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I would make it more detailed and if I was allowed make it longer and more then one prompt.

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I would make my writing better by making it in PEEL format so that it’s more organized. I would also use better transition words since mine doesn’t seem that formal.

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I believe that if I were to redo or revise my writing assignment, I would add more evidence to support my claim. I retold the story more than I explained my point, so I need to work on that.

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I would organize it better so it is more clear. Also I would have someone proof read it for errors.

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I would re-read it a couple of times to check for mistakes in my writing. I would also make it a little more detailed.

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I would make it more detailed, or longer. It was hard to fit the entire conflict and all of the complex pieces included into one stuffed paragraph. I would have done a larger peel paragraph, or something that could fit what I wanted to write.

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I would keep most the same and add slight detail on some writing

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I would try to stay more on topic for the question and have a more organized way. I would also try to make a plan before jumping into the writing.

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I would make sure i would revise and read all of my answers and make sure that I would start with the first few words of the question

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I would try to make my writing more detailed and less vague about the story details.

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I would try to organize it better by using PEEL. I would also try to pull citations from the book rather then just repeating what happened.

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I would have someone proof read it to make sure it’s the best it can be. I would also write it in a peel format and not the way we did it.

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I would use more of the book to add more detail and make it longer for more information

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I would improve the format and punctuation of my writing pice

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I would add more detail and periods.

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I think I need to go more into detail and maybe a little shorter.

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I could improve my Summer Reading writing assignment by putting quotes directly from the book and shortening my writing style. These two things would make my writing concise and compelling.

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I would add like more difficult words and more details

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If I were to redo my assignment I would make it have more evidence. I would also make it longer.

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I would use more descriptive adjectives and use more detailed explanations to explain the events from my book. In addition, I would make the explanation of the book a bit shorter.

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I would use a lot more detail in my writing, and I would stop making some of my sentences run on sentences.

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I would edit it more to look for mistakes. I would also add more advanced vocabulary.

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If I were to redo my project I would add more detail and evidence. I would probably also make it into a PEEL paragraph to practice more.

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Next time I would improve my grammar and spelling. I would also triple check my work to make sure everything is good such as my punctuation and more.

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I would add more details and improve my format