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Dear Mum and Dad, How are you? I am keen to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports academy. I am enthusiastic to join the paintball class this coming school long-term holiday. Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is a professional and outstanding coach. Moreover, the fee is only RM90 for three sessions. The price is affordable and fair. Not only that, I do not need to buy a water gun as the organizer will provide for us and I only need to prepare body armor to get shield. I really hope you allow me as I could challenge myself to a new talent. Thank you. Your daughter, Lee Ann

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Dear Mum and Dad,

How are you? I am keen to share with you the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am enthusiastic to join the paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is a professional and outstanding coach. Moreover, the fee is only RM90 for three sessions. The price is affordable and fair. Not only that, I do not need to buy air guns as the organizer will provide it for us, and I only need to prepare body armor for protection.

I really hope you allow me to join this activity, as it would help me challenge myself and develop a new skill. Thank you.

Your daughter,
Lee Ann

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Dear dad and mom,

I can't wait to share with you about the amazing sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join paintball class this coming school holiday.

Quess what, Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is an experienced and professional coach. Moreover, the fee s only RM 90 for 3seissions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, I do not need to buy the air guns as it will be provided by the organizer and I only need to prepare body amour only.

I really hope you allow me to enroll in this Lingua Sports academy because it is a challenge for me to defeat the other teams.

Your son

Zen Xi

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Dear dad and mom,

I can't wait to share with you about the amazing sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join the paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what, Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is an experienced and professional coach. Moreover, the fee is only RM 90 for three sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, I do not need to buy the air guns as it will be provided by the organizer and I only need to prepare body armor (remove "only" here).

I really hope you allow me to enroll in this Lingua Sports Academy because it is a challenge for me to defeat the other teams.

Your son,

Zen Xi

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy.I am keen to join BMX Cycling this coming school holiday.

Guess what?Mr Jackson Wang will be my coach.He is experienced and knowledgeable.Besides,the fee is RM150 for five sessions.The price is affordable and reasonable.Lastly,I do not need to buy the bicycle as is will be provided by the organiser.

I really hope you give me the green light to join BMX Cycling.I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join BMX Cycling this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jackson Wang will be my coach. He is experienced and knowledgeable. Besides, the fee is RM150 for five sessions. The price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy the bicycle as it will be provided by the organiser.

I really hope you give me the green light to join BMX Cycling. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your son,

Jerreth

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Dear mum and dad,

I can't wait to share with you about the adventure offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join paintball class this coming school holiday .

Guess what , MR. Jay Chou will be my couch . He is an experienced and professional couch. Morever , the fee is only RM 85 for (5 sessions) . It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that , I do need to buy the paintball gun .

I really hope you allow me to enroll in this Lingua Sports academy because it is a challenge for me to skate well and perform tricks.

Your son

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Dear Mum and Dad,

I can't wait to share with you the adventure offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join the paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is an experienced and professional coach. Moreover, the fee is only RM 90 for three sessions. ( refer to the worksheet) It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, I do not need to buy the air gun as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you allow me to enroll in this Lingua Sports Academy and I am sure I can spend my time in a beneficial way.

Your son,

Zen Hao

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Dear dad and mom,

I am eager to share with you adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join BMX Cycling this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jackson Wang is coach. He is knowledgeable and experienced. Besides, the fee is RM150. The price is affordable and it has five sessions. Lastly, I do not need to buy a bicycle as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join BMX Cycling. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

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Dear Dad and Mom,

I am eager to share with you the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join BMX Cycling this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jackson Wang is my coach. He is knowledgeable and experienced. Besides, the fee is RM150. The price is affordable, and it includes five sessions. Lastly, I do not need to buy a bicycle as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join BMX Cycling. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,

Belle

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I can't wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I'm keen to join Paintball this coming school holiday.

Guess what, Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. However, the fee is only RM 90 for 3 sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, I do not need to buy the air guns as it will be provided by the organizer and I only need to prepare Armour only.

I really hope you allow me to enroll in the Lingua Sport academy because it is a challenge for me to short will and perform tricks

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I can't wait to share with you the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I'm keen to join paintball this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. However, the fee is only RM90 for three sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, I do not need to buy the air guns as they will be provided by the organizer, and I only need to prepare armor.

I really hope you allow me to enroll in Lingua Sports Academy because it is a challenge for me to develop my skills and I can spend my time in a beneficial way.

Your son,

Jae Hong

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you the amazing sports. I am interest to join paintball lesson this holiday.

Guess what? The paintball coach is knowledge and helpful. Besides, The fee is RM90 (3 sessions) The price is affordable and I can afford it with my own pocket money. Lastly, I do not need buy fake gun as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join paintball lesson. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your son Kong Jun San

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you the amazing sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am interested in joining the paintball class this holiday.

