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Looks like the boy reading the letter has read the news of a close relative whom has died at war

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Who is the model for painting

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Very linear and great use of tone and depth.
I like the mixture of still life and real life.

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I like the title. It’s a great painting, but I don’t see the theme of death clearly enough. I interpreted it as the pressure put on pupils fo be the best and the father looking over him, increasing that pressure and ignoring the son’s suffering

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Some scale issues with background figure

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Orlando
Good colour and form especially on the skull
man in the background refine face or is it intentional?

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Stunning treatment of chiaroscuro- write about this in your sketchbook

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Did you edit the colour digitally before painting it because it’s for example the blanket is quite different? I quite like how the painting is slightly stylised and the colours aren’t always fully blended.
The people in the background are a bit confusing, they look like they’re dancing around a fire and you can’t tell if they are celebrating or mourning

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Staring death in the face

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I love the dark and light aspects and the ‘history of illness’

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The plague

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Contemporary mask - wearing ?

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The painting is amazing. I love how you worked with light

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i love the silhouettes in the back, and how dark and stylised the painting is.

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Rose
I live the way the candelight reflects on the figures and darker figures surrounding main characters
the fabric of the dress has a lot of movement

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I like the use of yellow in the background

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Paul Gauguin also paints himself in the background of his paintings and they usually look quite sinister which ties in with the people in the background being led to death.

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Presence of recurring death element

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The handling of light and chiaroscuro is great !

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How is this personal and meaningful for you?

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Title…..

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Anachronistic! Love it

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Extension - scale - life size prints? Cutouts? (Look at lubaina himid) explore prints more! Look at saturation of colour and gradation/spectrum

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Same could for all E.g green or purple?

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Why the first boy don’t have head like other

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Zoe is there a reason why the women and men have been separated?

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Great topic and I love how it relates to Zoe personally. overall it’s great :)

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I very like the reason why there are more boys

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Would you maybe display it above a toilet door?

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From John

Love it but could u do it on a larger scale, possibly look at making it more 3d or making curtain body parts ?

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zoe
very clean and impactful appearance from use of acrylic - good personal connection and thought provoking

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I wonder how much depicting men as blue and women as pink actually goes to subverting the stereotype ? Are you playing into it slightly?

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Why the orange one is not in the middle
Do u miss one of girl resin.

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Great exploration and refinement. Love the linear element- gradient? We’re all on a spectrum? Should there be everything from purple dark/light blue pink/red ?

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Zoe is there a reason there are five men and only four women?

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From John

Remember how you did you box project, looking through a spy hole and seeing what’s inside, possibly look at doing that with a pyramid instead, looking through a pyramid and looking at Egyptian history ? Just a thought

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You need high quality colour studies and drawings of Egyptian tombs/sarcophagi Tutankhamen etc - and you must say why important to you? Should you be relating to Thai temple structure/religion?

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Find artists who’s style and aesthetic you like. What materials do they use ? What about the way it looks so you like? Could you use the same process and techniques as them?

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How are you going to make this personal and meaningful? How can you relate the imagery to yourself (images in the mind’s eye?)

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I like the narrative that runs along the beam- but wonder how the overall aesthetic is going to work - how will you ‘polish’ the rest of the sculpture ?

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The tiny drawing on the wooden pieces are great, i also like the size of the project, and how Kidin worked with the fact that the brain exploded and managed to find a way to make it work.

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How and why brains in art

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kidin
I like the scale and the detailed painting/story
what colour will the background/ board be?

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I think the detail of the story line is beautiful. The brain sculpture has so much detail and despite it exploding you made it work. Do the hieroglyphics at the top have a meaning?

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Body and brain- connections with Egyptian art in sketchbook plenty of drawings in full colour of this

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Very inventive
Love the sarcophagus elements on the wood
Will it be presented on a board on the wall or on the floor?

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Certainly one of the strangest pieces I’ve ever seen! Love the connections - genuinely creative what artists are you relating this to?

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Drawing - in sketchbook must be same quality. Refer to the coloured pencil artist I showed you

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You could you drawing to you advantage to ‘repeat draw’ - similar to the impact of Gormley’s ‘repeat men’ - if you made one small man and then repeatedly drew it ?

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I really like this, maybe fade it a bit more towards the bottom, it seems to cut off quite suddenly (rose)

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Tom - strongly suggest the colour is more intense and then fades as it progresses down the spring.

