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One positive outcome is that young people would learn independence. [Point] The youth could learn independence by working or studying overseas as they would have to rely on themselves as they are far away from their family they rely on. [Elaboration] They would have to do their own laundry, which is quite difficult as it has many steps including the organisation of clothing and the storage of said clothing. Or making a meal for themselves, needing to buy ingredients and cook the meal  in a small amount of time as they would need time for work. [Example] Thus, an advantage is that young people would learn to be independent from their family when they study or work overseas.

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One advantage of studying or working overseas for young people is being that they are able to gain experience. Studying or working in singapore Singapore results in learning the methods taught by us. allows to learn local methods and experiences. However, when you we study overseas, it allows us to learn more about your job scope or certain topics and learn how other countries do the same things differently and that can help broaden your our knowledge in your our field and thus get better at your our job. For example, students in Singapore learn to conduct collaborative learning using Padlet. When we study overseas, we might find that the students there may not use Padlet and use another more effective software instead. Thus, one advantage of working overseas is gaining experiences and getting better at your our job.

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One advantage for young people to work overseas is gaining experiences. [Point] To be able to work overseas, it gives them a chance to experience the real world on their on own. For example, working in Japan where they are Japan society is known for their fast paced lifestyle which we from Singapore may not be used to. [Example]  Which is suprisingly faster than Singapore's city lifestyle.  Therefore, getting a chance to work Working in Japan fast pace lifestyle can broaden young people working efficiency. In the future, they can apply what they have learnt in Japan back in Singapore and they would find themselves coping better than their colleagues.  This helps them to use their life skills from what they have gain in singapore. When it is successful, people can learn from them. When it is not met the expectations of the boss, they can learn from their mistakes and seek for help from their overseas colleagues. [These are not so relevant because your focus is about adapting to fast-paced lifestyle] Working overseas also allows young people to They can observe how their colleagues handle the projects, how they lead a team, and how the way they interact with others. This will allow young people to gain different types of prespative perspectives and experience different work styles. This will ultimately allow them to gain confidence in their work when they come back to Singapore. [Elaboration] Hence, working overseas will surely add values to the learning experiences for young people.

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One advantage about working overseas is the chance to be independent. [Point] As many of us would most probably be at At the age of 16-18, we would need to learn to be independent. We would have to learn to ration our funds for various purposes and to save it to be prepared for emergency situations. [Elaboration] For example, when As we are overseas working alone, we would mostly most likely also have to learn to cook for ourselves to save our funds  as dining out all the time could be expensive for us. [Example] As we seldom do groceries and cooking when we are in Singapore, With all this these experiences that we would have to face by the time our time is up and we need to return we would be enable us to be a more independent and responsible person. Therefore the first advantage is gaining independence. to be independent

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One advantage of studying Studying overseas allows young people to gain more independence while studying away from their parents. [Point] Students will learn how to spend their money more wisely and have more control over their lives. [Example] Without their parents by their side students, will aquire  acquire knowledge and skills of living by themselves in a different country. [Elaboration] This will create the experience for them to become they will be more independent.

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One advantage of  for young people to study or work overseas is that they can gain independence. [Point] for For example they have to cook for themselves, and going go to various places or buying groceries by themselves, as well as  and managing their own pocket money. [Example] to save for food or other needs they have to manage every thing by themselves as Being overseas, they  would not don't have anyone that can help them. [Elaboration] For students who used to depend on their parents heavily,  more they can take this opportunity to be independent and learn to do everything by themselves.

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One advantage on of studying overseas is the opportunities to expand one's scope of learning. expansion in learning.Studying overseas opens up more varients variants and options in learning. and It can expose students in learning things that they have no access in their country. [Elaboration] what their country limited or restricted to. For example, if the student wants to pursue their education in business, they can go overseas to learn more about international business. This experience could expose them to the global mindset  which helps to truly experience and practise doing business in an international context.  and not be restricted or limited in their learning if what they are pursuing is limited or restricted in their country Hence, studying overseas can allow students to learn more.

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One advantage for young people to study or working overseas is that they can get more independent. They get more independent as they will not have any parents to rely on being overseas alone and they have to do everything by themselves. This this will make them more independent. For example, they have to go out to buy there their own food or  and to cook it for themselves whereas as home they might have their parents to cook or buy for them. They would also have to wash their own clothing unlike they have their parents washing their clothes for them back at home. Thus one advantage for young people working or studying overseas is that they are  can become more independent.

