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i knew i had to write something real not fake

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getting facts because i do not want to copy

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add good words

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that people had to work hard to get what they wanted

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Thinking in what order I should put my facts in

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i know that my write is not good but i still like it

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One thing i learned was you have to have juice details

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I learned that Ben was he was fighting with England

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read over your paragraph

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my most challenging moment was when i needed to make lots of spelling corrections.

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That Ronald eagan was the 40  Th. peasant and also Ronald Reagan achey gave up being president

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to wok hard

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to add more detals

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Getting pictures on the title page

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To really try as hard as i could so my report could kind of sound like Abraham Lincoln wrote it.

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writing facts like albert einstein died in 1955

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look at my paragraph good and eadet it good

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capitalize more

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more important details like when Abraham Lincoln died I did not include if anyone was with him.

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make sure you edit your work

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make it flow and make it longer

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I added stronger words.

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Know where everything is

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to chek for capitalzation

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trying not to copy from the book.

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I could of  made my words beter

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i can get more fact from the like when they died and when there were born

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picking the book it was so hard

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Jim Henson started making T.V. shows when he was ONLY 16!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I could reread my essay

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My spelling and i always work hard in my spelling to not get talked to because of it.

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henry is a car maker

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to make sure to  period  your sentences. and edit

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making good fasts

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i am glad i got to make something
successful and something i can remind my self i worked hard on it.

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It was hard not to just copy everything out of the book

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to re read my essay

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one thing i learned was to have better hand writing because some time my hand writing is slope

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trying not to copy from the book

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that  I learned about my character good so i'm going to keep it up

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write neat and reread.

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i could have add big and better words

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publishing

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babe ruth's real name witch is George Hermen ruth

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i learned facts about Derek Jeter

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I could have added more details like he was the 40 president on the $50 bill

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Start to be able to write script soon and reread

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i knew i had to put the more inportin detail

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to chek if i have no perided at the end of my setence

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neilarmstrong was the frist person on the moon but it didnt have that many fact now i think of it

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check it after i am done

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tell more about his childhood maybe

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write, babes family names and when thay died

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to add better details

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what i learned was to read over my work and make should nothing is wrong in it

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I am proud of explaining more of his

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to put my info in a better order

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by making more sense .

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I am proud of picking my topic.

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to always chek if my writing pice makes sencs

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incluld how thay died

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write bigger paragraphs

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when i said my speeh in front of all of the prants and i was scard that i would for

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to make the write this essayl

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Finishing tasks on time

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to know your speech

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write longer

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orginize everyting and  read over your paragraph

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that i should look back and see my maskes .

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incloode good details

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give a lot more details and be a little more specific

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tipe my finish pace.

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aniah williams

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That i know everything about Franklin Roosebelt my person and how to do a essay to.

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.include dates

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add more details

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read over my essay.

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doing the speech in front of the people

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That I had to work very hard.

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to make essay longer .

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not copy the books words and use my own

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all about peple.

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could of added more facts of his family

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in my next piece i will make the spelling better

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I am proud to type on the laptop and to pick a topic.

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I learned alot about roberto clemente

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I learned more about Stan Lee

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give a little more infromation and sentces

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I am proud of my teacher picking out my book princess Diana .

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i could have been more specifidc on harry houdinisd

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re-read my essay and fix spelling

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What I should is to use bigger
words.