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It was a sunny evening the sun was setting and it was beautiful.two brothers were laughing and having the best last day of summer ever they were wrestling brian put joey in a headlock and threw him on the ground. jumping and running, laughing, having so much fun on there trampoline. brian laughed when joey slipped off the the trampoline . BOYS dinners ready!the boys jumped off and fell on the ground they got up and brushed the dirt off their clothes.race you there said one of the boys 1 2 3 GO the boys ran to the clear sliding doors and ran to the table and hopped in there chairs.what's for dinner said the boys Food their mom answered what type of food EDIBLE FOOD ugh fine said the boys  Dinner was over and the boys watched their favorite cartoon until about 9:00”it's time for bed boys”there dad said “cmon just a little longer”said the boys their mom answered with a NO and they went up stairs brushed their teeth got there pj’s on got in bed.UGH said one of the boys what's wrong said the other I can't fall asleep,Same i'm too excited for tomorrow!The boys were up till 12:00 talking.

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BEFORE                                                                                                                                                              It was a sunny afternoon last day of summer the sun was starting to set the 2 brothers  were jumping on the trampoline having so much fun.There mom called them in for dinner.They had a nice family talk at the dinner table.It came that time they needed to go to bed.they put on their pajamas and got in bed.

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BEFORE                                                                                                                                                              It was a sunny afternoon last day of summer the sun was starting to set the 2 brothers  were jumping on the trampoline having so much fun.There mom called them in for dinner.They had a nice family talk at the dinner table.It came that time they needed to go to bed.they put on their pajamas and got in bed.

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when we read the giver almost every day we would do a reflection on how we felt about what we read that day

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showing not telling is mostly used in stories you wont usually find it in a work email or any serious related things. showing not telling is a way for the reader to feel apart of the story.

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reflecting can show you a lot of things. It can show you how far you have come in writing, what you need to improve on, where you are in writing like what level of proficient.

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being thorough is a HUGE part of writing maybe one of the biggest, because when your writing thoroughly you see how much you have improved. when people dont write thoroughly it is hard to follow because when you dont write thorough then your writing sounds choppy and it kinda jumps all over the place.

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As you can probably tell that  the first email from fireworks three is longer but not as thorough and does not have as much punctuation as the email in fireworks 6.  Thats is just a very brief explanation of how far i've come in just a couple of months!

Weekly emails are a great way to write what your learning and what your struggling with. It is also a great way to learn how to write an email, email writing is a big factor in becoming a better writer. It can help with punctuation,reflecting, etc. reflecting is also a HUGE part in writing because every time you reflect on your writing or reading you can see what you need to improve on. It is good to learn about writing skills early because you have to use it through out your whole life.

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FIREWORKS 6

Weekly email

5/2/17

This week I have learned about all sorts of stuff and I will tell you about all of them and all my classes, let's start in geography.

Today in geography we worked on our project. The project is where you pick a country in the western hemisphere and learn the who,what,where,when,why and how about the country and background information to support your claim. My group and I  are doing venezuela and why all the rioting and protesting is going on. All of this is happening because the former president nicolas maduro is trying to get rid of the democracy and start a dictatorship. The people don't like that so they riot so the president can't start the dictatorship. NEXT.

In math were learning about the total surface area of a cube. So far it's pretty easy but we're only doing squares and rectangles right now so it can get way harder. THAN. In science were doing a lab but i'm not sure what about because I wasn't here yesterday for science. Finally. In language arts were doing a final project and i'll leave a link of it below. That's all for this week!

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FIREWORKS THREE

1/24/17

Title:weekly email

This week in social studies we are learning about stocks and companies we each chose a company to research and learn about.I chose seagate I chose this because I thought it would be fun to learn more about what my dad does.we learned about stocks and how much money we would get if we invested shares into that company five years ago.

This week in language arts we are reading the book “the giver”.I really like this book it's super duper thorough and descriptive and good word choice.yesterday we talked about different perspectives and what world we're building in our stories.Im making a story about a world with no rules i'm not sure how i'm going to write it but i'm kinda excited to wright it.the genre is dystopian,dystopian is a story that isn't real or a crooked world For example hunger games is one.

In math the past week were learning about patterns and how to solve them it's pretty easy.I don't have much to say about math except that I really enjoy it and mrs.Benjamin makes math a lot easier.

In science we have had a sub for the LONGEST time it seems like.We did a lab and we made poisonous slime it was super fun and weird.science is pretty easy right now but I don't know what to expect.

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In the beginning of 6th grade I still wasn't using punctuation. I still didn't know how to write thorough , I didn't know what thorough  meant!But about A month later Mrs. Cribby started talking with us about something called “Showing not telling” Us students had no idea what she was talking about. And then she started putting it in the fire ups and we all had to use it in a story. When I made my first story using showing not telling I thought I was so good. It was so much better than my old stories. But Mrs cribby said I still need to work on it. So I wrote a lot of rough drafts and short stories to practice showing  not telling. I finally got better and I started to use it in my writing all the time. But then about a week or two later Mrs. Cribby started talking about how to be a better writer and how to write thoroughly. We talked about being thorough for a while. She helped us learn it but about two weeks later she let us go on our own and try to make a story with the tools we have learned. Over time we learned how to write thoroughly and we all got really good at it! Eventually we talked about Dialogue,reflecting ,and more. We have learned a lot and we have come very far from where we began.  

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In the beginning of 6th grade I still wasn't using punctuation. I still didn't know how to write thorough , I didn't know what thorough  meant!But about A month later Mrs. Cribby started talking with us about something called “Showing not telling” Us students had no idea what she was talking about. And then she started putting it in the fire ups and we all had to use it in a story. When I made my first story using showing not telling I thought I was so good. It was so much better than my old stories. But Mrs cribby said I still need to work on it. So I wrote a lot of rough drafts and short stories to practice showing  not telling. I finally got better and I started to use it in my writing all the time. But then about a week or two later Mrs. Cribby started talking about how to be a better writer and how to write thoroughly. We talked about being thorough for a while. She helped us learn it but about two weeks later she let us go on our own and try to make a story with the tools we have learned. Over time we learned how to write thoroughly and we all got really good at it! Eventually we talked about Dialogue,reflecting ,and more. We have learned a lot and we have come very far from where we began.  