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A: Yet. Yet looks and sounds correct. RIGHT B:In the same way. Does not sound right. WRONG C: For example. Does not show a example. WRONG D: Therefore. Does not sound right. WRONG

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A: Yet. It shows that even though subway cat got mad they still formed some kind of friendship. RIGHT!!!!!
B:In the same way. There was nothing that was the same  in the sentence and in the sentence before. WRONG!!!!!
C: For example. There is no example. WRONG!!!!!
D: Therefore. People usually don't be friends when they don't know each other and get mad at one another. WRONG!!!!!

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F-He turned and his golden eyes towards me almost looked embarrassed.This is a werid  sentence ,and thier is no coma.WRONG
G-When he turned his golden eyes toward me ,he almost looked embarrassed.This

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A- Delete the comma -Wrong- It is wrong because when you read the sentence with the comma and without comma, with a comma sounds better.
B- Change grabed to grabbed-Right- It is right because you need that other consentant to make the vowel a not say its name.
C- Change that to it-Wrong- When you read the sentence with that it doesn't sound right and what is that. You need a subject before that  to be that.
D-No change needed-Wrong-It is wrong because there is a change needed in sentence 4.

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A-Yet: It makes sense and it sounds better RIGHT
B-In the same way: It doesn't make sense WRONG
C-For example: It doesn't make any sense
D-Therefore : It doesn't sound right

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A-delete the comma-WRONG because the comma is needed
B-changed grabed to grabbed-RIGHT grabed is the incorrect spelling
C-change that to it-WRONG it is incorrect grammar to change that to it
D-no change needed-WRONG

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F: my mother shrieked about approaching strange animals WRONG

G:My mother shrieked.As she warned me about approaching   strange animals WRONG

H: MY MOTHER WARNED
ME ABOUT APPROACHING STRANGE ANIMALS, SHE WARNED ME wrong

J:my mother shrieked and warned me about strange animals

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F: Besides I don't think we would of laughed nearly as hard if our cookies would have been perfect.-  RIGHT because you don't need a period between those sentences
G:Besides, I don't think. we would of laughed nearly as hard if the cookies would have been perfect.- WRONG because you don't need a period in between a complete sentence
H: I don't think i would we would have. laughed nearly as hard if our cookies would have been perfect

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A:after sentence 10 WRONG, because it doesent make sense.

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F:My mother shrieked about approaching strange  animals that warned me Wrong                                       G:My mother shrieked.As she warned me about approaching strange animals WRONG.
H:My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals, she warned me WRONG.
J:MY mother shrieked and warned me about strange animals RIGHT.

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A. subway cat seemed happy to be on his own again . RIGHT because when he was when he was on a leash he did not like it . So when he so when he was not on a leash he was fine.
B.He was the subway cat,and now he was worried about having to find food . WRONG because he was not having a hard time finding food.
C.He carted his silly little self  straight to the door. WRONG because it does not rap up the story

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F: Delete the comma-WRONG because you need a comma for two different thoughts.                                                       G: Change grabed to grabbed-CORRECT because you need two Bs in grabbed (Also its underlined in red)
H: Change that to it-WRONG it would not fit as good as that J: No change needed-WRONG you need to change some spelling.

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A-My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals that  warned me. WRONG because animals can't warn you
B-My mother shrieked. As she warned me about approaching strange animals.WRONG because it dose not need the first period
C-My mother shrieked about approaching strange  animals ,she warned me.WRONG because it dose not make sense
D-My mother shrieked and warned me about approaching strange animals.RIGHT because it sands right

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A: After sentence 10. Does not make sense. WRONG!
B: After sentence 11. Still does not make sense. WRONG!
C: After sentence 12. It still does not make sense. WRONG!
D: This sentence should not be added to this paragraph. RIGHT!!!

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A-change ginning to grining: it is spelled right WRONG. B-Change brought to brung: brung is not a word WRONG. C-change are to our: are is when you ask a question or a statement and our is if you are talking about you and other people RIGHT. D-no change needed: there is a change to sentence 13 WRONG

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F.Delete the comma-deleting the comma would cause the sentence to sound incomplete so......it WRONG!