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the first advantage is that they can be more independent as they will do the chores themselves and do thing all by themselves so that they will not need to rely on people to do their work. It also teaches them prudence where they can save their money and spend their money wisely as they are working overseas , thus they need to save up for the rainy day

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One advantage of working overseas is that we can gain experience. [Point] Working in a foreign country will allow us to learn from others and try to adapt to their working culture. [Elaboration] For example, some companies have a lot of projects ongoing at the same time and people there can multitask.  We can learn from them in order to cope with the workload given. [Example] This can benefit us because when we come back to Singapore to start working,  we can apply what we learn have learnt. Hence, one advantage of working overseas is that we can gain experience.

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Exposure to different culture, market, education and lifestyle.
Students in a different country, has a different environment and will be exposed to different fields
Hence exposure to different culture, market, education and lifestyle.

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One one advantage for young people to study or work overseas is that they can be experienced in different kind of things. [Point] for For example , they are able to learn how to manage themselves since they are away from any source of help they need. Ddepending on their wits , they have to live with what they have and adapt to the new environment that has been brought to them when they are overseas. Tthis would allow them to learn and experience how it is to be independent and not to rely on others, keeping themselves at their edge to keep up with their new environment. Ttherefore one advantage for young people to study or work overseas is that they can be experienced in different kind of things .
[Not commented] the second advantage for young people to study or work overseas is that they can have a different mindset. for example , they might be posted to a developing country and see for themselves how different it is from their homeland. it shows that when someone steps into another place that is doing worse than them , they can have a change of mindset. this mindset can positively push them to help those developing countries and bring a change into their world instead of going there and not doing anything for that country. therefore the second advantage for young people to study or work overseas is that they can have a different mindset.

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one advantage for young people to or work overseas is so that, they can learn more new things and grow from that experience. it is also a once in a lifetime opportunity as you wouldn’t really get this chances in the future as you grow older.

Lacking examples what exactly young people can learn.
'You'? Are you referring me as the 'young people'?

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The disadvantage of studying/working overseas is that, we need to learn different  languages in ordered  order to understand what the locals are talking about.

Rephrase your main point: One disadvantage of studying or working overseas is that we might struggle with interacting with the locals at work or in daily life since we could not understand their language.
Example + Elaboration?

Another disadvantage is that we might face racism
Example, like the American. The American have face many racial riot over the past few decades.

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The disadvantage is that if young people might succumb to have temptations and to bad habits. [Point] During When overseas , many young people will definitely face stress and many will might face have the temptation to pick up smoking smoke to help them relief relieve stress. and they are to busy and frustrated, many Some might also go for resort to drinking as there is nobody to control their drinking temptation. [Examples] Thus, many some young people might get addicted to those bad habits which are detrimental to , many might also take drugs as they might be curious or tempted to try and thus doing all this bad things can affect their health.

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One disadvantage to working overseas is having difficulty coping. As many of us might still be living off our parents as we are more dependent on them. [incomplete sentence] Going overseas to work would be challenging as it would be new to many of us on how to manage our finances and how to prepare our own daily meals as well as not relying on anyone . This would add additional stress to the young that are heavily reliant on our parents . As these young teenagers are very reliant on their parents [Repetitive] it could result in them using up their finances to too? fast and having no spare to save resulting in bankruptcy, and would need to rely on their parents to give them more allowance coding [??] the trip to be useless. Therefore this is one disadvantage of going overseas to work.

You may reconsider your development in this way:
- Unable to cope because we have been too reliant on our parents
- unable to take care of ourselves in daily life such as eating and doing laundry
- might develop mental stress & depression, adding on to the stress of coping with work and studies
- overall, it might become a bad experience for us.

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One advantage is they can expand their point of view towards other countries, they get the opportunity to understand the new culture of that country, as many countries itself have different people of different cultures, like how they wear and what they eat, going overseas studying can help someone to appreciate the differences of theirs, by chance create a diplomatic relationship with someone of different race and culture so as to do smooth business with them now or in the future.

No comments as I do not know who you are.

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One ramification caused from working overseas is the racism  they could encounter while their there. The reason is that some countries are not as welcoming to other races. The resulting harassment to those unwelcome to the country could cause serious harm and even death to many people just because they were born a different race. Thus, a drawback to travelling to a different country is the the racism that would occur while working.

Brief but excellent attempt.

