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ome points to give a good essay

1. 1) Subject can’t be mentioned twice.

2. 2) Correct punctuation .

3. 3)Must be a verb in the sentence.

4. 4)First word must be capitalized.

5. 5)Must  have correct order in sentence.

6. 6)Verb must agree with the subject (she needs).

7. 7)Must be there a subject (sentence fragment).

8. 8)Avoid spelling mistakes

Sentence must have a

1) subject abs mention once

2) a verb

3) capital letter in the beginning

4) correct punctuation

5) correct order

6) right spelling

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-My mother she works at a bank

“She” is a mistake

-John is an engineer

“Punctuation” mistake

-The manager of my department.

Mistake that there is no verb

-we enjoy watching old movies.

First letter of “we” must be capitalised

-I like very much Chinese food

A mistake is words in right orders

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A-Find Mistakes in these sentences:

1-My mother she works in the bank.
2-John is an engineer
3-The manager of my department
4-we enjoy watching old movies

B-The mistakes are:

1- We had a double subject we can’t repeat it.
2-It’s missing punctuation (.).
3-Missing verb; it is a fragment sentence (only a part of a sentence).
4-The first word of an English sentence has to be capitalized.

C-Other mistakes :

1-The word order .
2- Subject verb agreement (verb has to agree with the subject).
3-Missing Subject.
4-Spelling mistake.

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We can't use double subject in the same statement.
we shouldn't forget the punctuation.
No statement without verb.
The first word in the statement should be a capital letter.
We can't start the statement with verb.
spelling and subject-verb agreement are things we should avoid them

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Find the mistake in this sentences:

1-My mother she works in a bank
We can't repeat the subject in the same sentence, so we will delete she from the sentence.

2- John is an engineering
We must put (.) to end the sentence

3- The manager of my department
This sentence is a fragment. This is called only an part of a sentence not a complete sentence. There is no verb

4- we enjoy watching old movies
Correct sentence but the missing is the punctuation it is We not we

5- I like very much chinese food.
Its correct not wron ,but the correct arrangement "I like chinese food very much."

6- Maria need help with her hw
The mistake here is subject verb agreement
It shoud be needs not need

7- (D)elivered tha package yesterday(.)
As we said we should follow a correct punctuation and put the dot at the end of the sentence.

8- We recieved your letter.
Its a spelling mistake here in recieved it sould be received.

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