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I bounded out of my house in high spirits. I was in a buoyant mood. I could not wait to get to the park and have some fresh air.

When I reached the park, tall trees towered into the sky. A gentle breeze blew and sent a rustle to the leafs. While I was admiring the nature, a loud scream pierced the air. I rushed to the incident, eager to see what was going on. When I reached the crowd of people, I pushed my way through and saw that an elderly lady had fainted. But after ten minutes, the elderly lady still had not woken up.

I began to get worried. I took out my mobile phone and called for an ambulance. My hands were trembling. My stomach was in an icy knot. ''What if the ambulance does not make it on time?'' I said as wild thoughts raced through my mind.

When the ambulance arrived, the passerbys helped load the elderly lady into the ambulance. I was relieved to know that the elderly lady was going to be okay. the memory of this incident will be etched in my mind for a long time.

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sometimes I think AI is troubling because I don't understand what I am ment to do and I do not like typing out a whole compo just for an answer that take three seconds

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yes, it has improved my writing but sometimes it makes mistakes. It just searches for information online

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It was a sunny afternoon, I went to the playground to play with my friends. Suddenly, a elderly lady fell on the ground and started shaking. My friends and I quickly ran to the elderly lady to check if she was okay. I saw the elderly lady's face turned as white as a sheet and she was unwell.

I asked the elderly lady." Do you need me to call for an ambulance?" The elderly lady immediately accepted the help after that.She fainted.

My friends and I quickly took the elderly lady to a bench and called for an ambulance.After the elderly lady was taken by the ambulance, my friends and I decided to go home.After I go home,I immediately told my parents about it.

After the incident that had happened at the playground, I learned that helping other people is helping myself and it made other people and I happy.

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"Ow,I think my leg is hurt"One sunny day,An elderly lady was just walking around the playground when she trip and fell.she closed her eyes and her head went blank.

A man was walking past by and saw the elderly lady laying on the ground.He immediately offered to help by using his mobile phone to called the ambulance.

After a while,the ambulance reach the playground and saw the elderly lady still laying on the ground. An ambulance worker said,"her leg was broken because her bone was cracked but she has a 50% that she can still walk."said the ambulance

worker.

They send the elderly lady to the hospital for one week or two.

After all the problem,he just called it a day.After that,he went to sleep until somebody knock on his door."knock knock." He went downstairs to check.out of the blue.he open the door and saw flowers and a note on his doorstep.the note said,"Thank you for everything."

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The cotton wool clouds were floating in the vast blue sky. The sun was shining like a golden nugget. Sweat trickled down my forehead as I was walking to the mall to buy something.

Finally, I made it to the mall. A cold breeze caressed my face. I heaved a sigh of relief as I headed to one of the stores. While walking, I suddenly noticed a phone on the ground.

I did not know whose phone that was. I needed to make a decision fast. I could leave the phone or take it and give it to one of the staff. I was in a dilemma. I did not know what to do. However, I did not have much time to waste. I quickly grabbed the phone and rushed to find a staff.

The staff made an announcement,"I have a missing phone. If you are the owner, please go to the phone shop at Level one."

We waited for the owner to come. Eventually, the owner came. She was an elderly lady. She recognised her phone immediately and took it right away.

"Who found this phone?" the lady asked.

"This man right here," the staff replied.

The lady thanked me profusely. I was proud that I was able to help someone. Even though there may not be a reward, you should still be kind to others. This is an incident I would never forget!

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One day, I walked around the coridor, then I saw A elderly lady and greeted her then I saw alot of bruses on her arm and ask what happend "Nothing Dont worry chilled"the man ran to me and sead, then after the random guy left I immediatly offered to help. I took out my mobile phone and called for an ambulance. When the ambulance arrived the elderly women fainted right on that spot, I tried to do CPR but it failed then I heared a siron and Shouted 'HELLP US" "WHERE ARE YOU " the doctor shouts. Then, he spots us and ran to help. Then I saw someone behind me and tried to poison me but the doctor saved us in time and brought the elderly lady in the ambulance. I was frightened because I thought that she wold never came back . After 10 years,she came back and thanked me for saving her life

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Did you enjoy using AI for improving your writing

What did you learn through using AI

How has your writing improved?

