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Auroras feedback to Megan:

-Add: Explicitly reference course material

-Good reflection on practicum experience

-Included supporting ideas 'growth mindset etc'

Megans feedback to Aurora:

-Discuss unity with the two documents well

-Self reflection on teaching

-Reference course work and practicum placement

-ADD- More specific practicum experience

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Stephania: Peer Review- Switch word choices into being more specific to education. Use another example for self-regulation.

Julia: Peer Review- Go more in depth using the Building a Community of Learners document.

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Andrew Alfonso feedback to Jessica:

Your reflection explains how teachers can create a learning community by focusing on personal reflection, having students work together, integrating technology etc. Consider using the phrases listed in the 21st century competencies when explaining these items (ex: collaboration, communication, innovation, etc.)

Jessica feedback to Andrew:

You've provided a thoughtful reflection on creating a community of learners and integrating 21st-century competencies into teaching. Your examples, particularly referencing Glasser’s Model and the importance of adapting to students’ needs, are well-articulated. Consider using more content-specific vocabulary for further clarity and depth in your reflection. Well done!

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Feedback for Student A:

Make shorter

Include picture or book reference that supports learning styles

Add another course theme

Good on the specific examples

Good on the uses content-specific vocabulary accurately just add one more

Feedback for Student B:

Word count is good

Include a book if possible

Make one more connection that relates to course readings

Use of context and vocabulary is great

Add at least one questions that you are wondering about

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"You've provided a thoughtful reflection on creating a community of learners and integrating 21st-century competencies into teaching. Your examples, particularly referencing Glasser’s Model and the importance of adapting to students’ needs, are well-articulated. Consider using more content-specific vocabulary for further clarity and depth in your reflection. Well done!" - Jessica Lacz

I will also be adding a diagram, as I liked that she included diagrams to help support her thoughts.

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Bridda's Feedback from Tia:

What was really great:

1. critical thinking + solid example is good, shows that there is a thorough reflection and supporting ideas of 21st century skills.

2. content-specific vocabulary is used throughout --> community building, interconnectedness of the skills

3. 2nd skill is referenced, too.

4. building community through every day interactions and strategies are made: student of the week

5. student voice and effective communication --> another skill

Suggestions:

maybe rephrase the diversity section in the conclusion to connect to the skills in a different way.

incorporate more things from lectures like circles, sharing, culture or themes like name games, etc.

Tia's Feedback from Bridda:

What went really well:

1. Great how 21st and MI connect

2. Great connection to how educators relate to 21st century skills

3. Good explanation of how educators apply these 21st century skills and examples (talking circles)

4. Good mention of effects on students

Suggestion:

Specific examples from placement are missing to show real-world examples

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Valentina's Feedback for Alessia

Add examples that you would do in your on class to make it more personal.

Overall VERY well written!

Alessia's feedback for Valentina

Use content from the course.

Add real life examples to make it more personal to you

Overall great reflection!

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Patricia:

repetitive in some parts

can be more specific in some areas

would be better to organize my writing in different paragraphs or sections

specified some examples of how knowing learning skills could be helpful in the classroom through different activities

Dianne:

list some of the 21st century skills

provide specific examples of how it can contribute to building a community of learners

visual aspects included (photo) which was appealing and informative

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Alyssa did a great work in reflecting on the 21st Century Learning and applied it to specific and relevant examples from her practicum experiences. Make sure to ensure include and Building a Community of learners article and comparison.

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Chris's feedback for Maggie:

Add an example from practicum or real world experience

Included various of discussion based on the 21st century competencies

Maggie's feedback for Chris

Used content specific vocabulary and clear understanding.

Try to add a specific example from own experience

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Candice's Feedback For Bianca:

--> Include how the visuals intertwine altogether

--> Enjoyed the connections between placement and 21st century competencies and visuals

Bianca's Feedback For Candice:

--> Like how the visual connects community and 21st century competencies

--> Include a question for reflection that you may still be wondering about

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Michael: Peer review- add more details that are related to experiences that you have had in placement, look over vocabulary.

Melanine: Peer review- use more specific examples from placement.

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Did a great job on reflection.

Be careful with repeatitive information

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Stephen's feedback

Good connection to course themes and use of relevant language throughout.

Could reference more about different learning styles

Language is very precise, professional, and coherent

Sabrina's Feedback

References 2 themes from the course

Good allusion to learning styles and use of examples

Referencing specific materials could be beneficial