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Laionna- I can tell you took your time drawing this bike and i really appreciate the finishing process not much for me to dislike or critique 
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I like that you used red for the bike to make it stand out and you made it all crinkly. My guy looks really hurt down there. I'd only suggest adding more depth to the scene if you didn't want to color (like shading to the sidewalk) - Yasmeen
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Anonymous 10h
racquel-i like the fact that you took a different approach and didn't keep the bike perfect and pretty, i just wish you would've added color to the road behind the person so they can pop out against it.
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James- I like your use of warped reality or something that isn't traditionally a bicycle. Only thing I would say is to add some color to your person.
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Anonymous 9h
i think its super cool that you drew someone getting injured on their bike instead of making this a feel good kinda thing. i think some color on the road could make both the person and the bike stand out more - iris
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yiesha c - i like that texture you made the bike but i think you should have added more color to the guy below
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i like they style used in this piece it feels kinda like a children's book . and the limited use of colour really make things stand out.-ron
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alaiah- dope, more details on the grass
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Mercedes: I like the approach you took in creating this. The way the bike looks like it is broken and the guy is hurt. More color and texture, as well as maybe even seeing more of the guy would help it stand out more.
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Anonymous 8h
I like the color that you use but I really can’t tell what’s going on in the picture maybe if there was a little bit more details-Ryan
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Rayne- I really like this. I like that this is the after math of getting hurt on a bike. I wish you added blood or something just to make it seem like that the character really got hit/fell.
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laionna- i like the concept on the little details on  the character's face like the teeth falling out and this is shown from the inside of the mouth, you can see there are large gaps where the missing teeth should've been but yea a little color would help distract the smudges on your linework, i struggle with making clean lineart myself being left handed 
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Skylar- The concept is really well put together and it's super detailed. I wish you would've made the piece look more finished though. Maybe by lining the figure with pen or something
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i really love the perspective and contrast in this piece, the colors really make it pop! With this however i do wish there was also something about the person that would make them stand out to the eye as well, maybe by lining them or coloring a piece of them. - Marci
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Mercedes Morales: This is a really cool idea. I like how you rearranged the bicycle into something else, but still have the idea of a bicycle in it. I think that coloring in the girl or the background instead of having it white could improve the piece a lot!
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racquel- i really love the idea of the bike being some type of flying machine or jetpack and I like the pop of red that you put onto it. i think a background with with just a little color would really add to this piece
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I like your piece, the bike looks like some sort of aerial contraption, and the pop of red is great. I would say since the subject is done w/ pencil, maybe ink it if you're comfortable with that because it may get lost when you look at it from a diff. perspective. - James
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Anonymous 9h
this is really well done, i like how you decided not to color the whole thing in order to make different parts of the drawing stand out more. i think the only thing id say is to maybe add something to the background to give us a sense of just how high in the air this person is - iris
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Michelle Brickner 9h
I love this concept and the style which harkens to what seems like an early to mid 1900s period. I love the creative reconfiguring of the bike into a flying machine. There are so many amazing flying machine diagrams and drawings out there from pre-airplane times. try searching for them. It is such an interesting past-future kind of genre. I feel like adding some pattern to her coat and even a solid color in the background would help this feel more like a finished piece instead of a sketch or unfinished product.
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alaiah- i love this art style
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can add a little more shading
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yiesha c - i love the art style, its so cute. i like how shes kind of holding the bike up with her hands but some color on her hair or something would have made it pop
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Anonymous 9h
I can see you have a solid understanding of perspective but something ab the figure in the foreground feels really flat maybe go a bit darker in the shading -ron
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laionna- Everything about this piece is amazing I love the drawing of the character, It is nicely drawn and I can tell you took your time on it and even though its a amazing work of art I just wished you finished coloring it so i could see the bike and the character coming to life
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I really like the character you drew. I think it would look really good if there was more color in it-Ryan
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Rayne- Cool drawing. I really like that you reconstructed the bike into something else. I also like that you just colored the bike and made it pop. Maybe you could have made something pop on the character too like the eyes or the hair.
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Kalyse- I like the way you used the concept of the bike as a sort of jetpack. At least that's how I see it. My only thing is that maybe you should of colored the coat to make it pop more.Besides that I love it!
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I love how she feels like she is in motion. Most of your portraits feel more still so I think this is a cool addition to your work. I wish we could see the bicycle a little more and that this had a bit more of a finished look. Maybe adding a color to the background and a little shading on the figure?
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Mercedes: I like how she is riding the bicycle and her dress is flowing, but I wish there was more detail in the face. I also think adding color and having more of the bicycle be visible would improve it a lot.
