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1. Each character should act and have a tone when they speak.
2. is to use resources to spell correctly such as asking people.

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1.I need to start adding punctuation.
2.I need to add paragraphs.

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1. I want to make my story more descriptive by using more dialouge and inner dialouge.
2. I want to use a dictionary to make my spelling correct.

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One of my goals is to make each character have a tone in how they speak and act.

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One of my goals is to make each character have a tone in how they speak and act.

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Another one of my goals is to use resou

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1. I need to work on my spelling and to make sure my spelling is correct every time.
2. I need to use more punctuation in my writting to give my story more felling.
3. I need to put more life in my characters and make them talk more.

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1. I need to work on my dialog with all of my characters because there is very little in all of my stories.

2.  I also would like to work on reactions especially when it comes to shock or tragedy and comedy.

3. I also need to work on my ending with like a life lesson or how I felt.

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-write more
-add more details
-discriptive

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My goals are to make my characters seem real by including more dialogue and personality.

I want to elaborate my stories by being discriptive and adding adjectives.

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1. My goal is use more dialouge and work in my spelling.

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1. My goal is to use more dialogue and thoughts.
2. I also want to organize my story into more paragraphs so it's easier to read.

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1. I will improve my spelling by keeping some kind of spelling tool, so that if I don't know how to spell something, I can use my spelling tool to find out how to spell it.
2. I want to develop lessons more clearly. I will do this by adding in hints and mini-lessons, so they can tell what the lesson is

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1. I need to add more details, internal thoughts.

2. I need more transition words to my stories.

3. I need to have a lesson to add to my stories and narratives when I write.

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My goal is to be more descriptive by using more adjectives,change each characters tone, and introduce each character.

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1. I will write a narrative with a lesson
2. I will write with more details so the reader will understand what I am trying to explain.

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1. I need to work on my handwriting
2.I need to work on spelling

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1. My goal is to use more descriptive adjectives

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I will try and focus on the theme and make sure to hook the reader.
I will try to add the characters expression and tone of their voice.

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1. I will use paragraphs to show change in time/place
2. I will cause a lesson to be learned

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1. I need to work more on my spelling and to make sure I can

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1. I want to work on having a lesson in my writing.

2. I also want to use more transitions to make my text more interesting.

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I need to use more descriptive words so my readers can  understand my setting and characters more.

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1) I need to give the reader a more alert on the lesson in the writing.

2) I also need to work on when to separate my writings into paragraphs.

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1) I need to more paragraphs when the settings change and when some one is talking
2) I need to add dialogue in my story when someone is talking

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I need to add more detail by adding more dialog, inner dialog, and a more descriptive setting.

I need to work on making my stories longer.

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1. I want to work on setting the stage for what lesson would be learned during the story
2. I also want to work on having a meaning behind my stories

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1. I need to tie up loose ends at the end of my story
2. I need to spell better by using resouces around me

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1) I will choose a narrative with a lesson/theme
2)I will be more descriptive by elaborating more on each topic.

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1)I need to be more organized in my writing by using paragraphs when there in dialog, a new subject, or a different setting.
2) I also need to add tone and detail to my dialog.
3) I also need to use resources for spelling like the dictonary and thesaurous.