Any other thoughts about using AI

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Dear Students,

Please type out your writings and share them with the class based on the marks you got for content.

This is not to shame anyone, but for all of us to learn together about what makes a story interesting and on topic.

All of you have been constantly improving, so am I proud of every single one of you. Keep up the good work.

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It was a sunny morning , I ate breakfast and take a morning walk . I went to the park and take a stroll. I drank some water and starts walking , suddenly . I saw an elderly lady who looked unwell . i immediately offered to help the elderly lady.

I used my mobile phone and called for an ambulance . I asked the elderly lady to walk slowly to the nearest bench . She was having a headache and fever .I quickly take out a towel from her bag and poured water on the towel .

The ambulance came and bring her to the hospital . They put her in the ambulance and rushed to the hospital immediately she reached the hospital and the doctors give her medicine make her feel better . The elderly lady went to buy some food and drinks from to the nearest shop . She went back to her hospital bed and starts munching on the food .

The elderly lady thanked me , because I helped her and tried my best to do what I can do .

''Thank you for helping me !''

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One sunny morning, I was strolling through the park finding my way to ntuc. I found my way out and went to ntuc to buy some milk. I went in, bought some milk and made my way out. As I was going home, I saw a lady, she looked unwell."I dont think she is that sick." I said.

I continued walking and turned back a few times, the last time I turned back, I saw her laying on the ground! I turned back ran towards her and immediately offered to help, but by then, she was unconcious!

I used my mobile phone to call the ambulance, but they took forever so I was going to call them again, but then they reached on time. They took the lady to the hospital and found out she had a heat stroke, so after three days, she made it out alive.

i was so proud of myself that I saved someones life, as a reward, I decided to get ice cream for myself and everyone lived happily ever after.

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The golden sun danced on rooftops flooding the streets with warmth and light. It was the kind of day that you would want to linger outside, soaking in every ray.

Meanwhile, I was taking a stroll at the park, humming a song while tapping on my hips, following the rhythm of the tune. Suddenly, I see an old woman trip on a small rock, stumble and fall face-first on the hard and rough ground. The old woman groaned in pain while she held her throbbing head.

As soon as I saw that, my heart nearly skipped a beat. I immediately checked on her to see if she was okay but it did not look like something I could treat. I reached for the phone in my pocket to call an ambulance.

Minutes later, paramedics came to her aid. A paramedic told me that if I did not have called the them, the old woman could have suffered a severe concussion. The ambulance brought the old woman to the hospital. I wished the woman good luck and made my way home. I proud as a peacock and grinning from ear to ear knowing I had saved someone.

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[too long, didn't read: a grandma overworked her self and went to the hospital and kinda...died..]

There was once an old lady that used to live near my street. Her name was Mithy. She had no one except her dog, who was not all that much of help. She was your typical "sweet-but-alone" grandma. She did not look healthy either. And one day...that would be a problem.

Apparently, the story went like this. Mithy loved to bake and help. So, when people needed help, her face would have been like she won the lottery, or have gotten the three sevens while gambling. So, on a fateful day, when someone needed help baking a lot of cookies for a wedding, she was very overjoyed. So, apparently, she was as busy as a bee. Cookies? check. Cupcakes? check. She had been overworking herself until she...collapsed.

She suddenly collapsed, weak. She, at the time, did not know what was happening. Then she had a bright idea. Her phone! If she could call the ambulance, then maybe..just maybe..she could somehow live. So, with the little strength she has, she got her phone and called 911. she should at he operater, saying her house address, and to call the ambulance. now, all she had to do was wait, before she loses consciousness.

