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There were some obvious similarities, like “they both celebrate festivals”. However, it was very detailed. I give it a Mastering
The things that went well were the colours included and the amount of detail put in the diagram
To improve your work you could try to simplify some of the words in the diagram because after reading for a while it gets boring
Some similarities are very obvious, did you run out of similarities?

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Mastering
The did well in finding the extra information and decorating the poster.
They could write the words clearer.
No questions.

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Matering

It is very neat and colourful and

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In case you want to double check some point of the rubric, etc.

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Mastering-good detailed info and great presentation.

WWW-lots of information, good layout,  good links

EBI-if it was a bit neater it would a lot better, it looks a bit rushed

I think they could have had a bit for depth in each point

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Developing because the information given is not that detailed enough and the things you did well were giving the correct information as well as having pictures around the Venn diagram is the best part of your work but even better if, more topics to talk about. My question is would you want to migrate to Peru??

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I think their grade is a developing because we can comment on how their countries celebrate and its languages.

I think that the poster that they made had a lot of colours and very detailed infomation. They have pictures to show the country.

To improve your work you need to add more topics to talk about.

Would you travel to Peru?

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I give them a developing because they could identify the difference and similarities between music, festival and food.

The things that went well was the amount of differences and similarities they gave and how they can identify them. The best part of the work was the food area because they gave many different examples and know how to indentify the similarities.

You could improve by maybe instead of only adding bullet points of examples, you could explain why you think it’s the same or different.

A question I would ask would be what they do they do during these festivals stated in the ven diagram

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Grade : I give you a devloping as you can add more information and keep the crazy 20 century beginning off and the sound effects

www: What you did well was including photos and examples and the text.

EBI : It would be better without the harsh sounds that burnt my ears.

Question : Do you like Malaysia? What is your favourite festival in Cuba?

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WWW - The drawings is nice and there is a lot of information
EBI - make it more neater

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Mastering= Give detailed similarities and difference between the culture of the language studied and my own.
Www=you added a lot of information
Ebi=you could have added more colour
Question=where did you find this information

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Developing

I think that doing a video was really creative and that it was really interesting because they even showed some clips of festivals to show information.

They didn’t explain how it was celebrated so you need to improve that and there was a bit too much of images.

I would like when it was celebrated and why. And why did you put that annoying song

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Developing
The things you did well were the decorations and the amount of information. I like how they did a lot of research to find similarities.
It would be even better if the words were clearer. I would prefer for you if you hadn’t used the glitter to write because it is too sharp and hard to see from far.
They missed out the currency
I thought that La Tomatina was only in a certain town?

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Grade=developing=Identified differences between countries
Www=good information and fonts
Ebi=if you added colour
Question=how did you get the information

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Grade : I can give you a devloping as you didn't include anything extra like music and food.

WWW : What you did well was explaining the common things between both countries

EBi : It would be even better with more info on music and their food

Question : Have you ever visited Peru?What do you like about Peru?

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Beginning, because not much of work is going on especially the Venn diagram. Things you did well was having different colors on the poster but to improve I think you can add more information based on the given topic. My question would be, would you visit Mexico in future?

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I think that their grade is a beginning because they didnt finish their venn diagram and they dont have a lot if information on the countries that they were given.

Their paper has different colours.

To improve your work you need to communicate together more so the group can finish the poster in time and have more information about the countries.

Would you want to visit Mexico?

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Devolving - good similarities well presented but not enough detailed info.

WWW-very nice layout, well presented

EBI-if there was more information and more detail in there points

Question-do you think it was better as a video than a poster

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beggining: identified some customs,traditions and festivals which are native to the countries where the language is spoken.
Www=good information and strainght forward
Ebi=more colour
Question= how did you make this

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It wasn’t very detailed and only included some basic information, I give it a beginning.
The things that went well were the colours added.
To improve your work however you need to add more information.
Was this last minute work?

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WWW - you put it into a video , good information
EBI -  maybe you could change the music .....

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Developing=because it was a great song, and you identified some customs,traditions and festivals
Www= great song
Ebi=not enough information
Question=why did you make a video?

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Grade= mastering

Www- I like the fact they have used google earth and has zoomed in, into the country which makes it look like the news. And I also like the part where they compare the foods and it’s very informative and entertaining.

EBI= for the slide where they have put he words with the sign board, they can use a different colour because I keep on mixing the words of the sign board and the words written.

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WWW - good amount of information
EBI - make it more neater and make it more colourful

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Developing=because it shouldn’t be messy
Www=good information
Ebi=good be neater
Question=did you rush this?

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Grade: Developing because you could add more colour in it.
WWW: Everything is very neatly done.
EBI: You could draw or print to make it more colourful.
Question: Would you like to go to Argentina one day?

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I think they get a mastering because they have added a lot of information and drew a lot of pictures.

The things they did well was provide lots of information and draw many pictures. The best part of their work is their drawings.

It could’ve been even better if it was neater. To improve your work you could’ve arranged it better because it seems a bit messy.

I would like to know more facts about both Spain and China.

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I would give them a mastering because their poster is full of facts and colours.

What went well was probably the amount of facts you added and how you portrayed it. Another thing that went well was the drawing added so it gives me some visual aid.

It would be even better if you had used a pen rather than a marker because there are some words that I can’t really read.

A question I would ask would be are these facts realiable?

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Developing- a lot more space to be added but good, and can comment on how these are celebrated in countries where the language is spoken.
Www=good information and pictures
Ebi=more colour
Question=where did you get the information?

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Mastering-lots of good information, and very nice presentation

WWW-the colours display, lots of information

EBI-it would be better if it was easier to read the information

Question-what are the food similarity’s?

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This is same as the second group, there was only some basic information. I give it a beginning
What went well was the colours added in.
To improve your work you could have added in more information.
Was this last minute work?

