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I  changed the sentence They fight well against flying enemies but are weak against enemies on the ground to They usually destroy flying enemies but struggle against enemies on the ground.   I changed the sentence They wear masks to cover their heads to They wear masks to disguise their identity.

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I changed  had to leave their parents, and I also had to change the one where they see three boys.

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My project is a p.s.a about the pros and cons of video games. My first sentence was It is fun to talk to friends when playing. I changed talk to chat. My second sentence is playing video games to long can effect your eyes. I changed effect to hurt. I think these verbs make my writing clearer.

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I haven’t started my Writing project yet
But I’m still thinking about it

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I am making a commercial about Harry Potter, because I want people to live it. I have changed the read into live. I am going to create lots of adjectives in my commercial about Harry Potter. I once again changed write for create.

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I made changes to some verbs in my writing.
First sentence: Boozer walked over to the fence that separated his yard from Bentley’s.
New sentence: Boozer trotted over to the fence that separated his yard from Bentley’s.
First sentence: She always has a lot of energy and she loves to play and run fast!
New sentence: She is always EXPLODING with energy and she loves to play and bolt through the yard.

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I changed a part in my writing project and used more vivid words. My original sentence said When I open my front door they darted outside the front door and got taken by the pound.
My new sentence is as the dogs dashed through the neighborhood the pound truck came rolling by. Chase and ginger panicked and tried to get away but got taken by the pound.

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I read the book are you ready to play outside by mo Williams.  I didn’t find any prefixes in my book,, but I found suffix. Having ,pouring ,nothing, istarting , &raining.

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Dakota (the book I’m writing->) The  psychic Girl.

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Dakota (the book I’m writing->) The  psychic Girl.

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At first I was gonna make a book about what I hate and then I thought of making another wolf book then I took a break and watched my favorite anime Saki and then had an idea what if a make a book the the show saki!

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I wrote a lot more and I added punctuations

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I changed some words and one of them was I changed bounced to rolled and I changed rebound to board

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I changed 1 of the words 2 glitching and 2 is teleporting

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I’m gonna write about “What if... a little girl was embarrassed to live in a zoo?”. I’m still working on it. Amazing writing and scenes coming soon in book! 😃

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I change my verbs  The two words I put were zoom and lights

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I have not started me writing project yet

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I made a few changes.  I changed my mom yells to my mom exclaims. Also I changed one day to once upon a time. I also changed thinks to ponders.

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What I changed in my book was  The scientist is running away -> “ahhhhh” the scientist called and he started running away. I also changed The monster is getting bigger and bigger -> The monster is getting really really strong and really really tall.

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I changed some of my verbs and action words.
And started on book creator.

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I’m going to write a story there will be multiple books. It’s could Ghost vs Shadow

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I’m writing bout Goldilocks and the three bears.
But I’m changing it up and putting a little MLG in it.

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I am going to write about Star Wars Rebels

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I’m gonna write about  A half devil half angel and her devil sister  and her angel sister. I’m Excited about writing this because I wanted to write something like this for a long time. And I’m really happy that I am going to write something like that now.

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For my writing project I’m going to do a commercial on the book the real mccoys.

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i  Roll a fiction story about a girl and her dog the end  Ginger and Chase those are the dogs 🐕 name

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I am doing fiction story about a girl that is rich but has the most normal life till she gets teleported to another world.

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I am making a story about a different version of Rapunzel

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I read my unicorn I first Chloe did not like her unicorn  but she started to like her unicorn and then they became best friends.

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I want to write about gems and minerals.

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Chase
My story is about a kid that plays basketball. My idea is the kid does bad the whole  season and his coach is going to let him shoot a game winning shot and he made it.

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I am doing nonfiction and what I am writing about is the video game Sonic Unleashed.

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I am going to write about what takes place to make the news each day.

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I am making a fractured fairy tale and the original tale is Cinderella

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Sense I’m going to be writing fiction my story will be about me and my friends becoming 2 inches tall

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I am going to be writing about basketball 🏀

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I am going to write facts about where is the barrier reef

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I’m taking a fairy tail and putting my  imagination in it. But I don’t now which story yet

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My stories about tigers

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I’m making a p.s.a about video games and pros and cons so people can be interested because a lot of people love gaming and i do to. I am going to do some pros and cons of my opinion and facts on pros and cons.

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I am making a commercial about Harry Potter, because I want lots of people to read it. I am also going to add some action like, Quidditch, lots of characters, and stuff like that. I am going to write lots of adjectives in my commercial about Harry Potter.

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My story is about a bubble bath