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The ending of paragraph two was very effective and the sentence was very thought provoking. In addition, the explanation for the thesis was reasonable. Finally, in the second paragraph there are many details which make it extremely effective.

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Some effective writing techniques the author of this essay included include the structure od

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It did a good job of comparing them...
They used lots of big words, which is good and bad...
Also, they used more "effective" vocabulary than regular...
Cool blanketed statement I guess...

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The ending for the the second paragraph was very effective. Another effective technique would be the way they used a 'Say, Mean, Matter' layout for both of their body paragraphs.

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Some effective techniques that the writer used in the essay was that they did a good job in explaining the thesis statement. They also organized their writing in orderly way. The writer paraphrased some of the quotes so that their writing was smooth and it was flowing.

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Some effective techniques that the writer used were...
Very good transition statements
she followed the say mean matter format
The quotes made sense and supported the theme

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One thing that she did good is that she followed the format - Say, Mean, Matter

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I like the authors blanketed statement

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I liked the way that the author of the L.I.T essay explained the entire story so the readers could understand the quote better.I also liked the fact that everything was clear and nicely formatted in a neat pattern.

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I liked how they had put in a lot of reasoning to make a big punch

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I liked how they had a really good ending.

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One effective technique (the only technique) the author used was he ended with a thought provoking statement.

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The author did a good job of explaining their quotes in the body, as well as using a good hook and thesis. Another effective technique the writer used was leaving the reader thinking with a provoking statement at the end.

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I really loved the blanketed statement and that her background info in the intro wasn't to long or to short.

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I like how the author properly organized their paragraphs. I also like the blanketed statement as it is a great hook.

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The author did many things well, but a few things that stood out to me were:
1- The author paraphrased most of the events in order to give good background information before adding in the quote. This allowed the readers to have a better understanding of the events in the story before reading the quote right away.
2- The transitions between paragraphs flowed smoothly, and there weren't a lot of sudden changes of topic.

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Something effective that the author did is that she picked a really good theme. I think that the theme was good because there were lots of evidence. The author also described everything in detail.

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I like how he/she added many small quotes.

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The author summarized what happened in "Eleven" in the first body paragraph. In that summary, the author put in Rachel's feelings from the book towards certain things. For example, he wrote, "  "dumb" Phyllis Lopez " instead of just Phyllis Lopez in order to express Rachel's feelings correctly.

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Some of the effective techniques that the author paraphrased the text and was able to start on a good blanketed statement. Also, the author left the reader on a good note.

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I liked how the author wrote oneself, and didn't write you. The author's analysis was organized. He/She didn't organize it they way that we were learned, but still included the tag.

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Something the writer proved effective, was the evidence he/she portrayed to get the common theme between the stories across.  The transitions were also fluid like and flowed into one another.

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I really loved how the author wrote the blanketed statement.

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I like the way they paraphrased and did not just say, "In the text, it states *quote*"
The blanketed statement was very good, and it thought it was appropriate for these two texts.

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The authors theme was relevant. The quotes he were very effective. It gave a good explaination for the quotes.