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Developing

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Developing

You added some cute pictures, and the detail information of two countries.

You could’ve added more details of the different food of two countries

Nothing to ask🤔

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Grade: Mastering
WWW: You added a lot of drawing and colour in your poster
EBI: You could add more information on the countries
Question: Would you like to go to Spain or China one day?

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Developing

Www=it is very informative and very detailed. And I like the fact they have also added the national animal and flower. And I think it’s well researched.

EBI= they could have searched up more topics and I think they could have wrote about the festivals and I could have used
pictures to make it nicer.

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Beginning
The words are written in colour pens which can attract readers’ attention.
They should complete the Venn diagram on time.
I would like to know what the two countries have in common.

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Developing because you didn’t include the custom but it was really interesting

I like that your drawing was really nice and funny and the facts were really interesting

I would like to know more festivals in spain

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It is developing
WWW - is is colourful , enough information
EBI - make it more neater

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There is detailed information and bright colours, I give it a mastering.
The things that went well were the pictures that were drawn and the vibrant colours.
To improve on your work you can simplify the information because it can get boring to read such a big block of text
No questions for now

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Grade: Mastering
WWW: Added a lot of colour in your poster. Nice fonts used.
EBI: You could have added more information in your poster
Question: Would you like to visit Peru one day?

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Developing- lots of good information, but not enough detailed information but overall a good job

WWW-lots of good information

EBI-it is a bit bland design

Question-what are the food similaritys

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I would give them a developing because they could identify the difference and similarities between the festivals and language. I would have given them a mastering if they had covered more topics.

What went well was how detailed they went when explaining the differences and similarities.

What you can improve on is maybe the colour use.

A question I would ask would be how realiable are these sources?

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Developing

Www- it is very neat and it’s very detailed.

EBI= you could have replaced the info at the page of the profile of the countries with pictures instead of repeating the same information twice. And you could have done more topics.

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Developing, more than half of the information on the middle aren't even similiarities. There were a lot of obvious statements included, you included that both countries have over 45 million people but it was already stated that Spain had 46.56 million people and India had  over 1.3 billion people. Other than that, I can detect the customs, tradtions, and festivals.

The colours and decoration were well done, they make it appealing but the best part of your work is that you included information on the customs, tradtions, and festival.

In order to improve your work, you can make the information in the middle more detailed. For example, you included that they both celebrate festivals but that was part of what you needed to find.

How long did you spend on this?

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Lots of information with organised work, I give it a mastering.
The things that went well were the organised text and how simple it was to read.
To improve you can add more colours
No questions for now

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Developing

WWW-nice information,nice layout

EBI-not enough information, not enough colours

Question- what are the food similarities?

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You could add more information for Malaysia and you could explain what the festival does instead of just writing the festivals grade: developing

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Slight issue with reading due to handwriting, overall still good work, mastering
The things that went well were the detailed texts and how much you can learn
What they can improve on is the organisation of the whole project
Was this last minute? Not because of the little information but because of the handwriting

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I think they get a developing because they although they have a lot of information it is a but messy and looks empty.

The things they did well was provide lots of information and do some comparisons. The best part of their work is their information.

It could’ve been even better if it was neater and had more drawings. To improve their work they could’ve arranged it better because it seems a bit messy and maybe write a bit bigger.

I would like to know more facts about both Chile.

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Beginning sorry

WWW: I like the look of the diagram with the two pages and they searched up a lot of festivals and food for Mexico
Ebi: they could have had finished the Venn diagram by putting in the basic information for Malaysia, the comparison and finished the Mexico one.

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It’s nice. You added pictures and it’s colourful
Grade: developing

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GRade : mastering as you included all nessesary info .

www : you did your decoration well as you included along of drawings.

EBi it would be better if you could improve your handwriting

Question : Has anyone in your group been to China? Or are they Chinese?

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It’s awesome. EBI you add English into what you are saying because I believe that not many people understand everything
Grade: developing.

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Mastering

The did well in finding extra information.

They could write the information in colour pens to make the poster colourful.

No questions

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EBI you add more pictures. WWW : you have a lot of information but it’s better if you add colours in it

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Developing

Www- the paper of the profile is very neat and is very well done.

EBI=it would have been better if you could have finished of the circle diagram. And they could have made the circle neater.

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I would give them a beginning because there was only a few facts about the two countries. The venn diagram wasn’t completed and there was very little differences and similarities.

What went well was the colour they used and the pictures.

What they can improve the on is maybe how much time they spent on it so they have time to finish it.

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Grade : I think your grade is beginning as you did not complete it and there is hardly any information

WWW : You did well adding food and some other information.

EBI ; it would be even better if you completd it and you had more information

Question : Have you ever been to Mexico? What do you like about Mexico

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Developing, because they didn’t include detailed informations. Good drawings were there but to improve, more informations please.

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It is developing because you identify the festivals
WWW - colourful and nice information
EBI - make it more neater

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Biginning WWW you disolayed your infomation in a effeicnt way that many people can undersatnd.

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Developing- good information well layout but not detailed enough and not enough colours

WWW-good info, welled layout

EBI-more detail-more colours

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GRade :

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Developing
They did well in finding the music and food in Chile and Malaysia.
They could add pictures and write the words clearer.
No questions

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Grade : Devloping as you did not  include festivals.

www : you did add enough information about your countries religion and music.

ebi : it would be better if you added festivals and food.You could also decorate it more

question : Have you been to argentina? Do you like the food from argentina?

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Grade : developing as you didn't talk about religion

www : you included food and music.

ebi : it would be better if you made your handwriting neater,adding info on festivals and also add some decorations.

Question : Have you ever been to chilie and what do you like about it?