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Better intros,
conclusions and punctuation.

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Make my chapters not to  similar but still stay on topic.

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You need to give some information to more people then your own mom  and dad you need to tell people

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1.More Detail
2.Spelling and detail
3.Good but it took long

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long and detailed

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You need to give information. I will focus on staying on the topic. And lastly my drafting proses went great.

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my chapters need a little more detail

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It needs to inform, it needs to have a acceptable length and help the reader understand.

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it need to be long

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Chapters need details and correct info in order to have a good info writing

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I am hoping to add more details and diagrams and more words

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my chapters need  to have supporting details when im writing i need to add examples im going to focus on spelling and my revising is going good

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a chapter needs a reason and details . when I am revising I look for miss spelling . My drafting process went fine

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Chapters need detail and organization so the readers can understand that the writer wrote.

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chapter need a lot of detail and reasons they need to be revised

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chapters need opinions and details. when i revising i focus on spelling and hand writing. the drafting process went fine and it was fun

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you have to fix by going back and looking and revising and see your mistakes and correct them also add a little more detail.

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So in chapters you have to put your reasons and opinions and also and when revising you gotta fix mistakes and in draft put in everything your thinking of