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$ My link
$ Talking more about the symbols
$Well I have to many words so yeah I need to shorten my paragraph

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• Spelling
• remove unnecessary sentence
• add examples in Link

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Take account feedback
Include all of it
Change lunk
Check grammar

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- Apply all the feedback
- Proofread the paragraph and read it aloud
- Get someone else to proofread the paragraph

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Listen to feed back.

Improve by using feedback

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- I will implement my feedback to improve my paragraph
- I will make sure that my paragraph adheres to the criteria
- I will proof-read my paragraph to make sure there are no mistakes

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check my spelling and grammar
take in account all of my feedback
make sure I have tried my best

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Three things that I need to do:

- clearly identify the point, explanation and link

- make sure my PEEL paragraph is free from punctuation, grammatical & spelling errors

- properly explain the meanings of symbols

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Do some corrections

Explain for all examples

Do some editing.

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-Get feedback from my teacher
-Do all the feedback teacher gave me

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Add more detail to examples of visual language (sepia colour tone)
Have a better linking sentence
And sum up the message in more depth.

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-Address all the feedback
- Fix spelling errors
- Fix link
- Otherwise leave as is

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- apply all feedback
- check spelling and punctuation
- proofread or ask someone else

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I have to rewrite my link
I have

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- Use feedback to improve the paragraph
- Make sure I check and read aloud to find any errors
- Ask a family member to proofread to make sure it is free of errors.

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- spelling and punctuation
- explaining visual language
- explaning symbols

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~ Apply all the given feedback to my paragrah
~ Proofread and it
~ Ask someone to proofread it

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Check my grammar and read out my paragraph before submitting

Write in present tense

Rewrite my link

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Use feedback to improve
Ask my friends to read it
Check grammar and punting

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-Take account of feedback
-Correct spelling
-Change Link