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I can tell you're very passionate about your topic! Add your argument to the argument slide. 

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I can tell you're very passionate about your topic! Add your argument to the argument slide. 

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make sure to state the argument in the thesis slide

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contrast background pictures and text

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Use a highlight for the text on certain slides, only use where you can't really read the text

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Alex's presentation is a 3.5/10 for me. Could be much less broad.

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Alex's presentation is a 3.5/10 for me. Could be much less broad.

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 ALEXANDER ENGLUND's  PRESENTATION FEEDBACK

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 ALEXANDER ENGLUND's  PRESENTATION FEEDBACK

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Use bullet points to list your ideas, then explain to the audience by talking to them.

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None.

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William Ball/ Moultire/ LINGO Presentation feedback

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William Ball/ Moultire/ LINGO Presentation feedback

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Amazing color, very knowledgeable. Could add a few words to the slides.

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Willam Ball, hands down best presentation 11/10  

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Willam Ball, hands down best presentation 11/10  

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beamed

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Parker loves Lingo's presentation. It would be nice to legalize weed in SC. Lets smoke together once medical weed is legalize here!!!

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Parker loves Lingo's presentation. It would be nice to legalize weed in SC. Lets smoke together once medical weed is legalize here!!!

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Put the sub point 2 pic on a slide by itself

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Works cited: Remember to put the MLA citation.

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1. Hook: okay, but could be more interesting
2. Choose a different way to say "pull the plug." Maybe add a pic of your aunt.
3. Add bullet points for ideas so you can talk to the judges instead of reading from the slides.
4. You have great info! :)
5. Add pics
6. Job shadow! Yayyyy!!! Very interesting!

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You should talk about how google and other forms of media all look through your search history and can show you what you would most be intersested in.

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Drew had good good slides and a good presentation the only thing I would change is the contrast on his slide.

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Great pictures, give less bullet points on each slide. Sum up your point with only a few point, and your video is a little bit too long

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Your power point needs some more color to it. Fill up each slide just a little bit more.

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Pictures might not be appropriate for the first 2 slides. Add more pictures, can't fully understand presentation with information given. Explain thesis better than you did.

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NICE HANDSHAKE! Strong hook to start off your presentation. Use more pictures for each slide. Still needs more information on the sub points for me to get a full understanding of the topic.

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Shorten the hook and try to make it draw the judges attention in. Looks good so far and would like to see the presentation when there is more information to be given.

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Make sure to make the text a little bigger so the judges and you don't have to squint to look at what your slides are saying.

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The hook sounds more like a preference question than a question with a specific answer, so rephrase your hook question to something like "Which is better to give to a kid, an iPad or Building blocks?"

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Has good Sub-points

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Try to keep the words and content on the slide to a minimum and focus on speaking/interacting with the audience.
Here are some good ways to work on that:
1. Create speaker notes (in the box below the slide you're editing) and glance at that as you speak.

2. Try and memorize the key parts on your slides by reading over them. It'll be mostly internalized by the time you're ready to present and you won't have to rely on reading off the board as much.

Otherwise, everything else looks great and your topic is really interesting! Good luck on your final presentation.

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Excellent hook and balance of info, graphics, and audience interaction.
Could use some work in fitting text evenly on each slide. Otherwise everything looks great, good luck on your final presentation.

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interesting

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Try and practice to speak with your own words on some slides.

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- Great Hook, very intense
- Finish TOC
- Add more pictures
- Well knowledged in your topic

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Everything looks pretty good (especially the hook), just work on improving the verbal aspect of your presentation.

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Try to make more eye contact.

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this was good bro

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Great photos.

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Greatly improved from your first practice presentation. You could work on eye contact with the audience and relying less on reading directly from the board. Your information was great though, and you've supported your argument pretty well. Good luck on your final presentation!

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Great pics, good and rela

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can see the words

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Info is decent but the overall presentation could be shortened to fit into time requirements. (Also I would not recommend announcing that you don't have an interview.)

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*gives feedback
"moultrie shut yo dumbass up"

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your words to small

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The pros of videogames

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Well spoken very clear points

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Be specific in the opening question

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Great info being showed through graphics. Great job at remembering what to say for each slides so you don't have to look back at slides as often.

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Great information and use of flashcards to limit turn back to look at you slides.

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I like the aesthetic of your slides, fits very well with your presentation.

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Good information on slides and good job at keeping eye contact with crowd.

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Remove counter argument slide if you are going to follow your sub points with refutes. It becomes very repetitive. Good info just condense it and focus your narrative on each slide. Use bullet points make it easy.