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They were able to show the evidence and research to back up why they made the decisions they did. For example, they have shown that they have been able to ask their target audience questions on things such as pricing, to show why they have chosen the price they did.

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the feature articles are varied but still fit into the theme of their magazine

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They haven't shown their USP for their magazine

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In their survey, they've asked people based on their gender, but they haven't took into consideration other factors, such as age and location. The survey could have helped narrow down the target audience

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They have only shown a brief overview of the type of content they have chosen to do

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A lot of research clearly went into the magazine, which meant they understand their audience really well and were able to taylor their content to them

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Making each issue of the magazine about something different could potentially hinder repeat customers from buying

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The visuals slide only talks about the colour scheme, forgetting to mention anything about the article layouts or font style.

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Have shown good research on design of previous magazines to shown why they have chosen/inspired them

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The idea for the magazine seems very firm and they know what they're doing for it; features, content, design elements, external companies to contact etc.

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They have shown a good amount of research regarding their target audience

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Maybe too similar to Mundial in aesthetics - harder to stand out when a very similar magazine is already well established 

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Has a clear feel of what they want to do and how they want their magazine to look - understands how to draw their readers in by aesthetics

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Very niche and interesting topic that you don't see talked about usually. Clear article ideas with a link back to Manchester even though the theme is UK/Europe and US based. Good aesthetic and design proposal too.

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The proposal for the design is great, very vivid and is backed up via previous examples. Article ideas are thorough and direct and are made to sound very interesting. The range of topics is also a great way to keep the audience interested and accommodate for everyone.

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Could have been more in depth as to how they would interact with the footballing community on social media as the magazine only releases 2 months.

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Although the design element is explained. I think that it could have been more in depth and how it stands out from other music magazines as they have only noted the colour scheme and given 'Fader' as a contemporary example.

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I really like the fact that the magazine covers a broad range of topics. But this could prevent the magazine from finding their niche and being able to stick to it. Which could impact on the audience and what they actually expect to see in the magazine when it gets released.