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i think you copyed this off the internet

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i think you copyed this off the internet

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Would like to hear your own thoughts and ideas.

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Its not very persuasive. Your only talking about information.

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don't forget, you are trying to persuade us that it is the best invention ever

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don't forget, you are trying to persuade us that it is the best invention ever

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you were mostly looking at your page

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talk more about why we need the wool spinner

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talk more about why we need the wool spinner

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Too much history and facts that don't tell us why it's important invention. 

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Too much history and facts that don't tell us why it's important invention. 

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Would have made this section much much shorter as it doesn't support why it's important and is not interesting to your audience.

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not a lot of persuading

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too little pictures

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Maybe try making bigger connections to why making clothe is important. And how doing it faster made life better.

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you need more eye contact

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 i like how you spoke loudly and clearly

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 i like how you spoke loudly and clearly

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A lot speaking on history and no pictures

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A lot speaking on history and no pictures

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Clothes allowed us to live more easily in cold places. Especially wool which is very warm.