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Laionna- I love the expression on the character's face and the realistic flow of her hair back but I'm not sure why her arm is behind her back and I feel like you should add more details to explain why its back there like if it's resting on the back of her seat or anything, Also the drawing does seem to be unfinished and incomplete without any emotion describing her background or rather, where she is or headed but overall its a good piece and maybe you were just in a hurry
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The lady you drew seems really peaceful and I think it would be better if they were some color in it and if you could see the bike-Ryan
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Rayne- Nice drawing. Cool sense of movement with the hair looking like it’s moving in the wind. I think this piece would look so good with colors in it especially the hair it would add some good volume.
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Skylar- I really appreciate the way you used movement in this piece.
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I love the concept of this piece, and the way you chose to color the bikes is perfect! I think that shrinking the bicycle in the back could help with perspective, and adding more details to the grass and the road might help make this piece pop a bit more. - Marci
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Mercedes: The bicycles are really cool, I love the colors and the wheels. I think you could add more into the background, like trees or flowers in the grass just to add more dimension to the drawing.
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The spiky wheels look fun and I like the cool effect you put in them, it makes me wanna go find a bike like this. I also like that the colors aren't exactly conventional because I've never seen this color combo before. I'd like if the grass was more textured and if the sky had a little gradient to it - Yasmeen
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I like this piece, I think the wheel shapes give it a funky feeling, maybe add some darker blues to the sky and some grass. -James
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Anonymous 9h
very colorful
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yiesha c - i love the texture of the wheels and i love the colors you used for them
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i like the colour pallet for both of the bikes but something feels off looking at them in perspective maybe off set he yellow bike back a bit more or give it some 3 dimensionality to show that it's in front of the red bike.- ron
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I love how this feels like a product concept or advertisement! The colors and movement are great and uplifting. I wish the road/ground didn't have black outlines since nothing else in the picture does. Also addding some texture to the image might be helpful.
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Rayne- Love the colors . It’s also cool that you used perspective. I think it looks a little flat. Maybe you could have tried to add more texture to the grass.
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Laionna- I enjoy the perspective on this art piece and how colorful it is, its most definitely eye catching an stands out and though the clouds and grass seem to be refined a bit its an amazing piece
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This is really cool it has a lot of color the color really makes it pop I like how the bikes seems to be 3D-Ryan
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Anonymous 6h
The colors and composition of this piece are really nice to look at. It looks like there is something missing though, it looks a little empty.
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I love how fun this piece is! The person's colors go well really nicely, as well as the balloons. I think the tricycle was also a unique choice! I think that detailing the background could help some, specifically saturating the colors of the grass and sky. - Marci
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racquel-this is so cute I love the colors, and i like that you can actually tell the balloons are transparent, i just wish there was more flowyness? something that made the picture convey movement.
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I really like this piece, I think all the tones really work and the use of a unicycle instead of a bicycle is nice. Maybe add some more clouds and adding a light light *light* touch of blue to the sky would make the subject look even more in place -James
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Anonymous 9h
The dead expression on the clown makes me think of cycling through life in the midst of clownery or something like that. It's something about it that makes me feel them. I like your use of dull tones around them and they are clearly the focal point with their brighter colors. I would suggest adding a little more shadow to the skirt where their knee bends to help define it.
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alaiah- very cool you should have added color to the sky
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yiesha c - i love that you used a unicycle for this project. i love the colors and the shading
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I think this is cute but i feel like the composition would look a little better if you added color to the background.-Taniya
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laionna- I love a finish drawing with all the colors complimenting the finish piece and how her brighter and flasher outfit distracts the audience from the background but I would like to see some more details on the background so I could get a better visual understanding of what wither or not those are clouds or bushes lying a rounding open white areas.
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Mercedes: I like how instead of doing a traditional bicycle you used a tricycle. I think having brighter colors would look cool and really make the art pop. Having more going on in the background, such as flowers, trees, or more detail in the grass would look cool.
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Rayne- I love your clown. Also it’s cool that you did a unicycle instead of a regular bike. I wish you kept the whole bright color thing going and made the background also pop. The clown has popping colors but the background looks kind of dull. Maybe that was the point but when I think of a clown I think of bright colors. So the background also being bright a bubbly would have added to the clown agenda.
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I like the character you drew but the colors seem to be really faint-Ryan
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Anonymous 5h
This is really fun and the character is really detailed. Maybe adding some more detail in the background would add some more to the piece.
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I love this! Its so cute and inviting. I think the colors you've picked goes great with this piece- especially when you used a different color (like that yellow and orange) to bring the viewers eyes to the balloons. The balloons do feel a little cramped being obviously squeezed in to fit the page rather than cropping them, and I feel like you've done the same thing with her free hand. Otherwise, I think this is a wonderful piece and I like it a lot :) -Agatha
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alaiah-looks real ,cool
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Mercedes Morales: I LOVE the frogs and their hats. The idea of frogs having a picnic together is so fun and unique. I think you could maybe added more color in the lights to make it look like they are glowing or add stars in the sky to look like its dark outside.