Guess what? The paintball coach is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM90 for three sessions. The price is affordable, and I can afford it with my own pocket money. Lastly, I do not need to buy air gun as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join the paintball class. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your son,
Kong Jun San

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Dear dad and mum,

I am eager to share with you adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join paintball this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou is coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful people. Besides, the fee is RM 90. The price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy the air guns as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me a green light to join the paintball. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your Son,

Sin Han

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am interested in joining paintball this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM90. The price is affordable, and I can afford it with my own pocket money. Lastly, I do not need to buy air guns as they will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join paintball. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,
Alyssa Teoh

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am interested to join BMX cycling this coming holiday.

Guess what? My coach name is Mr Jackson Wang. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM150. The price is affordable and I can afford it with my pocket money. Lastly, I do not buy bicycle as it will be provided by the orgarnizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join the BMX cycling. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,

Sze Ying.

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am interested in joining BMX cycling this coming holiday.

Guess what? My coach's name is Mr. Jackson Wang. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM150. The price is affordable, and I can afford it with my pocket money. Lastly, I do not need to buy a bicycle as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join BMX cycling. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,
Sze Ying.

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am interested to join paintball this coming holiday.

Guess what Mr. Jay Chou. Is coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM90. The price is affordable, and I can afford it with my own pocket money. Lastly, I do not need to buy air guns as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join paintball. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter

Alyssa Teoh

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am interested in joining paintball this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM90. The price is affordable, and I can afford it with my own pocket money. Lastly, I do not need to buy air guns as they will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join the paintball class. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,
Alyssa Teoh

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Dear Dad and Mum ,

I can’t wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy.I am keen to join paint ball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what,Mr.Jay Chou will be my coach.He is an experience and helpful coach Moreover,the fee is only RM90 for three sessions.It is affordable and cheap.Not only that,I do not need to buy the air guns as it will be provided by the organizer and I only need prepare body armour only.

I really hope you allow me to the green light in the Lingua Sports academy because it is a reasonable for me to paint ball well and perform tricks

Your son,

Varick

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I can’t wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join the paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is an experienced and helpful coach. Moreover, the fee is only RM90 for three sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, I do not need to buy the air guns as they will be provided by the organizer, and I only need to prepare my body armor.

I really hope you allow me to get the green light to join Lingua Sports Academy. I am sure I can spend my time in a beneficial way.

Your son,

Varick

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Dear dad and mom,

I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy.I am keen to join paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what,Mr Jay Chou will be my coach.He is an experienced and professional coach.Moreover,the fee is only RM90 for 3 sessions.It is affordable and resonable.Not only that,I do not need to buy air guns as it will be provided by the organizer and I only need to prepare body armour only.

I really hope you allow me to enroll inthe Lingua Sports Academy because it is a challenge for me to short will and perform tricks.

your daughter,

Yu Qin

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Dear Dad and Mom,

I am eager to share with you the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join the paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is an experienced and professional coach. Moreover, the fee is only RM90 for three sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, I do not need to buy air guns as they will be provided by the organizer, and I only need to prepare body armor.

I really hope you allow me to enroll in the Lingua Sports Academy because it is a challenge for me to develop my skills and perform tricks.

Your daughter,
Yu Qin

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Dear dad and mum,

I can’t wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what, Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is an experienced and professional coach. Moreover, the fee is only RM 90 for 3 sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, I don’ need to buy the paintball gun as it will be provided by the organizer and I only to prepare the armour only.

I really hope you allow me to enroll in this Lingua Sports Academy.

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I can’t wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join the paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is an experienced and professional coach. Moreover, the fee is only RM90 for three sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, I don’t need to buy the paintball gun as it will be provided by the organizer, and I only need to prepare my body armor.

I really hope you allow me to enroll in Lingua Sports Academy. I am sure I can spend my time in a beneficial way.

Your son,

Zun Khai

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am interested to join BMX Cycling class this coming school holiday.

Guess what, Mr. Jackson Wang will be my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful coach. Besides, the fee is only RM150 for 5 sessions. The price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy a bicycle as it will be provided by the organizer and I only need to prepare helmet, body armour, knee guards and gloves.

I really hope you give me the green light to join BMX Cycling class. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your son,

Elson

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am interested in joining the BMX Cycling class this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jackson Wang will be my coach. He is a knowledgeable and helpful coach. Besides, the fee is only RM150 for five sessions. The price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy a bicycle as it will be provided by the organizer, and I only need to prepare a helmet, body armor, knee guards, and gloves.

I really hope you give me the green light to join the BMX Cycling class. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your son,
Elson

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Dear dad and mum,

I cant wait to share with you about the exiting sports adventure offered by Lingua Sports Academy.

Guess what , Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. Moreover, the fee is only RM 90 for 3 sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, i do not need to buy the air guns as it will provided by the organizer and i only need to prepare the body armour only.