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One disadvantage of studying overseas is the challenge to stay safe as that other countries might not be as safe as Singapore. [Point] and will have higher crime rates. This will pose as a threat to studying overseas. While we boast of a low crime rate in Singapore, it may not be the same case in other countries. Certain country  countries might have racist people and they might endanger those immigrants or foreigners living among them.studying overseas. For example, when Covid-19 broke out in 2020, there were reports of Asian people being attacked in the streets of London because some British became angry and racist against Chinese who were perceived to have caused the pandemic. [Example] As Singaporeans, we are used to living in a safe country hence we often have our guards down. most people have their guard lowered as singapore is considered a safe country. But in other country we must have to be on guard all the time.  Hence, we might not stay vigilant and alert all the time, resulting to us getting hurt when danger arises.

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One disadvantage for young people to study or work overseas is the racism change [What's this??]. For example overseas there's a higher crime rate than in Singapore the young people will not be aware of their surroundings as they are used to feeling safe in Singapore. Singapore is a safe place where people from different race get along well however other countries might not be the same they treat other race badly this can be dangerous for the young people due to the racism change.

Pls refer to the paragraph by Yu si.

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One disadvantage for young people to work overseas is the amount of racism [What's wrong this this? Why is it a disadvantage? E.g. causes our safety issues or mental stress?]. Especially during the pandemic, many foreign countries are in distress and tend to push the blame to us asian. As long as we look different from them they'll start hate. For example, during work hours some youngsters might experience racism from their colleagues, being called names or worse being harasse. Many young people might not have the courage to stand up for themselves as they are a minority. They can carry the burden and effects their self-esteem. So to some youngsters, they may have a hard time coping to this kind of hate. As many might not know how to cope with it or what to do in those kind of situations. As they are away from families and friends, they don't have the strong supportive system to run to. Thus working overseas for young people might effect their mental health.

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One disadvantage for young people to study or work overseas is the mental stress from dealing with racism. For example, when Covid-19 broke out in 2020, there were reports of Asian people being attacked in the streets of London because some British became angry and racist against Chinese who were perceived to have caused the pandemic. Or, because of racism, we might be treated unfairly or being called names by the locals at work or in school. When such things happen, they are giving us additional stress on top of what we need to cope with at work or in school. Over time, they will be detrimental to our mental health.

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one disadvantage for young people studying or work overseas is that, they must adapt to the new environment and must get used to the countries culture, as every country has a different ways of doing things.

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One disadvantage of student working or studying overseas is that they might have difficulty coping with the new environment. [Point]  They might have difficulty coping with the new environment in terms to working or learning styles and also in terms of lifestyle.  as they have to go overseas to work or study which means that they have not been there before, they would have to get used to the new environment. For example not being able to cook their own food and buying delivery which will cost a lot and while studying or working overseas they have to save up their money and not spend in carelessly. [This is such as improper and thoughtless paragraph. What exactly do you want to say?] For examples, managing our own meals and laundry as well as coping with the expectations at work or school can be challenging for some of us. If we are unable to keep up with it, it can also become detrimental to our body and mind if we end up eating unhealthily and become too stressed out by work. unhealthy to always buying food and not cooking themselves as cooking it themselves they get to chose what they want in their food. Thus one disadvantage of studying and working overseas is that they might not be able to cope with it

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One disadvantage of working overseas is that we may experience bad temptations. Working in a new environment can be stressful at times and we may give in unhealthy temptations. For example, some people tend to smoke or drink alcohol to cope with their stress and anxiety. Smoking and drinking are bad for health. have bad results effects to the human body so it is a bad habit. These bad habits are also very expensive which could cause us financial problems after some time.  and we already do not have much money when we arrive so we have a higher risk of going bankrupt and have to give up and return home. Hence, one disadvantage of working overseas is that we may experience bad temptations.

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One disadvantages  disadvantage is that people may not be able to adapt well into a new surrounding. [Point] Young people may not have gone out of their countries often, and even if they did do,  it would be it's with their parents on a holiday. This leads to people some young people not knowing how to cope with the change of environment. People They would do not know how to talk to people, how to navigate around the country, while some might even get homesick. Thus the disadvantage that studying overseas may bring is that people may not be able to adapt into a new environment.

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One disadvantage is the cost. Studying overseas is way more expensive than studying in local schools, making it impossible for students in low income family to study there. If they do study there, they might not be able to keep paying the bill of studying there and the student might even not succeed in the school and fail, wasting time effort and money

You're pretty much out of point.
To be discussing this topic, obviously the 'young people' already made it to overseas.
So you should tune your point towards 'the difficulty in coping with the cost of living while studying or working overseas.'