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Plan:

1. To explain the current practice that my  reform  is responding to.

2. Explain my reform in more detail.

3. To strengthen the details of my philosophy of education

Accomplishments:

1. I strengthened my research by adding 3 sources.

2. I developed details on the current practice my reform responds to and my reform itself.

3. Made sure the theme of equity is clear across each section of my essay

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Plan:
1. To always use stronger vocabulary to sound more professional.
2. To explain my reform and how it will benefit others in the best way I know how.
3. To find references from the textbook to better improve my paper overall.

Accomplishments:
1. Found more resources to better support my claim.
2. Fixed errors provided in the comments by Dr. Harris.
3. Explained progressivism and its aspects in more detail.

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Plan:
1. To correct works cited page and intext citations
2. To fix grammar and spelling mistakes
3. To stay on topic and use stronger vocabulary

Accomplishments:
1. I strengthen my works cited and intext citations by reviewing the APA format video.
2. I went through and proof read to fix all grammar and spelling errors.
3. I got revision on my paper to make sure my vocabulary was great.

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Plan:
1. To explain what my reform is, how it would benefit others, and what it would do for the public school system
2. Have multiple other people (peers, family, etc.) read over my paper to point out imperfections
3. To use credible references that will strengthen my paper rather than distracting from it

Accomplishments:
1. I fixed the areas that needed to be worked on throughout my various essays and corrected the spots that Dr. Harris marked
2. I made more connections to my thoughts and reforms and connected them to the book to strengthen my reform topic
3. Went through and grammatically corrected all of my mistakes throughout my individual papers and strengthened my vocabulary

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Plan:
1.) To fix the errors that Dr. Harris pointed out
2.) To find better references that support the reform better
3.) Explain how my reform will benefit all kinds of students in more depth

Accomplishments:
1.) I fixed the errors that were marked by Dr. Harris throughout my essay
2.) I properly cited my sources throughout my paper
3.) I explained more into depth how my reform will help all kinds of students.
4.) I made sure that my references backed up my reform in the best way possible.
5.) I fixed any small grammatical errors that I saw throughout my paper.

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Plan:
1. To include more research to support my reform.
2. To properly cite direct quotes.
3. Explain how my reform will create equity in all schools.

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Plan:
1. To include more research
2. To clean up my in-text citations and references page.
3. To look over and fix any spelling and grammar mistakes/errors

Accomplishments:
1. I included more research and found three new sources where my research came from and included them in references page as well as some in text citations
2. I cleaned up my in text citations as well as revised my references page
3. I looked over my essay and corrected any grammar mistakes or errors and I also removed/added some sentences and moved sentences around to make my essay flow better

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1. Plan to stay on topic and stay focused
2. Make sure to correct small grammatical errors
3. Including more research to support my topic.

Accomplishments
1. Printed my paper, marked edited and proofread for grammatical errors
2. Found more research to support details
3. Worked carefully and slowly to ensure to focus and stay on topic.

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Plan:
1. Include more research support my reform.
2. Fix the errors from Dr. Harris' review.
3. Properly cite my sources (specifically focusing on my in-text citations).

Accomplishments:
!. I cited all of my sources correctly in APA format for both in and end text citations.
2. I used more evidence to support my claims.
3. I find grammatical errors

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Plan:
1. To make sure that all of my information is cited correctly within my paper (in-text citations) and to correct any errors with my citations.
2. I would like to find more evidence and research to make sure that my paper properly backs up my reform and advocation.
3. Look through all reviews and comments from Dr. Harris and use them wisely to improve my paper.

Accomplishments:
1. I added more sources throughout my paper to advocate for my reform and personal points of view.
2. I reviewed Dr. Harris' comments and corrected the notes that she had left for me.
3. After putting my paper together, I made sure that each section of my paper flowed together nicely rather can going from one direct point to the next.

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Plan:
1. I need to make sure all my information is clear and easy to read without confusion.
2. I need to work on correct in-text citations so credit is given for my research.
3. Have a peer read over my work so they can catch any mistakes.                  Accomplishments:                              1.Went through and made sure each section was clear and precise.    2. I also went through Dr. Harris' notes  3. I wen through and added more in-text citations where I was lacking citations.

