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Split into four groups. Use the ‘CCTV revised notes’ to answer the following:

Group 1: Costs

Group 2: Perceptions

Group 3: Effectiveness of CCTV

Group 4: Factors affecting effectiveness of CCTV
Group 5: Effectiveness of CCTV

1.Are there up-to-date sources under each heading/ subheading?

2.Is there a variety of sources under each heading/subheading?

3.Does any heading/subheading rely too much on one source?

4.Is there enough information to write a section based on each heading and at least one paragraph based on each subheading?

5.Is there a mix of statistics, examples, quotes and paraphrases included under each heading and subheading?

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Activities 3&4 cctv notes under headings & subheadings

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Work in the same pairs / groups. Look at the CCTV notes again.

1.There are too many headings (six). Which two could be removed?

2.In the remaining four sections, which subheadings could be removed?

To help you answer these questions, consider the following:

•Avoid a long, general information section (background information should be included in the main Research Proposal Introduction instead).

•Don’t include sections that are too descriptive and / or that only cite one source.

•Make sure headings / subheadings are relevant to the two selected variables / selected ideas from the research focus.

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Reading and Note Taking at University - Reading and Note Taking at University (shef.ac.uk): https://xerte.shef.ac.uk/play.php?template_id=779#page1

Organising_and_Prioritising_final.pdf - Google Drive: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1p9m85p00Jnsspr8zReNTFH9147cyKIvy/view

Cornell_Template.pdf (sheffield.ac.uk): https://www.sheffield.ac.uk/polopoly_fs/1.876097!/file/Cornell_Template.pdf

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Open the notes, above, and skim-read the headings and subheadings.

1.How many headings / subheadings are there?

2.Do you think the student has included too few / a good number /  too many headings and subheadings?

3.Are any of the headings or subheadings similar to topics you brainstormed in Activity 1?

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Baoyue Jiang, Chia-Yu Lee, Jingjing Zhou, Junyi Zhang

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Baoyue Jiang, Chia-Yu Lee, Jingjing Zhou, Junyi Zhang

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Jingyu Fan, Yinzewen Li, Yixin Zhang, Zixin Wang

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Jingyu Fan, Yinzewen Li, Yixin Zhang, Zixin Wang

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Junjie Xu/Wenrui Li/Yanhui Kong/Zixuan Hu

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Junjie Xu/Wenrui Li/Yanhui Kong/Zixuan Hu

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advantages of cctv installations

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hack in CCTV

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live

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CCTV'S suspicion

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cctv in the residential area

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abuse from government

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Benefits of installing cctv

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aged care

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CCTV may invade people's privacy

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security

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Residents' privacy

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cctv and privacy

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Looking for missing people or animals

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Disadvantages of using CCTV