G.Change grabed to,grabbed-grabed is not how you really a word so......it might be right?

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A:Change your to you're- You're you are going to do something RIGHT
B:Change attention to atention- Attention has TWO t´s WRONG
C:Change ingredients to ingredient´s- The ingredients do not own anything WRONG
D:Sentence 28 should not be changed-nothing needs to be changed WRONG

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A- yet -RIGHT,because it fits the best
B-in the same way- is WRONG because it is the wrong transition
C-for example-WRONG-because there is nothing to compare it to
D-therefore-WRONG-is the wrong transition

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F: He turned and his golden eyes toward me almost looked embarrassed-wrong because you do not need the and also you need to add he after me.
G: When he turned his golden eyes toward me ,he almost looked embarrassed

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A: Change grinning to grining- WRONG because grinning is spelt right
B: Change brought to brung

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F.delete the comma-Wrong it helps the structure.
G.change grabed,to grabbed-Right because there needs to be a double

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A- delete the comma-WRONG
B- changed grabed to grabbed-RIGHT
C-change that to it-WRONG
D-no change needed

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A= With fanboys you need to add a comma before but in this case.-
B= To delete the fanboy but would be confusing- WRONG
C= It's talking about one person not more than one. - WRONG
D= There needs to be a comma before but. - WRONG

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F-delete the comma after mom-WRONG because it is listing.
G-change me to I-RIGHT because I goes in the predicate.
H-change looked to looking-WRONG it is the past.
J-sentence 24 should not be changed-WRONG because it needs to be changed.

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Which transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 23?-A: Yet- RIGHT because, it sayś ¨Over time we formed a sort of friendship.¨                                                         B: In the same way-
C: For example-
D: Therefore-

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F: Change this to which- it's wrong because which doesn't sound right in the sentence and it would need a comma to transition to the rest of the sentence
G: Change save to safe - That's wrong because safe has the same sound, but not the same meaning WRONG
H: Change later to latter - that's wrong because latter is a word but it's not spelt like that and not used correctly in the sentence
J: no change needed - that's correct because the sentence sounds and used correctly RIGHT

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F: Change this to which-its wrong because  which does not make sense in the sentence that means it doesn't sound right therefor its WRONG
G: Change save to safe -this is wrong because safe sounds like save but safe and save do not have the same meaning WRONG
H: Change

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A-insert a comma after planned:You need a comma before a FANBOY RIGHT
B-delete but:It wouldn't make any sense WRONG
C

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A: Insert a comma after planned-There needs to be a comma to connect two sentences.RIGHT
B: Delete but- There needs to be a conjunction after a comma to connect two sentences.WRONG
C: Change she knew to they knew- Mom is not plural and they is plural.WRONG
D: No change is needed in sentence 33- There needs to be a comma before but.WRONG

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F: Delete the comma. The comma is needed to combine the sentence. WRONG!
G: Change grabed to grabbed. The double consonants make the a short. RIGHT!
H: Change that to it. The it does not make sense. WRONG!
J: Make no change. The sentence is not correct. WRONG!

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Mom's brithday present din't turn out as we had planned ,but she knew that we loved her.

A-Insert comma after
planned.Comma is used for connucting sentances RIGHT
B-delete but.This a fanboy we need to conecct the sentace.WRONG
C-Change she knew to they knew.The narrtor is talking about one preason thay is plual.WRONG
D-no change needed.This is rarely needed plus the seatance dose not sound right. WRONG

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How should sentence 28 be changed?

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A: insert a comma after planned.
needs a comma to connect  two sentences right .

B:

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F: Change this to which- you needed a comma in between sentences 29 and 30 to use which WRONG
G: Change save to safe- safe is the wrong meaning WRONG
H: Change later to latter- the double consonants make the a short sounding WRONG
J: no change needed: this sentence sounds correct RIGHT