"WEE WOO WEE WOO!!!" The ambulance arrived. But still, deep down, I know shes looking down on us, happy that were not the ones dead.

moral of the story:don't overwork yourself.

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"Help me! Please..." An elderly woman said. She was in pain, people were watching her stressing out until one lady who was kind enough asked if she was okay. The elderly woman yelled in pain, The other lady was worried sick and quickly called the hospital saying, "Help! There's an elderly woman in pain!" The nurse, understanding quickly, sent out an ambulance to their location.

The paramedics quickly carried her into the ambulance, unaware that she had a sickness.

The paramedics rushed her into one of the rooms to check what had happened to her. They suspected that she was having a heart attack. They performed an x-ray and gave her some pills.

The paramedics took her for another check and found something that looked like a stone in her body. They told her to take a certain medicine. They only wanted to give her that medication so that they could could perform a surgery and take out the stone. She actually woke up feeling great.

The paramedics, seeing her, felt relieved. They sent her home, finally getting rest. The woman was home safe and sound.

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One Sunny day, I was going to buy grocery since the food in my house was running out. I decided to go alone since my mother just woke up and wanted to drink her daily kopi, i also did not want to trouble her. so i brought an umbrella since it was as hot as fire

As soon as I step outside, i opened my umbrella and closed the door gate. i was going down the stairs and planned to walk to the supermarket. after a few minutes, I finally arrived at the supermarket. All I could feel was the cold aircon.

After I finally bought the items I needed. i went to the exit, suddenly I saw a women looking like she was having an asthma attack so i rushed to her side and asked where was her inhaler. she pointed too her bag, after she took a puff. she finally breathed a sigh of relief

She thanked me for saving her life and gifted me a $50 dollar bill. I kindly declined but she insisted too give it to me, so i took it and went home, after i came home, i explained too my mother everything.

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One sunny morning ,I was on my way to school , passing by the usual donut store , while cutting through the park to school ,something caught my attention .

An old woman was sitting on a park bench looking unwell but it was already seven ,twenty five , if I helped her I would be late for school! The park is usually as empty as a clear box on a weekday morning ,so sparing no thought I dashed as quick as lighting towards her.

I checked if she was okay first .then , I took out my phone and called an ambulance . Next I waited for the ambulance when the ambulance came I sprinted to school .

even though I was late for school I was glad I had helped the old lady because I appeared in the news tonight

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i got 5 marks for content and language.

One sunny day, I was at home with grandma watch news. It was boring so I went to my room to play with my toys. after that my grandma helped me pour a cup water to drink, but when she was pouring water she suddenly fell, I immediately went out of my grandma fell.

I immdiately call the ambulance using my mobile phone. the ambulance arrived at home to bring my grandma to the hospital.

In the night, my family finish ther work so they went to check out on my grandma. I told them "I was playing with my toys and then she fell down but then my grandma told them one more thing' I was trying to help you pour some water ." she said. so then now know we happen.

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yes it was really fun it taught me some punctuation and made me get more marks and better grammar.

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One sunny morning in June,I saw an elderly lady walking around the block.The elder lady looked unwell.

suddenly,she fall on the fall.I immediately offered to help.I used a mobile phone and call an ambulance .

5 minutes later ,the ambulance arrived .The doctor brought the elderly lady to the hospital.At the hospital,the doctors were caking her and said she had a fever.

I told her not to come out if she was sick.She did not know that she was sick.thats why she went out.

