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Nigger

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Give descripted details

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dont say something over and over again

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more Dialogue and describe more

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use detail in the scene when bob dies

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maybe bring a new side of randy ,and be very descriptive make pepole want to rread chapter 5

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emotion of how randy and his friends felt

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Use imagery to describe the situation

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the go to fast.

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not that descripted

need to shhow more emotion

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you will need dialoge

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Describe the stabbing to make it intresting

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use literary devices

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you will need imagery and dialouge

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I think that it should inclued Randy's feelings for the greasers before and after the insident

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Use varied sentences

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give Randy lots of feelings of sadness and anger

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create new paragraph after dialogue.

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It needs emotion. People's reactions to his death. Many feels.

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Stick with the book

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At least 5 figurative language uses

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give emotion in dialouge

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Emotion. How does Randy feel about just losing his best friend?

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Somthing not expected...make it intresting

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I think that the emotionn of just loosing your best friend should be added into the after thought of Randy.

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use a lot of good imagery during the fountain scene

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You need to make sure you include that they were drunk

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Dialogue and Natural

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You need 5 literary devices

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You need to add on fiction to make it intresting

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Da Jack Brown

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It needs first person POV with Randy as narrator