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Compare the corruption of Victor’s character to that of his creation. What is the cause of each man’s downfall? Could anything have been done to save either one of them?

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While Victor's downfall comes from his fears and his creation's downfall comes from his loneliness, both could have been saved through the support of those around them.

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"Sometimes I grew alarmed of the wreck I perceived I had become, the energy of my purpose alone sustained me (47)"

In this quote it becomes clear that Victor is hiding from the reality that he himself is suffering by burying himself in his work because he fears having to address the wreck of a person he has become. This has two major impacts on Frankenstein's demise. First, it forces him to continue the project because he feels as though it is the only thing keeping him going, and therefore he must continue in order to feel like he has a purpose. Second, because of the fact that he is in such ill health, he is not in a state to consider the consequences. So in a cruelly ironic twist, Victor's demise happens almost solely because of his attempts to avoid it.

"future ages might curse me as their pest"

Frankenstein's concern for future age's impressions of him does seem to be motivated by his own selfishness. While creating another "monster" might have saved humanity as a whole, he is so driven by the fear of what might happen and how there is a possibility that he might be seen in a negative light by future generations.

The second quote you have here is not cited. I would also say that this is not enough of a quote to support the idea that you are attaching to it. While I do agree with you that these are Victor's fears, you are not giving enough context as to what is happening and not enough of the quote to match to what you are saying. -3

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The monster could have been saved by affection

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The monster could have been saved by affection

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"there was none among the myriads of men that existed who would pity or assist me. Should I feel kindness towards my enemies?" (137)

This quote demonstrates how there is a clear opportunity for the monster to have changed if he had seen any human who was willing to help him. His whole point with this quote is that if no human is willing to help him, he owes nothing to them. The monster shows genuine desire for human connection and to have the love and support of another creature. Had a human showed him kindness, his course could have been righted and he could have been offered a better path.
-- again you are correct but you are cutting the quote off at the wrong point. You need more of the text to clearly support what you are saying here -2

"If you consent, neither you nor any other human being shall ever see us again...My companion will be of the same nature as myself and will be content with the same fare (149)"

In this quote, the monster himself declares that he could have been saved if only he had been given someone like him. He was clearly willing to leave humanity even if he wasn't happy just so he could have the chance to have a partner and be loved and experience the feeling he sees other humans, like the cottagers, experiencing. Had he been given a companion, it is likely he would have kept his word and abandoned humanity to be alone with his mate because he has no motivation to do otherwise.

he is not saying he could gave been saved, he is telling Victor that he wants a companion. This shows that he could have been saved but he is not saying this. -1

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Victor could have been saved by the support of his family

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Victor could have been saved by the support of his family

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"I knew well what would be my father's feelings, but I could not tear my thoughts from my employment... I wished to procrastinate all that related to my feelings of affection (46)"

This quote demonstrates how the entire creation of the monster was separated from his family or any positive influences. Victor's obsession truly consumes him and he loses the ability to rationally think about the consequences of his actions because he is so blindly focused. Had he tried to continue his connection with his family more and not isolated himself from them so thoroughly, it is highly likely that they would have helped him see the error in his obsession, or at least helped him to deal with the situation better.
-- how exactly does the quote show this? You are not tying your ideas to your text

"A thousand times rather would I confessed myself guilty of the crime ascribed to Justine but such ravings would accuse me of being a madman (75)."

With this quote, Frankenstein gives up his opportunity for support from his family due to the fact that he is afraid of their rejection. The consequences of this action are not faced by Frankenstein, but the fact that Justine dies is solely due to the negative effects of his fear of persecution. This guilt ends up being part of Frankenstein's decision not to make a second monster, and ends up being a large part of Frankenstein's fall from grace.

This is not what you are claiming. You are claiming that the support of his family would have saved him. He is concerned with his ego here not with their lack of support. He is speaking about public opinion not his family. This quote does not work here.  -5

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While Victor and his monster's demise both have different causes, both Frankenstein and his monster could have been saved by people and the love of the people around them. The novel Book  Frankenstein is, at its core, a story of what it means to be a human. In this sense, you can see that Shelley is essentially making a point that inherent in human existence is the necessity of connection that saves people from negative consequences. In the story, both Victor's and the monster's isolation, whether self imposed or societally determined, is the root of all the negative consequences that end up happening throughout the story.
-- sounds unfinished.

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I do not believe that this is the best example of what you are capable here. Your quote selection is at times not in line with the thesis you are defending and your analysis , while it does contain good ideas, is not always tied directly into the quotations that you are assigning them. You are more than welcome to edit this.
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"Shall I respect man when he contemns me? I will revenge my injuries. If I cannot inspire love, I will cause fear" (148)

The monster at this point directly states that the cause of his destruction is his rejection by society. The way that society treats him is inherently cruel and leaves him with a feeling of hatred. The monster is only choosing to inspire fear because he was not able to access the opportunity to receive love and is therefore trying to find an alternative that can support him.
You are supposed to be showing me how the monster is feeling lonely and isolated-- as this is what you are claiming is the cause of his downfall . There are many quotations in the piece that show this in a much stronger manner. -2

“I admired virtue and good feelings and loved the gentle manners and amiable qualities of my cottagers, but I was shut out from intercourse with them, except through means which I obtained by stealth, when I was unseen and unknown, and which rather increased than satisfied the desire I had of becoming one among my fellows (120)"

The monster expresses in this quote that he would be happy to have accepted love, but his desire to cause harm that causes more negative situations for him is directly caused by the loneliness he feels. The entire experience with the cottagers directly represents his desire for assimilation, but also how his rage and negative impulses are driven by a feeling of abandonment.

-- the monster is not saying that he desires to cause harm here. Also he is not saying that he would have accepted this. There were other quotes that directly spoke to this. -2

Overall the quote selection here is not the best for your argument.

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