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uh I don't think AI really helped me or anything I learnt some phrases through using AI I don't think my writing improved but I only used some phrases in my writing

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yes

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It was a sunny morning, I was jogging at the park when an elderly lady came and sat down at the bench. i could tell by the look on her face that she was not feeling well and looked dizzy. I just ran off like nothing happened and just kept seeing things.

hours later I went up to get water as I lost my water bottle the other day at the park when I kept thinking about the same elderly lady over and over again. when I was near my house, I took one glance to check if the elderly lady was there, but when I saw her, her body was lying there, like there was no blood or anything in her body. I just went home and grab a glass of water, "ah." that refreshing iced cold water felt like something that I felt before.

before I went out. I went to grab a snack so I could feed my stomach and get more energy while I was running . I was munching on my food while I closed my door.

on my way down, I just kept munching. "mhm." this snack is really good! I thought to myself. when I was downstairs of my building, I quickly went to ask the elderly lady if she was alright. she did not say anything and I was scared. so I quickly went and called an ambulance.

when the ambulance came, I said: " sir , please help her!" they then carried her to the ambulance and drove her away. this was my learning lesson to always trust your guts.

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One night, an elderly lady, named Rosa, was taking her dog for a walk in the park. Her dog's name is Honey. Honey loved night walks in the park. They met the usual people. But that one night, everything went downhill.

Rosa brought Honey for their usual night walk but Rosa was not feeling well. She had a fever but she still went out. Suddenly, Rosa fainted to the ground and collapsed. Honey did not know what to do so he just barked for help, hoping someone would come. For the past ten minutes, no one came to the rescue.

Suddenly, one of Rosa's friends, Amalia, came to the rescue. Amalia was just just going out to buy her cat's food. " Oh my gosh! I need to call for an ambulance right this second! " Amalia grabbed her phone from her pocket and called the ambulance. more and more people came. They waited for five minutes but it felt like forever.

After awhile, the ambulance came everyone stepped back to give them space. They did CPR and other measures to try to bring her back. Rosa started breathing and everyone was relieved. " Rosa you scared me! " Amalia exclaimed. They questioned Rosa on what had happened and she said she was feeling sick and had a fever. " Next time if you are feeling sick, just let me know and i will bring Honey for his walk. " After

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kinda

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one afternoon I was bored at home so I was planning to go camping at the park I tell my parents if we can do that my parents say yes

I was excited to go there so we were all getting ready to go there we were all in the car and my dad is starting the engine when we are at the we saw an elderly looked unwell after a moment she begin to faint my father immediately offered to help

he used a mobile phone to call for an ambulance.

the ambulance arrived on time and bring the lady to the hospital at the hospital the doctor say she unwell the lady woke up and say thank you to us and we appreciate it the lady is well now

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One breezy morning, an elderly lady, Nina, was going for her daily stroll as it was relaxing.The sounds of birds chirping peacefully could be heard and the wind blew gently.

Just then, Nina tripped over a rock laying on the sidewalk with a loud thud.Her heart was beating faster and faster the more stressed she was.A young man, Max saw what happened and bolted towards Nina, immediately offering for help.The elderly lady was pale-looking and weak.Max took out his phone quickly dialled in the number an ambulance.

After a few minutes, the ambulance arrived with the piercingly loud siren.A group of doctors rushed out of the ambulance and carried Nina into the ambulance with no hesitation.One of the doctors even reported to Nina's family about what had happened to make sure that they are aware.

Shortly after, the family arrived to visit Nina.Tears welled up kin their eyes and rolled down their puffy cheeks, worried about Nina.At the end of the day, she learned to be more cautious when taking a stroll.Nina also thanked Max for helping her.Nina even gave some home-made chocolate chip cookies as a reward.The chocolate melted in his mouth like a warm hug and Max was grinning' from ear to ear.

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No its no use.

