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great usage of color and visual elements to make your information appeal 

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great usage of color and visual elements to make your information appeal 

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The colors are distracting, maybe chose things that are not as bright

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The colors are distracting, maybe chose things that are not as bright

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Too bright!

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i like the way that you present yourself and the way you use your body language

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i like the way that you present yourself and the way you use your body language

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Pick colors that contrast each other more, it's hard to see while text in a bright green circle

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Pick colors that contrast each other more, it's hard to see while text in a bright green circle

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You have a good use of eye contact and hand gestures!  

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You have a good use of eye contact and hand gestures!  

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Its hard to understand your line of reasoning as you are talking very quietly.

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good selection of statistics to explain the relevance of your problem

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good selection of statistics to explain the relevance of your problem

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you clearly understand and know your topic

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you clearly understand and know your topic

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good usage of arrows to show how different factors are correlated

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good usage of arrows to show how different factors are correlated

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I cant see nutritional health very clearly. change background color or considering switching it more meaningful visuals

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I cant see nutritional health very clearly. change background color or considering switching it more meaningful visuals

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I like the colors and transitions in your slides as it is very engaging. 

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I like the colors and transitions in your slides as it is very engaging. 

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Your problem and gaps in research connect really well to your research question! 

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Your problem and gaps in research connect really well to your research question! 

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You don't explain the connection between the effects of sleep deprivation - can you go into more detail on how one leads to the next?

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You don't explain the connection between the effects of sleep deprivation - can you go into more detail on how one leads to the next?

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Are you asking too much at once? How will you be able to answer all aspects of the question 

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Are you asking too much at once? How will you be able to answer all aspects of the question 

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I like the use of arrows to showcase how one thing leads to another - it also helps contextualize your question 

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I like the use of arrows to showcase how one thing leads to another - it also helps contextualize your question 

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Research question sounds quite specific, maybe broaden it to ensure you can have a proper population/sample size

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Research question sounds quite specific, maybe broaden it to ensure you can have a proper population/sample size

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I like how the fruits on the slide relate to your research about the importance of consuming foods with high nutritional value. 

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I like how the fruits on the slide relate to your research about the importance of consuming foods with high nutritional value. 

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I'm not sure about the cause and effect slide, it indicates that lack of sleep causes eating less food which causes lower self esteem but there might be more overlap rather than direct connections.

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I'm not sure about the cause and effect slide, it indicates that lack of sleep causes eating less food which causes lower self esteem but there might be more overlap rather than direct connections.

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If you are looking in the UAE, would you compare this to a different country?

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If you are looking in the UAE, would you compare this to a different country?

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good decision using a mixed method research, it might be a bit tricky but it's definitley possible

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good presentation and presentational skills

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Include a scope to your issue, perhaps limit it to a specific location or type of education curriculum in order to make the project feasable.

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Include a scope to your issue, perhaps limit it to a specific location or type of education curriculum in order to make the project feasable.

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How could you look at culture without other confounding variables coming into play?

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How could you look at culture without other confounding variables coming into play?