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making my point clear

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Find the right quote

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I need to make my claim to introduce the reasoning

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their paragraphs should need to be reasonable and clearly so other people see what there talking about.

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having quotes from the text and explaining what it means

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connect back to the claim and restate in a summary what you talked about

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connect back to the claim and restate in a summary what you talked about

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I feel like if I need to improve my writing than I need to do more practice

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i can work on finding better evidence that helps support the claim

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introduce what you are going to be talking about

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To make my introduction make sense and to have it relate to the subject

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i want  to be able to do more research and have a stronger claim for my reader to understand it further as well as having stronger evidence and for my conclusion to end my brief write on a stronger hand

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i want  to be able to do more research and have a stronger claim for my reader to understand it further as well as having stronger evidence and for my conclusion to end my brief write on a stronger hand

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rewriting the claim and expand on the information a bit further

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you can improve the body paragraphs by

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having a good evidence and something to back it up

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i was able to understand a certain topic from different points of view

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i was able to understand a certain topic from different points of view

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you can improve the introduction by having a strong claim

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you can improve the introduction by having a strong claim

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i have observed that i need to improve with evidence

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i believe the introduction needs to have a stronger claim in needs of having the reader understand hat you're trying to say

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Create an claim that answers the question

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People lack description

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clear restatement of claim

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Write something...

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connect reasoning to claim

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making a clear statement

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have a a strong evidence and reasoning that supports your claim 

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have a a strong evidence and reasoning that supports your claim 

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Give more details and make connections between your reasoning and evidence 

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Give more details and make connections between your reasoning and evidence 

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Restate the claim and give a brief summary of the evidence you gave

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Give more details

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I can explain my evidence by going into depth and discussing how it is relevant, what the quote means and why it is significant

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Have a hook, have a clear statement

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it would be important to tie all of the evidences back together and to leave the reader with a last thought, question or statement

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i noticed that their needs to be improvement in the reasoning.

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Have a good hook so the reader keeps reading 

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Have a good hook so the reader keeps reading 

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Make sure you don't repeat the things you said in your passage.

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Make sure you don't repeat the things you said in your passage.

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elaborate on the reasoning

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the body paragraphs need to include evidence as well as reasoning that talks about the significance of the quote.

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to explains the evidence in the reasoning and to understanding because I can't explain the evidence that well

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to explains the evidence in the reasoning and to understanding because I can't explain the evidence that well

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Ive noticed that ive noticed easy mistakes that make by looking at someone else's

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Some quotes that were used could have been better and werent really connecting to the claim

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the introduction should have a strong claim that gives a hint into what the essay will be about and also should have a hook that will make it stand out

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understand how to present claim without redirecting attention to anything else that isn't relevant or isn't useful to the intro

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I edited a lot of the homies' papers and most of them came from the gutter

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I edited a lot of the homies' papers and most of them came from the gutter

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Stop rambling and focus on explaining key componnets of the evidenc in order to make my writing more effective.

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Stop rambling and focus on explaining key componnets of the evidenc in order to make my writing more effective.

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reasoning is something people need to work better on 

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reasoning is something people need to work better on 

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I can add more reasoning after my evidence and connect it better to my claim

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I can add more reasoning after my evidence and connect it better to my claim

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A strong and clear claim that leads into introducing a relevant piece of evidence.

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A strong and clear claim that leads into introducing a relevant piece of evidence.

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Bring depth and reasoning and connect the paragraphs cohesively 

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Bring depth and reasoning and connect the paragraphs cohesively 

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a lot of the evidence was unsupported by the reasoning so the author needed to go more into depth with explaining the significance of the quote and how it relates to the claim and the overall topic.

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Reasoning was not the best, the evidencce shown wasn't really explanined, or the information said was rambing so it disrupted the flow of the writing.

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Reasoning was not the best, the evidencce shown wasn't really explanined, or the information said was rambing so it disrupted the flow of the writing.

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By making the claim stand out and having a good hook.

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By making the claim stand out and having a good hook.

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elaborating more

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Connect back with the claim

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good evidence and good reasoning

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giving a little more information on it

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There was lots of information

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A introduction is when you mostly describing about what you are going  to write about in you easy or in a paragraph. 

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A introduction is when you mostly describing about what you are going  to write about in you easy or in a paragraph. 

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keep the claim and its topic through out the whole text

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keep the claim and its topic through out the whole text

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have 4 or more pghs

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When you re read it you will see some problems so alwyas re read it. 

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When you re read it you will see some problems so alwyas re read it. 

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connecting to your clam/topics and by giving good evidence. Also good reasoning. 

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connecting to your clam/topics and by giving good evidence. Also good reasoning. 

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strong intro sentence, evidence, and reasoning

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strong intro sentence, evidence, and reasoning

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expand the reasoning, try more on the conclusion and not put SO MUCH information. 

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expand the reasoning, try more on the conclusion and not put SO MUCH information. 

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have a claim that introduces what you are going to talk about and will want me to continue reading

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have a claim that introduces what you are going to talk about and will want me to continue reading

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get every information little by little and then bring it all together

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get every information little by little and then bring it all together

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checked if their evidence was good and if their reasoning is good

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checked if their evidence was good and if their reasoning is good

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connecting back to the claim

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talk about about the topics youll be talking about later on

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talk about about the topics youll be talking about later on

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make it interesting and get the readers attention and bring up the whole point of the essay 

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make it interesting and get the readers attention and bring up the whole point of the essay 

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add evidence

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There will be people that with help you to be a better writer. Also the person that is look over  your work will look at miss spelling words or any errors that you did 

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There will be people that with help you to be a better writer. Also the person that is look over  your work will look at miss spelling words or any errors that you did 

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They can seperate their body paragraphs by a claim, evidence, reasoning, evidence, reasoning, conclusion.

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They can seperate their body paragraphs by a claim, evidence, reasoning, evidence, reasoning, conclusion.

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they all have good strong claim evidence and reasoning but needs a little bit of explanation on evidence 

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they all have good strong claim evidence and reasoning but needs a little bit of explanation on evidence 

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Looking over on how my peers are r

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Be non repetitive when writing the reasoning.

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Be non repetitive when writing the reasoning.

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Restate the claim and question and summarize why your side is better.

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I can specifically, think more about the reasoning. In order to have better reasoning.

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I can improve my intro by making sure i have a strong claim, and making sure it is strong.

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I can improve my intro by making sure i have a strong claim, and making sure it is strong.