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We’ll drawn.
you could use the negative space to increase the impact of the image?

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Experiment with scale

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Would’ve been good to have the whole thing in colour or half coloured and half black and white - but it also looks really cool and works well with the idea that life is running out.
We’re you thinking of colouring the background or leaving it white?

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Tom
i like the detail and realism - 3d affect and shadows
maybe a background and more colour?

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I like the fading

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To Tom,

Could u have added a background?

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Fading like the connection to erosion! Could still have more of colour element

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Sound element? Found sound - use garage band

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Are the hand and face supposed to be connected because they look like very separate entities because the if the hand is on the left side of the face it should be a left hand?

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Rosa de jong - explore the model-making potential more - moss, sponge, undulating landscape make found objects part of the landscape

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Are you going to do anything with the clock? I feel like if they’re wax they are more difficult to paint, but the colour they are the clock face is really hard to read or just see the numbers

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John
liked themes of circle of life/time running out and the height created by the arm/branch
Good texture

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I think making the hand and face red would  remove them too much from the overall landscape - would it not be better to keep it the same as the rest and have the stand out colour somewhere else ?

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Is the hand ment to look like black lives matter

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Very well thought out. And Johns clocks are amazing, as well as a cool title. The idea with the white and red sounds really good, i think distinguishing the hand and face in red would be a good idea.

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Are all the hot glue strings in purpose and do they represent anything, they remind me of spiderwebs?
I like that you used naturally dry leaves, it adds a sense of fragility too

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The use of dead leaves adds to the effect of death and rotting.

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I like the idea of it painted white and red.

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Can the hand wearing watch aswell?

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Like the refinement related to previous work well done getting there!

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Bit of a long title

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I’m unsure of the shape of the underlying landscape

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Excellent research well done!

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Bill viola - Nantes triptych- still image slides

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Can we paint like pixel picture for each cross.

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I don’t think the frame really needs to be painted, I think it would be cool if different images would be projected on it - coloured ones as well maybe. I really like how personal it is through the fact that you used your own necklace.

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I think it is very powerful, would you mount it on a wall? (rose)

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Eleanor K
Are the plates lined up properly. Gaps are all different

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Eleanor
is there a significance to the number of the of tiles?
I like the clean colour used and the texture created by the tiles

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Paint a large version of the cross you used over the whole thing

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The repetition of the same cast has a really powerful effect. What is the meaning behind the projection?

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i like how the crosses interchange between inverted and sticking out??? I also actually like the all white frame. And I like how the plates themselves aren’t stuck on particularly straight. What does the quote mean to you and why did you chose it?

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1,260 crosses , me like 👍

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I like the simplicity of it. It’s also an unusual size which makes it stand out more. What would you paint on the frame? Would it ruin the simplicity perhaps?

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if you’re looking at religious projections look at Bill Viola

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Love the connection with crosses-lives-Rachael whiteread library-holocaust

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That mitred frame is spectacular…

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The dolls are well constructed, how will you use stop motion to emphasise the creepy/ scary theme

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Creepy & wonderful love the hair and costume - consider the twist at the end ? music ? Narration ? Storyboard it…

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The mask look creepy
The background look so good
The hair look great

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I think there are some brilliant details on there, the dry brushing technique on the little knight is a really nice touch. I feel like the arms would be great if they were a little thicker. The garments are very cute, I like them a lot

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could incorporate parts of your box project to add a 3D aspect to the setting? eg sticks (rose)

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Lots of influences for characters
Backgrounds are simple but effective because it keeps the focus on the figures
Really creepy but cool 👍👍
Wire arms add to the surreal-ness

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I love the aesthetic of the dolls. They are made beautifully with so much detail. I’m really excited to see the something done with them!

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i love the idea, even though mia didn’t have the time to do the animation the idea was very creative, i also appreciate mia sticking with her very creepy concept, as well as staying with her fairytale theme. and a love how different the characters look, they have different hair outfits and faces which is lovely, why did you chose snow white though?

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Have you read Angela Carter’s fairytale re-tellings? The Bloody Chamber and her book of fairytales.

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Led light look good can change LED light
The work look so clean and look minimal
Relate to previous work (light, color)

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I like how they are all so different from each other. I’d really would’ve liked to hear you explain more on the sensory factor of it and how that maybe is relevant to you

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Use a black acrylic to enhance to resin balls