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AI helped me learn new phrases but sometimes AI makes me more confused than I was before asking AI for help.For those who are upset with their marks the past is the past and now you can do better for the future

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It was a sunny morning, Ava was going to school. Before she went to school, her mother said, ''Ava! since I have forgotten to pack your lunch, you may take some food from the coffee shop nearby'' Ava was full of joy! she had always been wanting to try the butter toast. Ava was happily walking until she saw an elderly lady looking well. Ava immediately offered to help. Ava felt shock and worried immediately pulled out her mobile phone and called for an ambulance while she was waiting Ava offered a bottle of water to the elderly woman until the elderly woman fainted. Ava panicked and did not know what to do. Luckily the ambulance came right on time! the paramedics and nurses helped to carry her in the back of the truck. Ava was very proud of herself but she realised she was late for school so she ran as fast as she could. Ava was very scared until she saw the lead prefect the prefect apprach Ava and asked ''why are you late?'' Ava was so scared she could not speak until a familiar voice came behind Ava. It was principal franklin he had saw what Ava had done so principal fanklin gave a trophy there was a note on the trophy it said ''The most kindful student'' Ava was happy and the school celebrated with her.

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One sunny morning, David woke up and went to eat his tasty breakfast. David's mother had prepared his school things so David took his bag, water bottle and then left for school. When David was riding his bicycle to school, he saw an old lady on the floor.

The old lady looked dizzy and she told David that she was nauseous as David tried to get help from passer-bys but it was early in the morning so there were no people on the sidewalk. David stayed by the old lady's side, trying to get help but no help was found so David tried to use his mobile phone. However, there was no battery as David played his mobile games for too long and forgot to charge it. That's when David thought of an idea. David asked the old lady for her phone to call an ambulance.

Shortly after, David called the ambulance, the ambulance came and took the old lady to the hospital. After that, David realized that he was late for school so David cycled as fast as lightning to school. At school, David told his friends what happened and they told David that he did the right thing.

A few days later, the old lady came to David's and bought a gift for him and thanked David for helping her. The old lady also told David that she felt better. David opened the gifts and inside was a 75 dollar game gift card and some stickers. David told his parents what had happened and they were proud of him.

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A time i helped

It was a sunny morning as a majestic ball of fire made its dramatic entrance into the crimson-gold sky,I woke up with sunrays beaming at me.

I went to check the time and it said,"7:00pm. WAIT-7:00 O'CLOCK?!!" i shout out with blood draining from my face. My bus comes at 7:05 so i leaped off the bed and stubbed my toe in the process."welp, that's one way to wake me up." i said while gripping my foot and grimaced. luckily, I was able to wash up and change in record time and was able to reach the bus stop at 7:05. but then I did not see the bus! " did I miss the bus?" i thought. Just then i saw the bus turn around the corner and I was relieved. luckily the bus progress smoothly to the bus stop nearest to my school but then i heard somebody Shout,"HELP!" i ran to the source and I saw what had happened.........

I kept running the source and I saw two people: elderly lady and a young man tending to her! The elderly woman looked white and pale but I was the one who was pale when I saw why.......... Her arm had large gash and was bleeding profusely! Then I was between a rock and a hard place. If I help I would be late for school but if I did not she might die from blood loss. But then I realized that school is not as important as alive to help to call an ambulance and I did.

Luckily the ambulance came shortly

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quite fun

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It was A early morning, old lady was feeling unwell laying on the floor a man walking past the unwell lady the man immediately offered to help , the old lady felt more unwell . The Man immediately used his mobile phone to call for an ambulance.A few minutes later, the ambulance arrived , the Nursewent down the ambulance to bring a lady was unwell to the ambulance and to the hospital, the lady was awake , thank the man making sure the lady went to the hospital

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fun

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ones a upon a time, the sun was rising and the birds were cherping. It was a butiful day.

I was ready to go to school. While I was still walk to school. I saw an ambulance with it saris on it when "we woo we woo ". But I was still wondering why would a person call an ambulance early in the morning?. So I ran towards the ambulance and missed school.

suddely my mother Saw me while I was runing towards the ambulance. My Mother ask why did not to school I told a harmlus lie to my mother. I Said that the School gate was no open.

After talking to my mother about why I was not going to school I qikly chased after the ambulance to see what happens. suddenly the ambulance started to gslow down. It was my bast friend house!, cry and cry weih I was walking back home. But it was all a dream.

