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Content: It is evident that you prepared your speech and tried to make it different by using informal expressions. Although you talked about Manuel’s life and tried to relate ideas, there are some isolated sentences throughout your presentation. Make sure you work on connecting ideas for future tasks.

Language: You used some of the grammar topics discussed in previous units and tried to sound as natural as possible; however, you still made mistakes with basic structures. See comments below:

o Wrong order: “I hope become famous with those videos because I’d like to”, “His boss did not give him his permission”, “Always you want to kill them”, “Maybe you wonder who is he”, “So if you want to know who is he”, “Only you need to give him your number cellphone.”

o Articles: “An special person”, “He has a talents like artist ability”, “He likes to take a pictures”, “a different girls.”

o Subjects: “(…) because in the other company changed his role”, “Is the reason because he likes”.

o Repeated words: “After” “and”

o Wrong word: “He was going to study vet”, “He had to do the other trip in the other time”, “He sometimes wear a glasses”, “And the more important he is a good cooker in especially national dishes”, “He admires a Steve Jobs because she was a good business administration.”, “”

o Not clear: “(…) because he wants to like her other animals” “you want to take on vacation”

o Prepositions: ““Before of continue that presentation”, “I hope become famous”

o Verb form: “He admire”, “He want to start studying the next year”, “He wants to told me”, “He want to know a different girls”

o Pronunciation: Pleasure, I’ve, him, changed, career, go, help, relatives, unfortunately, permission, bosses, strict, vacation, talents, pictures, landscapes, sunsets, national, and cooked.

Non-verbal communication: You kept eye contact with some people in class, but look at everyone to connect with each of them.

As mentioned in previous tasks, you need to review basic grammar topics, check vocabulary, and focus on pronunciation since it affects meaning.

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Hi Lida, John and Michael.

I love your video, the idea of work in “study” in the classroom was amazing and your costumes were really correct.

You should be careful with the pronunciation in general. Specially with: first, raining, scared, expand, among others.

The intonation was correct in almost all the video.

You were very spontaneous in general. I really enjoyed watching your video.

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Jhon  hello,
I liked working with you, I think we should all improve the grammar and pronunciation of some words, but I want to emphasize that you have a better fluency and spontaneity. Good job.
Best regards.
Lida Marcela Falla Aldana

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I think need to be more relaxed speaking in front of others, I can learn the skills to improve my fluency. When I started my presentation I felt good because I had prepared my task and I put into practice my knowledge acquired
in class and by the way I like give speech.
On the other hand , my strength is I try to connect ideas and remember grammar without reading.

Wrong word:  . I said sometimes do not go like you want, I think is sometimes thigns do not go the way you want.

I remember when said to me. It is correct He said to me I forget the subject

bosses are very strict. it is correct bosses are strict.

Finally I need to improve my pronunciation  in this words; career, unfortunately, admirers and do not forget the connect to have best fluency when I am speaking, but after all I listened my presentation and I liked it.

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John, you prepared the task beforehand to accomplish the objectives set. In this video, you kept the same pace, as the previous ones, and tried to articulate properly. Even though you used the target language, you need to pay close attention to the use of basic grammatical structures and final sounds of words because you tend to add a /t/ sound.

Review how to pronounce the following words: height, road, newscast, engineers, landslide, registered, mountain, risk, exploited, raining, and edition. Go over the sentences below and write the correct ones on your Padlet.

1. Gerunds: “Thank you for prepare our newcase”

2. Wrong word: “Thank you for prepare our newcase”,

3. Prepositions: “They have been a risk because any moment the mountain would collapse” “If you have a first aid kit, you need to is very important in case a natural disaster”

4. Verb form: “They said not to go when start raining”, “If it continue raining”, “They have been a risk”.

5. Articles: “It was terrible disaster”

6. Singular / Plural nouns: “They said they would be more landslide”

7. Subjects: “According to the authorities, had registered”, “They said not to go when start raining”

8. Wrong word:Mostly due to where sand and (?) have been explotated.

I recommend not memorizing or reading what you are going to say and working hard on pronunciation and verb forms to be more accurate as you speak. Do not make up words!

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Hi Jhon, I think you were spontaneous when you explain somethings that happen to you, but you have to pay atention with pronunciation about a few words.
I think that you can do better so thanks for sharing part of your life.

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John, I knew you were into sports and you loved to ride your motorcycle, but I did not know you got your tattoos removed! Thanks for sharing those experiences with us.

Because you spoke slowly and used conversation strategies, it was easy to follow what you were saying, so try to do it in spontaneous interactions as well. Although you mentioned a couple of sentences with tag questions and past perfect, you need to use those topics any time you can. Work hard on pronunciation and some basic and advanced grammar topics as shown below.

These are the words you mispronounced, but in general, I suggest working on final sounds and stress: tonight, events, school, started, separate, 1990, at, mathematics, won, 2006, and, tattoo, know, fortunately, handle, graduated, found, began, important, police, enjoy, it’s, and that’s it.
Review the use of the following grammar topics:

1. Present vs past: “I had three brothers” “When I start a high school, my parents had already separate” “It is because I had bad relationships in that moment” “When the technology begin”.

2. Wrong word: “They have a beauty daughter” “In the 19th, ” “I had already known the ocean” “I like drive my motorcycle when I am boring”.

3. Prepositions: “I was good at mathematics in a school” “I did not know how ” “It’s very important you know” “I like travel so much” “By 2016, I had been in San Andrés” “I like drive”.

4. Past vs past perfect: “After, I had already removed those tattoos and I had found my first job”

5. Definite article: “the technology”

6. Tag questions: “It is easier than you thought, isn’t you?”

7. Subjects at the beginning of each sentence: “Is very cool”

For future tasks, I recommend linking ideas and reviewing the topics previously mentioned to have a better performance in terms of language. And AVOID SPEAKING IN SPANISH!

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1. By 11:00 a women had forgotten her coat and taken a taxi.
2. When Deisy went out of the theater she had already finished her practice and she had already taken a shower.
3. When a women picked up a package in the shop, a men had already crossed the street.