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'In the school canteen, there were many students using their phones and PLDs.'

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'In the school canteen, there were many students using their phones and PLDs.'

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'Many students were queueing up for food'

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'Many students were queueing up for food'

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Improved: In the school canteen, students were seated on the colourful benches. Some were gathered in groups, others sat alone. Most of their backs were hunched over and their eyes glued to the screens of their phones and PLDs.

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'There was the aroma of food that the stall vendors cooked'

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'There was the aroma of food that the stall vendors cooked'

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'I ate the delicious premium burger, and there was a blast of flavour all over my mouth. '

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'I ate the delicious premium burger, and there was a blast of flavour all over my mouth. '

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There was the smell of freshly made food that was escaping through the stall, with the scent of spices looming the air.

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The chatters of the students ran freely, plates and crockery clacking against each other. The screams and exclaims came by so randomly, the sounds of videos in the background was never ending

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As I munched into my newly bought premium burger, the scrumptious taste of the beef patty flooded my taste buds and all i could taste was the sauce of the burger.

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there was a fragrant smell of the scrumptious variety of food that the stall vendors cooked with effort.

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in the school canteen, it was filled with different types of aroma. sweaty people who just had finished pe and food and drinks . the aroma of the sweaty people who just had finished pe was so strong , my friends and i could smell them from outside of the canteen being mixed up with the aroma of scrumptious food and drinks

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The loud clattering of bowls and utensils were competing over the multiple voices of the chatter between the students. The sound of feet stomping on the ground as students where playing tag around the canteen, screaming and shouting as they went.

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There was the delicious smell of the food, the fragrant smell of the various spices, the fresh aroma of the mini-pizzas, the smell of the egg and sausage wrapped in bread.

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In the canteen ,the students were sitting on the colourful benches talking loudly with their friends.

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The stampede of students from different classes were rushing to queue up for food while they chatter loudly with their friends

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Little beads of sweat trinkled down my forehead as I ventured through the canteen.

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i sit on the uncomfortable bench as i lay my hand on the hard plastic table, using the cold silver spoon to eat the hot food on my plate. my drink beside me was condensing as it just of the fridge, i ate in delight and finised my food after awhile

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a bunch of students were queueing up for food at the canteen stalls hungrily, chit-chatting to their friends as they wait for their turn to buy their food.

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In the school canteen, many students were queueing up for food. I could see the stall vendor making sandwiches full of colours like green and red. I see the line behind me getting longer as i eagerly wait for my food.

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The canteen was filled with sound and noises left and right. Students are chattering with friends, the stores have sizzling noises as food was being served, you could hear water running as people wash their hands and stall vendors washing the dirty dishes if you listen hard enough. But as the school bell rung, all knew recess is over, after the students leave the place is now in eerily silence.

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there were students carrying their hot bowls of food and their freezing cold drinks in their hands.

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Improved: As I stepped into the canteen, I noticed that numerous students were waiting in line. Some stall queues were organized while the others were not.

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i was having a cold drink in my hand as the water vapour starts to lose heat and condense into water droplets . as i opened the bottle cap of the bottled drink i bought , someone ran into me and the sweet drink was spilled all over my shirt

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As I took a bite into the premium burger I was shocked about the taste as it had a juicy patty and a spicy kick to it.

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I was holding a cold drink in my hand from the drink stall while my friend was pushing me to walk faster.

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The canteen was filled with echoes of people chattering. The canteen vendors were shouting at the top of their lungs. The lukewarm of the pottery and the drink which is as cold as a fridge. I could not even touch the drink. The texture of the soft bun with the juicy spicy chicken patty.

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When I grabbed the drink I wanted to buy, the coolness of the ice lemon tea numbed my fingers as it was chilling cold

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The cold drink was freezing my hand as I held the hot bowl. I rushed to find a seat and I did. I sat down and looked to my right, and accidently touched the sticky rice that fell off the plate my friend was eating.

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the piping hot chicken rice was brought to the table by me, finally! i said. As i sat down, i pulled off my phone and watched to my favourite anime. The rice was blasted with the aroma of the chicken, it was amazing, the chicken was cooked to utterly perfection and it was an amazing meal.

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Fingers holding the fluffy bread of the premium burger, I chatted with my friends while eating, enjoying the peaceful time with my friends.

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The beads sweat dripped from my hair on to my shirt. My shirt clung to my back uncomfortably. As I took the soft wrap into my hands, I felt the cold bottle of the milk tea.

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stalls filled with students queuing up for food, students packed together, chattering amongst themselves, cleaners cleaning up after each students mess.

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In the canteen, some students were carrying delices hot soup on the trays as they walk towards the benches.

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As the students take their food from the canteen vendors, they brought their food to their table quickly as the plate was piping hot