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group4 week3 ( Wenhui Xue, Cecilia Zhu, Jing Wu, Tomoaki Yoshida)

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Week 3 - Group 3 （Yuqian Ning，Meihan Liu, Taan, Jiayue wang）

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Nice slides… Good use of colours and images. Careful with the use of arrows, as they were difficult to follow. Maybe consider a mind map for that, or the predetermined forms of PPT.

When you present with ‘First’, ‘Second’, it would be a good idea to use numbers in your PPT, so the audience can follow you better.

Think about how to make better transitions between slides and presenters. You could say things like: ‘And now, my classmate (insert name), will address the issue of X’.

I think your last slide is very informative. Whilst this is good, you have to think about how much text you include in the slide, which I thought could’ve been less in this case.

Because the focus of the artefacts is evaluating the text, maybe your evaluation could’ve been an independent slide. I felt the evaluation did not have much space in the artefact.

Overall this is a very good presentation. Think about the points I mention before and it can be even better =)

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Good use fo colours, and contrast between background and text, which makes reading your slide very easy.

The transitions between slides could be improved I think. Mostly the way you give the turn to your classmates, think about saying things such as: ‘and now my classmate (classmate’s name) will continue with X…’.

I liked that you didn’t use much text, but used  headings instead and explained them.

Part 3 of your presentation was very nicely delivered. It was very engaging and you used relevant examples. Well done!

Some of the last slides, contain small font text. Be careful with this as the audience may not be able to read it.

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Very nice slides: I liked that you didn’t include much text, and decided to explain the ideas rather than having us read them. You also highlighted certain key words, which is good to draw the attention. Careful however, with the contrast between background and text, there was a word in white with a yellow background, very hard to read.

Good transitions between slides. Sometimes you gave the turn to your classmates very smoothly, some other times, it was a bit mechanical.

Overall, the delivery of the content of the slides was very good - Well done!

Slide 9 has some issues: There’s an image on the top left corner that is very difficult to see/read. Consider this in the future.

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This work was massive. You managed to organise a lot of information into an artefact, which could be difficult to read for the audience, but you made sure tell the audience to zoom in in order to follow the presentation.

The delivery was very good, although at times, there were some hesitations. You didn’t have much time to organise/rehearse this, so it’s ok.

Very good transitions between presenters.

Careful with the last part of the presentation. Generally speaking, don’t use white text with yellow background as it’s very difficult to read, especially if the text is small.

One thing I would consider is the amount of text you use. It’s generally difficult to read a lot of text when someone is presenting. So, as a member of the audience, I prefer the speaker tells me the information rather than me having to read it.

For the last presenter, I wasn’t sure where the information you were presenting was on the artefact. Maybe it would’ve been easier to have for sections so that each of you had a very clear space to discuss/present.

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I like the way you show your opinion. It's concise. You use arrow to better organize the structure and use different colors to stress the point. Maybe you can pay more attention to reduce the number of words in slides.

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the flow chart makes me easy to understand the structure of thearticle but there are too much text on the powerpoint which makes me visual fatigue.

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The artefact looks so academic as it's very informative and useful for understanding from the text.

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The artefact looks so academic as it's very informative and useful for understanding from the text.

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It's great to offer some information about writers and it helps me better understand the article. The subtitles in the slides are also useful. The speaker also mentioned COVID-19 as an example and proposed question which make me think. Maybe you can better organize the slides because in some slides, half of them may be empty.

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It is a fancy way to present a mind map.But I think it is better to divide it into three parts that make us easily to read.And I think it helps us understand your thinking clearly.

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The artifact is pleasant to look at and it's quite easy to understand from the slides. 

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The artifact is pleasant to look at and it's quite easy to understand from the slides. 

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I really like that you connected with the IFSW, which is a good way to help us to learn more about the extra information refer to this article.

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wow that is so amazing and clear!
the whole presentation is such a wonderful lecture!
u guys made a very clear separation of each peer's role and prepared so well!
I love the design of the slides, the words in bold or in different colors helped me so much to understand the whole thing!
outstanding guys! cheerio

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I like your presentation, your logical organization of words make me feel clear of the whole article， but maybe there are too many works in the last slides

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Your mind maps are really rich. I can see it's been carefully prepared. And...the transition between speakers is great!

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Your mind maps are really rich. I can see it's been carefully prepared. And...the transition between speakers is great!

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I like your presentation. Because I can clearly understand the structure and focus of the article. In addition, you have emphasized the key points of different parts through color changes, which is worthy of my study.

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It's very very concise to read and understand. You make full usage of visual help like colors, bold. And the presentation of you all are clear to understand. But it's a little hard for me to track the correct space in mind map when I listen. Maybe you can add some arrows or divide the maps into different pages.

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Hey, guy~Maybe our group did  not use the example of COVID-19, but group 1 used, hhh.

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This is very informative artifact and it shows that your group thought is well-organized. The transition of the presentation is very smooth. 

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This is very informative artifact and it shows that your group thought is well-organized. The transition of the presentation is very smooth. 

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I like your presentation. Your PPT is very academic, which makes me think you are very professional.

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your evaluation is so great,espically for the "main body"part.You use four small parts,it is logical and clear.

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your evaluation is so great,espically for the "main body"part.You use four small parts,it is logical and clear.

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It's definitely my favorite presentation. All of the group members were speaking clearly and the design of the slides is creative and informative. Great job！

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I like your presentation. Through your explanation, I can clearly understand the author's point of view.

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you may spend a lot of time to complete the mind map, I think it's clear and easy to understand, thanks for your presentation!

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great job! this is a well-designed PPT. I like it.

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I like the speed of the speakers, it made me focus on what they said!

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using mind map is so creative， audiences can flow the presentation logically through the helping of the mind map. it's easy for us to understand the main points.

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this slides and presentation left a deep impression on me，the structure is so clear and logic， many relevant pictures are included which make the slides attractive!

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I think you did well in using little important words in the slides, which is consice, and trying to explain them clearly during the presentation.

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I think you did well in using little important words in the slides, which is consice, and trying to explain them clearly during the presentation.

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The design style is cool.

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I really like the whole poster. The structure is clear and main points are all marked by bold. The design of the poster is pleasant and easy to read.

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the flow chart helps me understand your powerpoint a lot.

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It's great! The slides are concise. You discuss both texts in a neutral way. You also use table to better organize the information.

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I like this powerpoint. Because it is very clear to find the difference between reading and listening text.

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clear and easy to understand
like your speed of the whole speech(not so fast)

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well-done! is a brief ppt.

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You compare the speech and academic texts in ever small part,it is clear!

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You compare the speech and academic texts in ever small part,it is clear!

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the layout is rational and good. it is easy for readers to find what they want.

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The whole text is well-organized in one paper. The perspective of comparison is clear.

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You give many details about why you think it's a strength or weakness. The slides are also easy to read!

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You organize the speech and ppt in a concise way. And your examples at the end help me better understand.