many potential people are wasted. The ones that do make it you aren't actually sure are immune to HIV so you must test it and there's a chance you are wrong. The embryos that were made could have insecure if not dangerous side affects. The embryos could be bullied or look different from others. The other effects could be they might have other health issues maybe they get other diseases faster. There are many dangerous things that could happen when changing DNA. Not only can it cause harm to the children but also the mother giving birth to them. The mother can have birth problems more then normal because of the fact that the genes are edited.

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CRISPR is a device that carries molecular scissors and with those scissors it can cut up DNA. To get more information in the article “Just Because We Can Create Genetically Modified Babies Doesn't Mean We Should” Anderson states, “At issue is a developing biotechnology known as CRISPR-Cas9 that allows scientists to genetically edit cells. The technique holds potential to treat a variety of genetic disorder such as cystic fibrosis and sickle cell disease, as well as even more complex conditions such as cancers and heart disease.” This device gives people the opportunity to save them from any deadly infection or disease. CRISPR is also said to be very cheap and affordable. You would only need to buy the RNA molecules to make the changes and the good thing about it is that it is around thirty dollars to buy them.

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One strategy I used was while reading the article, I took down some quotes I felt answered the prompt and once I was ready to write, I decided which one to use.

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My strategy is to find quotes that stand out to me and all of the articles and write something that makes sense to me in my eyes

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Something I used to help me was going back and forth with the articles and my quote bank.

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CRISPR Cas9 is the newest way that scientists are using to edit genes and cells because they believe it will help with passing on genes like preventing sickle cell disease as well as even cancer. According to Morning edition, the way gene editing works is  “Scientists remove cells from patients' bone marrow and use CRISPR to edit a gene, which enables the cells to produce a protein called fatal haemoglobin” (2020). Hemoglobin helps produce a protein that patients dont have enough of so when producing more it is more of a chance to not have diseases.

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One strategy that helped me one having my notes organized and highlighting important things I needed to remember

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A strategy I used was looking back at my quote banks to figure out which piece of evidence I will use for each paragraph. Another thing that helped me was looking at my annotations on each article to help me remind myself what information was being told.

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A strategy that really helped was annotating the articles before that way i understood everything better, also the quote bank activity really helped me. 

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The strategy that I use for my essay is that I would come back to my quote bank and look at them, I will then understand and take one of the quotes from there. I also look at some elements in the sources to make my point stronger.

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After highlighting major points, I specified in the margins the specific types of risks or benefits the argument could be used for. Such as expanding on how the point would work from an ethical or medical perspective.

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One strategy that helped me was rereading my sources to fully understand the text and what was being said to help me paraphrase the quotes even better.

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One strategy that helped me was being able to reread the articles and being able to read over other assignments we had such as the quote bank assignment.

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A stragety that helped me was writing down notes as I read the article and making notes of the quotes I thought were important. Also going to tutoring helped me.

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One strategy that has helped was that going to tutoring and having Sara helping know how to do a structure for my paragraphs. Which makes it really simple to put together my paragraphs.

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One thing that I felt was very useful was going back and reading all of the articles to refresh my memory of all the benefits and risks that are coming with CRISPR CAS-9

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One strategy that helped me with this assignment was rereading all of the sources again to refresh my memory. By doing this, I was able to find quotes that I felt comfortable using in my own paper.

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Going back to the quote bank the rereading the specific paragraphs helped me while paraphrasing.

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One strategy I used was I looked over my notes to help me add on to my paragraph. Annotating the article really helped me find my quotes and other information.

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One very effective strategy for me was immediately writing down quotes and annotations about articles until the quote bank was introduced!! It is a much more organized version of mine. This helped me tremendously in the sense that I didn't have to search for the quote and which section of the article it was from, this way the quote and my notes on the subject were already written down. I'm concerned much more on the biological standpoint of CRISPR. For example, if all seems well in the experiment in the first years of life, what about the potential of a nonreversible mutation arising later in life? I say that because multiple articles we read in class mentioned how germ-line editing can affect future generations. Think of this from the emotional perspective of those who would be affected, nobody has a right to tell someone to not procreate and it is also unfair that these people who were experiments literally had no say in the matter. I read an article by Dayan who provided moral, ethical and religious insight while providing facts like this “Thus the ethical concerns regarding the germ-line editing is the center of debate due to its effective application in the germ cell, as it can affect the newer generation, since the genetic substance are being passed from one generation to the next generation through the sex cells "CRISPR does not cut the genome cleanly but causes considerable damage, and that as the body repairs the damaged new mutations may be introduced ” (Dayan)

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Something that helped me write this paragraph was focusing on what type of risk I wanted to do. After that the quotes came easy to find to match with what my paragraph was about.

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As technology evolves we get into new fields such as crisper but it they come with plsdi

a few risks here ill explain a few of them.
Bradley says One probably the biggest fear of CRISPR.
Humans manipulating the genetic code, and those manipulations get passed on generation to generation to generation. We think we know what we’re doing, we think we’re measuring exactly what changes we’re doing to the genes, but there’s always the possibility that either we miss something or our technology can’t pick up on other changes that have been made that haven’t been directed by us. And the fear then is that those changes lead to antibiotic resistance or other mutations that go out into the population and would be very difficult to control. Basically creating incurable diseases or other potential mutations that we wouldn’t really have control over.
,Bradley goes on to state  ." A series of studies have suggested that CRISPR may cause cells to lose their cancer-fighting ability, and that it may do more damage to genes than previously understood." Bradley goes on to say “It is important that anyone thinking of using this technology for gene therapy proceeds with caution, and looks very carefully to check for possible harmful effects,”

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One strategy that helped me was taking notes as I read my stories and write down ideas that I knew I wanted to talk about and also referring back to previous assignments such as the word bank.

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One strategy that I used was to make sure that I focused on my topic argument. This means when I added my quote it related to my topic.

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One strategy that helped me was rereading the article as well as annotating. I didn't have a good memory of the details of the article.

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A strategy that I used was taking notes that further proves the risk of CRISPR-Cas9. Also, I used quotes that goes well with the topic of the paragraph and after that I explain the risk of CRISPR or dive in depth with the quote.

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Genetically modifying cells to ones liking seems to have more issues rather than good. Anderson explains how such research threatens human dignity, creating obstacles to social justice, and requires the destruction of human embryos creating "embryonic human beings." He demonstrates how children should be produced through sexual reproduction rather than technology. (Anderson). Also, there have been a series of studies shown that CRISPR-9 may cause cells to lose their cancer-fighting ability. Many talk about the positives of modifying ones genome, but what is the potential long term effects? CRISPR genome editing can result in unwanted heritable genetic changes. This can ultimately cause mutations elsewhere in the genome such as "off-target" modifications.

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what helped me with this assignment was reading the sources and deciding what makes CRISPR CAS 9 risky.

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One strategy that I used to help me through the process of writing this paragraph was slowly introducing the risk and then beginning a sentence and seeing which part of my quote was best to fit into the sentence. Once I figured placed it in a way which sounded grammatically correct, I proceeded to provide the author. Also, I looked back at the quote bank where I had already gathered  risks of CRISPR CAS-9, and paraphrased some important details that I didn't feel like fitting it in as a full quote.

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Personally, it helped me to write the full quote as a placeholder to map out how I wanted to effectively paraphrase the quote. Then I substituted my own vocabulary and ensured I gave credit to the proper source.

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One strategy that really worked well for me was writing down in separate notes about the topics I wanted to discuss so it would be easier for me to implement them in my actual writing.

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one strategy I used was referring back to previous discussion boards and going over notes I had taken on points I wanted to make in my essay. 