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topic: purswasive writing
date : 21/3/2011
i have revised my wrighting
stage 2

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Topic: Pursuasive
Date: 21/03/2011
Stage: New seed, 1st draft, 1st revision

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Topic Theme: Pursuasive
Date: 21 march
Stage: 1st proofread

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Topic Theme: Pursuasive
Date: 21 march
Stage: 1st proofread

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date:21/3/11

I've done my first draft and it is in the please read me tray.

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Topic Theme: Pursuasive
Date: 21/3/11
Stage: 1st revision

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Topic Theme: Pursuasive
Date: 21/01/2011
Stage: 1st revision

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I have revised my work and put it in the box.

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Post your updates like this

Topic Theme: Pursuasive
Date:
Stage: New seed, 1st draft, 1st revision, 1st proofread, partner read, final check, publishing

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Pursuasive 1st draft comments done for.......
Ains, Casey, Kirsten, Claire, Lachy J, Haydn, Bree, Hooi, Kels, Ciaran, Lockie K, Lauren, Kyle, Tails.