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Tick-emotion very captivating and very funny

Work-don’t laugh whilst acting

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✅- they where funny . they didn’t laugh.

🔨 - to short

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✅-Clear words, funny story

🔨-more exaggeration

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Tick- good creativity

Hammer- more serious and better sound effects

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✅：It is funny.

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Super funny

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✅-it had humour to capture the audience attention

🔨-make more exaggeration

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✅-funny, good English!

🔨-please don’t laugh when you do the act 😂

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Tick-Very real acting and trying to act out what the future will hold

Hammer-Please don’t laugh during the act

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✅So much lore, I Love it!

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✅- funny. they were trying hard. good English

🔨 - dont laugh 😹 !!!!!!! ha ha ha

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✅ They had confidence

🔨 They could be louder.

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Positive - it was funny and they made it bilingual

Negative -they kept laughing in the middle of their performance

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tick-Very funny and gives us a good moral lesson

Hammer-Please don’t laugh I couldn’t understand that part at all

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✅-Long, good acting, good script!

🔨-projection of voice.

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✅ : good acting and good vocabulary for the narrator

🔨 : Don’t laugh too much when acting

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✅This was one of the best ones, I love the part where they both fight.

🔨The narrator needs to speak louder

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Tick - Creative, Smart

Hammer - laugh and giggles

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Excellent sharing of morals about selfishness. Your use of narrator really added to the performance. Well done for using all the space as well!

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Positive - it was entertaining and positive and they taught us about selfishness

Negative- we couldn’t really hear them speaking

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✅：Story is long, teach us a lesson.

🔨：Sound can be louder.

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Wow! Might is Right was a great addition and showed that you paid attention to the details in the book. You all spoke your lines with excellent emotion. Well done.

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Tick-Very funny and has a lot of details and emotion,Relates back to the book

Hammer-a bit of too much laughing and Gabby didn’t memorise the script

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Very funny and neat

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✅ : linking to the story “ might is right” good acting

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positive - Their acting is funny and amazing they thought of everything including texts in the book

Negative - no negatives

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✅:Full of feelings. Let people feel they are in the real place!

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✅- very creative script I love the phrase « might is right ! »

🔨 -HEI HEI could make more emotion also Jayden

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✅- GOOD ROASTING VERY FUNNY

🔨-We can’t hear Sean……

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tick-Good expression and calm manner

Hammer-Too much laughing in it Finn also didn’t remember his lines

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Loved the impression of The Rabbits - cool, calm, collected but powerful. Your depiction of the numbats was also great: less power but showed resistance in keeping their home! Sean's intro. as narrator was well written and set context well: would have liked to hear more of the narrator throughout.

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Let the people can feel the emotion, and the numbat also do the thing that he think is correct.

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Tick - Amazing, 3 Lamdas

Hammer - none

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✅ : “Numbats” has very good “talk back” skills which left Finn speechless

🔨 : Try to memorise all the parts

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✅-VERY FUNNY< WELL THOUGHT SCRIPT

🔨-LAUGHING PROBLEM!

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Tick- The Rabbit was speaking in a condescending tone, gave a sense of power and dominance

Hammer- Too much laughing and Connie forgot her line

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Well done! Your unique take on playing with the timeline was great. Your narrator also did a great job in adding further details to show us your understanding.

NS - a lot of giggly numbats! Can numbats giggle when they're dead?!

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It is very funny and it has time, but next time don’t laugh.

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✅- roast

🔨- roast

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good-it funny and good action

Negative-please don’t laugh

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✅-roast

🔨- roast

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Well done for including the details: pollution, ruining the environment, no homes.

NS: Try to keep to your very well-written scripts and include original ad libs :)

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Tick-laughing,roasting

Hammer-stole our line and Eliott did not remember his lines

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✅- creative .

🔨- language . laughing

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It full with feeling. However start is Chinese

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✅-Good job with the acting!

🔨-Elliot didn’t take it seriously

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✅ - Amazing, shows you guys have been practicing alot.

🔨 - Laughter and giggles

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✅-GOOD JOB WITH MULTITASKING DEATH

🔨-DEATH

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✅ - Narrator = also a character, great teamwork like the others

🔨 - Laughters and giggles

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Tick-even though two people still can pull it off

Hammer-a bit less context

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✅ : Even though only two people they still cooperated really well

🔨 : Can work on confidents/ louder voice