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That was really persuasive

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it made me sad to see

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good presentation and very touching words

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u should let rubi talk more but great job breanna and rubi

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u should let rubi talk more but great job breanna and rubi

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that was persuading, im joining your oranization

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I like how you added personal expierence into your presentation , it was really persuasive,  and your vocabulary was great, and i support your cause

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try to not to sound like a robot love your topic try not to read to fast breanna very sad video

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your topic really hit close to home and I will support you cause

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good job!!!

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i loved how you put the song with your presentation. the song was right it shouldnt hurt to be a child we are children we should be allowed to be happy and free not be afraid to be hit or neglected. thank you.

SIMPLY STUNNING.

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i like how you actually were persuading us by telling a real story that happened to you,the whole thing persuaded me.

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I support your idea Your emotions really bring out the idea of child abuse AMEN

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I support your idea. You really persuaded me. Although you should try to read less from the laptop, count me in to help! I also really liked the song you included to go with your speech.

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Ruby and breanna(Srry if i spelt that wrong)

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Ruby and breanna(Srry if i spelt that wrong)

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sound less like a robot..Use more persuasive tone Both of you But i fully support!
These kids are Treated badly By their parents or family, you are right on the fact that we should report it to the police , as i said out loud i have went to a school with teachers That treated the kids badly (not me) But one of my friends because She wouldn't concentrate on here work shesh.

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like the way the music goes with the flow

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great jop

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I think it was good that they engaged with the audience. Adding the music was a good idea and the video really helped bring to light what is happening in the world.

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try not to read from the paper to much

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Your vocabulary was great and nice song to go along with your presentation

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I really like how you added the music to go with your topic. Your speech was really persuasive and I really like your decision in helping homeless people. Count me in to help!

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THE TONE OF VOICE

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simply stuning

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i like how you gave examples of how it can help the homeless peolpe

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good use of the video i can feel the peoples pain i was once a victme of depression

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mar and anime

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you guys realy wer awsome and that video was so informational

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It was a good thing that you put the video of what depression is You both did a good job

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I'm speechless but at the same time  I can't stop talking about it. And for that you have my support

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I like how you included a video to go with your topic. And I really like your choice of words. Although you could've spoke a little more, it was persuasive to me.

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I like how you explained what depression is and your vocabulary was great

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good presentation

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that was exteemly persuasive this topic is usually looked over, because it is usually looked over as just being sad or just being lazy to find an excuse to just do nothing, but the depressed are just people who have problems that need to be tend to. You have my full support on this topic thank you, THANK YOU for adresing this topic it would really help people in ways more than one.  Marisol REMEMBER TO TALK!!!!

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It was a good thing that you put the video of what depression is You both did a good job and remember DONT BE AFRAID TO SPEAK

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i like your topic

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good word choice

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only 2 words too describe this Pure Greatness

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your cause is heart shattering and I am on your side.

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I like your choice of words, and the music you added to your slides. The music and your choice of words went together. ADVICE: To add more emotion to it, try to smile less. :D

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Great word choise and its very persuasive.

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i the way you explain and gave some details how to help the hunger kids

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The music went perfectly to what you were saying Yaĺl were all so confident You persuaded me count me in GREAT JOB

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it was a good persuasion when you were using your tone with the music =persuasive

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thank you for adressing this topic you connected anger and bullying.

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reallly good words

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it was good but you need more details

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I'm interested in your choice of topic. Your slides were really helping me visualize angry kids, and I found it a little funny.

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you were addressing a topic that is usually not addressed which helps children a lot. Uses a lot of exap

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mark is acco

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It was kind of persuasive but i think it was still good when you used the tone ,that was persuasive.

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Good job on the slides you

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good

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to fas

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good job!!

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Your word choice was amazing. I would want to join your group.

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good tone

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your very persuasive on how you used you your word choi

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i like the way you started and how Alexa gave and example of her selfr

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I liked how you were

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the tone in  her voice but alexa is talking to fast but still great word choice and love the way you answered alyssa back you didnt say maybe or any thing like that you spoke directly to her

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alexa and dallena  is was god u need more dealti

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alexa and dallena  is was god u need more dealti

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lots of examples uses calps

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good word choice

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I like your vocabulary and

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this is a topic that needs more help. this topic really helps children who have no education. thank you for adressing this.

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Word choice is good as well as the ;p

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I like your topic, and persuasion words.

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Very good presentation. I would love to join. You both seemed very confident and you both