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Plan:
1. Stay focused on the topic
2. Use stronger vocabulary
3. Try not to have any run on sentences
4. Have more research on the topic from credible sources

Acomplished:
1. Made stronger connections to my paper
2. Fixed my run on sentences
3. Fixed gramatical errors

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Plan:
1. Correctly implement in-text citations and resources within my paper.
2. Find stronger reasoning and evidence within my paper to further back up my reform.
3. Correct my errors that were made in the annotations from Dr. Harris.

Accomplishments:
1. Spoke to Dr. Harris and found stronger reasoning for how my reform supports diversity/equity.
2. Made sure each section was clear and supported by evidence.
3. Strengthened my resources.

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Plan:
1. Make sure my reform and how my reform will make the education system better is clear with examples.
2. Find more out side sources that support my reform and emphasizes the why my reform will benefit the education system.
3.Go into detail exactly how my reform would be used in classrooms and how the teachers would teach on my reform

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Plan:
1. Add more citations to strengthen my paper
2. Proof read for clarity and grammar mistakes
3. Make a quick outline of topics and quotes to include before writing

Accomplishments:
1. I strengthened and made more connections to my reform
2. I revised my sources and got rid of some that didn't work with my paper
3. I fixed any problems based on Dr. Harris' feedback.

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Plan:
1. I need to include more reliable research report in my paper.
2. Making more connections and using more examples from real people, rather than using an overload of statistics.
3. Use a wider range of vocabulary.
4. Fix grammatical mistakes.

Accomplishments:
1. I sent my essay to my former English professors, and now my essay is grammatically correct.
2. Essay is in the correct format, all citations are correct.
3. The paper now flows more, instead of seeming blocky.

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plan
1. include more research to solidify research paper
2. review paper closely for grammatical errors
3. include better sentence structure to allow ideas to flow easier

accomplishments
1. further narrow reform topic for better understanding
2. site current sources correctly within paper

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1.) Make sure that I clearly state the positives of my reform and what specific classroom issues it can help with
2.) proof read to make sure all points were stated correctly and in an order that is easiest for the reader to comprehend
3.) Make sure to fix any grammatical errors that may be present
4.) Ensure that my citations are accurate and helpful

accomplishments
1.) I have looked over the essay to ensure that it includes all of the positives of my reform
2.) all points have been stated correctly and I feel that it is in a way that is the easiest to comprehend
3.) all grammatical errors have been fixed

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Plan:
1. To correct my in text citations and work cited page.
2. To explain my reform in a better structure and how it relates back to the philosophies
3. To make sure I am using the correct format/requirements
Accomplishments:
1. I started to relook over comments and make notes on what to fix for my final paper
2. I started to look up different sources that could help strengthen my paper
3. Made sure my sources were related to my topic

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Accomplishments
1. I have included more research to strengthen my reform.
2. I have correctly cited my direct quote.
3. I explained how my reform would bring equity to all schools.

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Accomplishments

1- I used stronger outside resources to support my reform to the education system in my essay
2- I used stronger and more in depth examples to support and explain my reform in my essay
3- I used stronger vocabulary and grammar so that the readers can better understand how my reform would effect the educational system in my essay

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Plan:
1. Cite my resources correctly.
2. Use better wording and be less confusing.
3.  Focus on my reform/topic of my paper and not go off topic.

Accomplishments:
1. Used stronger vocabulary.
2. Explained my examples more in depth.
3. Made my paragraphs more clear about how it flows into my reform/topic.

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Plan:
1. Provide stronger sources to help support my topic
2. Throughly explain my reform so that it is obvious what I am writing my paper on and advocating for
3. Include stronger vocabulary to help my paper flow well and sound educated

Accomplishments:
1. I was able to find a few more sources that were credible to include in my paper
2. I went back to my proposal at the beginning of the paper and revised it to better explain what I am advocating for
3. I replaced more basic words with synonyms of them to try and make my paper stronger and help with the flow of it