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One sunny day,the crimson gold shine very bright .One day.a elderly lady was cooking rice for her son Junny.When suddenly.her head become dizzy, she tried to take the mobile phone but she pess out . When Junny came back from school, he noticed that her grandmother was unwell. He immediately went to her grandmother"s room to fine her phone, he looked around very fasted because her grandmother needed help. Then. Junny fround the phone that was on the table. Junny immediately called 995 for the ambulance. When the ambulance

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One sunny morning, I was skipping happily to the bus stop to go home as it was dismisal. When I was about to reach the bus stop, I saw an elderly lady sitting on the ground, and she looked unwell.

When I was about to help her, the bus I was about take drove in my sight . I felt a bit worried, as I might be late to go home for my tution, but at the same time, I pity the elderly lady. I thought for a while and decided to help the elderly. I sprang into action and took out my mobile phone then called nine nine five, which is the ambulance number. '' Hello, this is nine nine five, what is your emergency?'' I told them what had happened and they arrived as fast as a cheetah.They sent the elderly lady into the ambulance,and the workers in the ambulance praised me for my courage,and drove away.

I took another bus and went home.i reached home, and attacked the food as I was super hungry.My mother asked me what happened,and I told her all the things that happened , and I told her all the things that happened today.

My mother praised me for my kindness and said to me "being kind is always good. Remember, no matter what, helping people will make one more person happy!"

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C:4 L:6 On a cloudy afternoon, Lily was on her phone looking through social media. She did not know that it was filled with traffic. People caught her on the road. Not long after, She got hit by a car. People could not see since it was too painful to watch the accident. Lily had fainted. Lying down unconscious, Somebody called an ambulance for help. As soon as the ambulance arrived, the doctors rushed over, picking Lily up and gently lifted her into the ambulance. Luckily, Lily got to the hospital in time. Her heart was still beating, all her vitals seemed okay. The staff called her parents using Lily's phone. Her parents were worried when they heard the news so they rushed to the hospital to check on Lily. Thankfully, her parents were relieved to see that she was okay.

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It was a sunny morning. I woke up from my bed tiredly, opened my mouth as big as a lion going to roar and yawned. I started thinking, why is no one downstairs? Mum should be making breakfast right now, why is she not there? I put the thought aside and went to the bathroom to brush my teeth and shower like it was another ordinary day. After that, I checked what was the time and day on my phone. It was Saturday and the time is 9:05a, I am supposed to go for my math tuition now! I picked up my phone and bag and ray very fast, faster than an athlete in the Olympics.

While I was running, I saw an elderly lady walking like zombie and looked unwell. She was looking everywhere curiously as if she was trying to find something. The elderly lady walked to me and asked me what was the day, year and time. I told her that it was Saturday, 9:15am and the year 2025. She told me that aliens are going to attack but of course I did not believe her. The elderly woman thanked me and gave me something like a lighter. Before I could ask what is was, she fainted and her body started shaking. I took out my phone and called for an ambulance. I stayed with her until the ambulance arrived.

When the ambulance arrived, I told them what happened and they nodded. I asked what was this that I was holding. They said, "Don't use it. This is an e-cigarette and it is illegal in Singapore. If you use it, it can lead to heart diseases, lung damage and more. Please throw it away." I followed their instructions and ran to my math tuition in a hurry.

When I reached, it was the end of my math tuition. Mum was there to puck me up and my my tuition teacher asked her, "Ms Tan, your daughter didn't come for the math tuition. Why is that so?" Before mum replied, I walked up to them and told them what happened and apologised. They understood the situation and decided not to be angry, but instead they were proud. My math tuition teacher praised me. I was so happy, I could shed tears of happiness. Mum told me to not accept any gifts from strangers and not to vape or take any e-cigarettes. I said okay and went back home with mum to watch television.