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This piece is so adorable! I love the way everything is drawn. The perspective is very nice. I think working on the lighting of this piece would help the setting of it a lot. - Marci
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This scene is really cute it gives such a relaxing vibe. The phrogs are just chillin. I like that everything was colored and you even gave the bike wheels a shadow that matches its spokes. I can only think of, what if the bike had a little flower basket, but that's it - Yasmeen
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I think this piece is adorable, it gives me the same feeling a bicycle does, Maybe add something in the background to give the sky more dimension -James
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alaiah-i love how this look like something out if a book use more color
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this is so cute i love the little forest picnic you've created here, the watercolor gives it a children's book feel because its so soft feeling. i think you could add a little more to the surrounding area like mushrooms or small animals. - iris
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yiesha c - i think the idea of frogs having a picnic is so cute and i love the frogs cute little faces
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I love this illustration style! I think it would be great if you would work with a creative writer and create a children's book! One thing i'd like to see you try with the watercolor and layering more variety of each color. Try using a range of different greens (some more yellow-green, some more blue-green, some more dull, some more bright) and the other colors as well. This will give a richness and complexity to your work.
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Anonymous 9h
This is Adorable! I agree with iris though adding other smaller things like little flowers would be nice.-Taniya
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i like this, the illustration is simple and its effective here though it feels really flat try varying the tones of the colours-ron
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Kalyse- I like the nature feel to this piece! All I have to say is add more detail to the leaves and maybe the grass, but besides that I like it.
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I love the environment you created in this piece. It's really cute. Adding a bit more detail would help out a bit but otherwise I really like this. Skylar
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I like this unique take on the bike, I'm curious about what materials you used and what your thought process was for making it. I also like how it isn't obvious what it is. It makes you look for a little while. I think having more of a contrast in colors would make it pop more - Yasmeen
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i admire the shape you decided to make the bike it gives it a feeling of being alive and alien like its super cool to look at and i think you did a great job. i think one thing you could do is add highlights in places like the mouth looking part to make it sorta monster like.- iris
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yiesha c - i kinda got confused at first but it made me really want to look at the shapes and figure it out, although, i think it looks amazing
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Rayne- This is Unique. I think it’s a really out of the box take on this project. I’m kind of taking this as if it’s a “melted bike”. It’s a piece that you have to look at for long to really understand what you are looking at and it’s really fun to try to figure out. I think if you are really trying to sell that this piece has something to do with a bike I would make the bike shape more defined.
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alaiah- very fancy could have made the lights a little darker
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I really like how its looks like someone has chewed it up and spit it out -Taniya
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I love that this seems like the bike is deconstructed and demolished! It is very end of the world feel to it. It is also kind of funny and almost feels like it could be made of used chewing gum or something. I wish that the base was made of soemthing more substantial instead of cardboard. I think if it had a more solid and 'important' looking base it would be taken more seriously as an important artwork. I would love to see it from different angles and maybe think about how and where you photograph it and how that impacts viewer perception
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i like that you broke away from the traditional idea of wha a bike is and experimented uhh no real critique looks nice- ron
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Mercedes: This is super cool and unique. I love how it kind of looks like it is melting. I think using another material for the base would improve it more than just cardboard. Maybe even painting the cardboard a color or adding a pattern would be nice.
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This is super different I like how is not the same as anyone-Ryan
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Kalyse- This piece kind of reminds me of Salvador Dali with the tire, kind of like its melting away sort of feel. It cool you went for a more abstract piece.
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Skylar- I love all the use of texture and dimension you used. I wish there was some more color that helped the piece pop or something like that.
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laionna- Im not actually sure whas going on here but this is very nice and diffrent from what i've seen
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I love the colors and technique of this piece, it is the definition of eye candy! I think that maybe coloring the bike or adding some color to the left side might finish this piece more. - Marci
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At first I thought that this was pretty straightforward in that you drew and wrote "bicycle" many times around the bike; It looks like it took a really long time to fill the page and I like that the other half of the page becomes psychedelic. But when I look at it more, I feel like this is in perspective of someone saying "bicycle over and over again in attempt to ground themselves in reality, but they can't help but see a whole other world to it - Yasmeen
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yiesha c - i love the patterns and i can tell you took some time to draw this
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i like how instead of using color for the whole thing you used it for half of it makes it feel a little dreamy. i think one thing you could do is to line the bike thicker so the left half of the bike doesn't blend into the background as much.- iris
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alaiah i love it
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i love that simplistic nature of this piece and i love that you filled out the page very well done-ron
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Mercedes: I like how it is simple and straight forward; It is a bicycle. I think that coloring the bicycle in a bright color, like red or green, would make it stand out more in the piece.
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Rayne- cool colors and love the way you incorporated the word “bicycle”. I really like the mushroom you did and I wish he just made the whole colorful side just full of mushrooms.
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It looks like a lot of time and effort was put into this piece. It looks like it was fun and satisfying to finish. Maybe adding more contrasting and block colors would make the composition pop.
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