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Confidence and Lack of Empathy

"The Most Dangerous Game” by Richard Connell is about confidence and reveals that overconfidence may lead to a person’s downfall.
Haruki
I like how you explained about overconfidence. Overconfidence really leads you in a bad way sometimes.

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survival and fear
In the "Most Dangerous Game" by Richard Connell, teaches us about survival and that how that it is an important skill to know.
Michael - do not include characters in your theme statement. It needs to be general to apply to life beyond the story. - Ms. Jankiewicz

Johan
I agree that it teaches us about survival but how can you put it in your own words to include real life situations and not directly stating the story.
Haruki
I like how you explained Rainsford's skills but you could write about lessons that you learned.

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Abuse of Power and Isolation

In the "Most Dangerous Game" by Richard Connell teaches us about even though you are rich and have a lot of money doesn't mean you do illegal things like killing people cause your bored.

Max, this is to specific to the story, a theme statement should be broad enough to apply to life in general - Ms. Jankiewicz
Ethan.
I think that you should change your word choice to be more vague so the theme would be more universal and less about only being

Gus - You should put a motif in there so we know where your theme is coming from, otherwise good job

Shiva- i like the idea but i think you can alborate

Zachary - I liked how you explained briefly how being bored does not mean you can do whatever you want

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Fear and Man vs Man

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Survival and Abuse of power

In the "The Most Dangerous Game" by Richard Connel, teaches us about survival and reveals that keeping yourself mentally going while trying to survive is heavily important.

Haruki
I like how you said mentally because survival is dangerous

I agree, once you begin to doubt yourself is when you begin to struggle. Having a positive mindset is key to survival. -Foard

Emily
I like the overall statement of your theme, but try to connect both motifs. I only saw one represented.

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Survival and Fear

In "The Most Dangerous Game" the author, Richard Connell, teaches us  about  fear and that  its not something you should be hiding because even the bravest man have fear

Vitoria - stick to one motif, don't try to fit both into one statement.  It becomes confusing. - Ms. Jankiewicz

I like your perspective, "even the bravest man has fear," it shows that everyone is human and that there is not a "perfect" person out there in the whole world. -Foard

I like how you said even the bravest men have fears. I think that shows how even the bravest men have emotions Miguel

I like how you worded your theme because they way you wrote it makes it seem more universal and relatable. - Emily

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Fear and Survival
"The Most Dangerous Game" by Richard Connell teaches us about survival and that even if the odds are against you, you cant give up and have to push yourself to survive.

Johan
I like how you didn't directly connect to the story but you wrote it so I could apply to the real world or anyone else.

Maxwell- I like how you picked a motif that can apply to almost anyone and is more relatable.

This is a very motivational quote, no matter how hard something may seem, it is still possible. and if you put your all into it, you are likely to achieve. -Foard

Laura: I really like your lesson and I totally agree with foard that this is super motivational. Also I like that you made it relate to the real world.

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Good vs evil
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empathy/lack of empathy.
In " The Most Dangerous Game" the author Richard Connel teaches us about empathy and that all life is important.

Maxwell - I like how you explained how empathy was showed in the story.

Zachary - I like how you explained how empathy applied with the importance of life.

Michael S
I liked how you explained your theme statement short and nice not long.

Michael A- Do you think that he tried to show that Zaroff's life still had intent behind his evilness

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Fear and Survival
In "The Most Dangerous Game" the author, Richard Cornell, teaches us to have courage and survive all while facing your fears.

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abuse of power the desire to escape In "The most Dangerous Game" the author, Richard Connell teaches us about abuse of power that every life should be treated with respect .

Shiva, what does it teach us about abuse of power?  You identified the motif, but did not give the lesson. - Ms. Jankiewicz

Ethan
maybe you should add on a bit more like  ... teaches us about abuse of power and how you should trea

Gus - You should expand upon the idea of abuse of power, and explain what abuse of power teaches us about the story.

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Survival & fear
In "The Most Dangerous Game" the author,  Richard Connell, teaches us about survival and how it is an important skill to have in life threatening situations.

Miguel: I like how you you said that its important skills to have if you ever get into a death or survival situation

Laura: I think you did a great job at making sure the lesson is broad enough to where it doesn't only relate to the story but people in reality can also relate to it.

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Jose I like how you said its something you need in a life or death situation, but if you can, please elaborate on how this might affect

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Man vs. Man
violence
In The "Most Dangerous Game" the author, Richard Cornell, teaches us about life that it is important so you shouldn't waste one.

Please be more specific in your lesson, this is too broad. - Ms. Jankiewicz

Ethan
you should use this quote at the end of page 13:
"You'll find this game worth playing," the general said enthusiastically. “Your brain against mine. Your woodcraft against mine. Your strength and stamina against mine. Outdoor chess! And the stake is not without value, eh?"

Michael A.- I like the idea but maybe expand upon what it means

Johan

You have a good idea on the theme but could you elaborate on how it teaches us about life.

Jose
I like how you generalized the idea of life meaning a lot as a whole in the world, we also need a motif though, which can help bring the idea of general lives mattering into a more focused stream of view.

Michael S
I liked how you explained your theme statement and did not make it to big.

Emily
I don't understand how this statement could connect to violence or man versus man. Try to connect the two motifs within the theme.

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Perseverance & Fear

In the "Most Dangerous Game" the author, Richard Connell, teaches us about fear and that you will always face something that you might not like or are scared of.

I like your lesson, but it is a little wordy.  Try to be more concise and to the point. Ms. Jankiewicz

Gus - I think you should use this quote "Rainsford had fought his way through the bush for two hours. "I must keep my nerve. I must keep my nerve," he said through tight teeth." (14) This quote will help your theme because it shows that even a brave person like Rainsford, will also have fear.

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Survival and Empathy
In "The Most Dangerous Game" the author, Richard Connell, teaches us that Empathy can be seen by both the innocent and the evil.

Jose
I liked how you said it can be seen by both the good and the bad, can you possibly explain why and how empathy is used so we as a class can have a better understanding of what you think the theme is?

Maxwell- I think you should explain a bit more on how this could relate to the real world, other than that you did a good job.

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Fear & empathy

In "The Most Dangerous Game" by Richard Connell, the overall lesson of the story is the importance of all life, big or small and how life should be lived to it's best. It is human nature to want to help out the others around you (thought not everyone.)

Zachary - I agree with you because "The Most Dangerous Game" is about hunting, and Zaroff and Rainsford want to live life this way because they have a passion for it.

Shiva- I agree with the statement that all lives are important

Jose
Importance to life is quite important, do you mind telling us how and in what situation why?

Vitoria
I like how u said that the "overall lesson of the story" its a really good way to improve you sentence.

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Fear and Survival

In the "Most dangerous game" by Richard Connell, teaches us about fear and it reveals the prey instincts that humans have.

I am not sure what you mean here, please be more specific in your lesson - Ms. Jankiewicz

Haruki
What does prey instincts mean?

Michael A.- I think you should better elaborate on the fear idea.

Laura: I think that you could elaborate on the concept of fear but otherwise i think you did good!

i like how you use "the prey instincts  that humans have"

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Fear and survival

In "The Most Dangerous Game", the author, Richard Connell, teaches us about fear that you must be prepared to face your fears every once in awhile.

Michael
I think you did a good job explaining but it might be helpful if you expanded more on your explanation.

Michael A.- I like the way you added that fears must be faced at times.

Miguel
I like how you say every once in a while