I really hope you allow me to enroll in this Lingua Sports Academy because it is a challenge for me to defeat the opponents and shoot well tricks.

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I can’t wait to share with you about the exciting sports adventure offered by Lingua Sports Academy.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. Moreover, the fee is only RM90 for three sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, I do not need to buy the air guns as they will be provided by the organizer, and I only need to prepare my body armor.

I really hope you allow me to enroll in Lingua Sports Academy because it is a challenge for me to defeat the opponents and shoot well with tricks.

Your son,

Atlas

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Dear dad and Mum,

I'm eager to share with you the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I'm keen to join the BMX Cycling this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr Jackson Wang will be my coach. He is very expert at cycling and professional coach. The price is affordable and I can afford it with my own pcket money to pay it.Not only that,I do not need to buy any things but I need to prepare helmet, body armour, knee guards and gloves. The bycicle will be provided by the organizer.the fee isRM150 ( 5 sessions )

I really hope you give me the green light to enroll in the Lingua Sports academy. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

your daughter,

Alicia Hee

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I'm eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I'm keen to join BMX cycling this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jackson Wang will be my coach. He is very skilled at cycling and a professional coach. The price is affordable, and I can afford it with my own pocket money. Not only that, I do not need to buy anything, but I need to prepare my helmet, body armor, knee guards, and gloves. The bicycle will be provided by the organizer. The fee is RM150 for five sessions.

I really hope you give me the green light to enroll in Lingua Sports Academy. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,
Alicia Hee

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Dear parents,

I can’t wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I'm keen to join the paintball class by this coming school holiday.

Guess what? My trainer will be Mr. Jay Chou. Mr. Jay Chou is a experienced and professional coach. The fee is only RM90 for 3 session. It is an affordable and reasonable price. I only need to buy the body amour as the air guns will provide by the organizer.

I really hope you can give me the green light to enroll this Lingua Sports Academy it is a very challenging class for me.

Your son,

Kah Hou

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I can’t wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I'm keen to join the paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what? My trainer will be Mr. Jay Chou. Mr. Jay Chou is an experienced and professional coach. The fee is only RM90 for three sessions. It is an affordable and reasonable price. I only need to buy the body armor as the air guns will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you can give me the green light to enroll in this Lingua Sports Academy. It is a very challenging class for me and I am all geared up for it!

Your son,
Kah Hou

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join BMX cycling this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr.Chong is my coach. He is knowledgeable and professional. Besides, the fee is RM30. The price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy bicycle as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join BMX cycling. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join BMX cycling this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Chong will be my coach. He is knowledgeable and professional. Besides, the fee is RM120 for four sessions. The price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy a bicycle as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join BMX cycling. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,

Sze Jane

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Dear Dad and Mun,

I am eager to share with you about the amazing sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join skateboarding class this coming school holiday.

Guess what, Mr.Messi will be my coach. He is a knowledgeable and professional coach. Besides that , the fee is Rm120. The price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I don’t need to buy the helmet, knee guard and skateboard as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join skateboarding. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter

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Dear dad and mum, I want to sharing one story to you. I want to learn skateboarding we use skateboarding to ride on and perform tricks. My trainer is Mr. Messi . Fee Rm120 (4 sessions) we want epuipment:helmet, knee guard, skateboard(provided by organiser).

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Dear Dad and Mum,

Guess what,our teacher recently announced that we can join the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy.I am eager to join paintball class this coming school holiday.

By the way ,Mr Jay Chou will be my coach.He is a professional and helpful coach.Moreover ,the fee is only RM90 for three sessions.It is affordable and reasonable too.Not only that,I do not need to buy the air guns as it will be provided by the organisers and I only need to buy body armour only.

I really hope you give me the green light to enroll in this Lingua Sports Academy because I can have fun and take part in a military combat simulation to defeat the opponents.

Your daughter,

Qlowin.

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Zi Xuan

Dear mum and dad,

I can't wait to tell you some excellent news about the new friend in school!

The new friend name is Ha sumin and she is very kind and friendly.

Ha sumin is from Korea and she already has a friend who is Kim Jooeun and me.

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Dear mum and dad,

I am eager to share with you the swimming class. I am interested to join the swimming class on this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr Tun is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Beside, the fee is Rm150 for 5 lessons which is reasonable and affordable. Lastly, I do not need to buy swimming equipment as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you can give me the green light to join this swimming class. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,

Zi Xuan

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Ooi Zun Khai

Dear Dad and Mum,

I can’t wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join the paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what, Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is an experienced and professional coach.

Moreover, the fee is only RM90 for three sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, I don’t need to buy the paintball gun as it will be provided by the organizer, and I only need to prepare my body armor.

I really hope you allow me enroll in Lingua Sports Academy. I am sure I can spend my time in a beneficial way.

Your son,

Zun Khai