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Both Austin and Alexandera had a super funny article. Great job, I can see the effort.

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Austin: Very comical Cassio-Bill connection- really keeps the reader interested
Alexandra: Well formatted, main article appeared very well though out

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Amazing presentation by Alexandra and Austin Smith. The comments and pictures were spot on. The article was very organized and the comments were humorous.

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Alexandra: The article had really good organization and was laid out very well, it looks realistic
Austin: The pictures were great, thank you.

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Austin
Good user reviews of the rapier
I enjoy Bill C making a surprise cameo

Alexandra
Good explanation of what's going on
Most likely kept Austin in check

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- I like the format
- I like the comments

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Austin: Bill Clinton and Chuck Norris. All I have to say.
Alexandra: There was a lot of effort put into the article.

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alexandra- extremely detailed articles wow
austin- generlly upsetting memes, thank you

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Parker: your comments were absolutely superb
Sam: I like the layout of the article and the ads were very well done and creative

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Alexandra: article seems thorough and good ad
Austin: I'm a fan of the pictures and the comments also the ask cassio was really great

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The advertisements were creative and entertaining

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Parker: I like the pictures and captions. LOL those comments.
Sam: Great communication skills. Interesting ad.

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Sam: good ads
Parker: nice pictures and funny comments

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sam- adapted the story to a modern format; you were probably the one who responsibly censored the comments
parker- nice interjections and ads

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Parker: Funny captions and creative ideas
Sam: Funny but thorough explanation

Alexandra: Creative insert of finsta name; detailed and understandable explanation; clear connect to modern times through format and dialect
Austin Smith: Creative and punny titles, entertaining presentation; funny allusion; detailed extras; funny portrayal of characters through real-life people/actors

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- I like how the pictures go along with the article
- Comments are funny

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Sam
Good structuring
I like the addition of the ads

Parker
Like the pictures to help
Nice comments

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Parker: Amazing funny comments
Sam: I guess the ads were funny
Overall great presentation

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Parker: Those captions were beautiful Parker, I feel more complete for knowing them. "thiccc"
Sam: The title was good and sensational, it makes it feel like a real paper. The modern wording also helps give it that feel. The ads were great, I like the estate sale.

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Parker: Liked the comments section. They were hilarious.
Sam: The article was very in-depth. The pictures were good. The ads were pretty funny too.

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Dash: Nice presentation swagger
Nicole: Fairly good explanation
Cady: Great as always
Josh: Funny ad, and delicious art work

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Josh: I like the word map
Nicole: the obituaries were a great idea
Cady: advice was funny
Dash: great job explaining the article, it was clear and detailed

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Dash: Very good voice! Stumbled a bit but the voice more than made up for it.
Nicole: Very good handwriting!
Cady: Very good posture!
Josh: Amazing description! Amazing drawing. Much wow!
Overall amazing newspaper. Enjoyed the obituaries. Not enough memes. Cheesey joke. Assumed Iago's death which is not very professional and writing a eulogy about it is even more bad. Great reporting!

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Joshua: The word map was really cool. It was awesome to see the different relationships between each of the characters in Othello. The handkerchief was hilarious too.
Cady: The advice column was a good idea. I thought it was a good satirical piece on the character of Iago.
Nicole: Really liked the handwriting style and the devotion you gave to the newspaper. The joke was good too.
Dash: Good presentation style. Very descriptive on the main article on the first page.

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Dash: Very good speaking skills
Nicole: Handwriting es muy excellent
Cady: Dear Iago - very ironic - shows true understanding of the piece
Josh: Concept map is very hip, now, and informative- also excellent artist

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To succeed in life you need a backbone, a wishbone, and a funny bone!

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Cady-The letters were cool as it showed how a person would think about the situation in the play
Dash-Did a good job of introducing the newspaper and describing the main article, the fact that the paper was handwritten shows a lot of effort
Nicole-The obituaries showed knowledge of the characters and what they were like, the organization of the newspaper and speaking was also well planned
Josh-The graph of all the interaction were in depth and seemed very well made and neat, the advertisement was also very amusing
Eric-
Parker-The advertisements were creative and entertaining. The additional articles were also creative and seemed realistic for the time
Sam- The article title was catchy and it seemed like an actual article title.
Julien-
Alexandra- The main article seemed very nice and the layout seemed like a real newspaper
Austin-The comments were entertaining and was reflective upon the story, the overall newspaper was a good mix of humor and content of the story
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Dash- really knew what was going on
Nicole- can't believe you hand wrote the whole thing
Cady- enjoyed Iago's advice
Josh- amazing art skills

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Dash: Clear voice, like the overview and title
Nicole: Good explanation and the writing of the obituaries
Josh: Like the color coordination of the concept map and the ad was amazing
Cady: I like the twist on dear abby and it was well explained
Sam: The large article was well explained and summed up, love the ads
Parker: Those comments are amazing, amazing

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Dash: The article is very thorough and the organization is good.
Nicole: Beautiful handwriting on the paper. I love the diagram.
Josh: The advertisement is creative and the artwork is good.
Cady: The Dear Iago part is very funny and I think it is creative.
Austin: The pictures were really funny and creative. The Ask Cassio section is really good.
Alexandra: The organization of the newspaper is really good and the Last Week in Review is really creative.
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Dash: The font or written font of the newspaper was really impressive. The fact that it was handwritten also shows a lot of care and effort. Good summary of the article and importance of hitting the main points.
Nicole: The joke was clever and a fun thing to add to the newspaper. The obituaries were also creative. It was important to point out that they sensationalize the obituaries and only included all the good aspects of someone.
Cady: The Dear Iago part was really cool in the sense that it was sarcastic towards his character.
Josh: The word map was really helpful. It was extremely creative. It was also easy to follow and read. The drawing was interesting and good way to advertise the handkerchief.

Sam: The article title was eye-catching. I liked that they made the article more modern and kinda transformed it to today's society. The ads were interesting in that some of them were for people instead of for objects.
Parker: I liked the inclusion of actual pictures. It makes appear almost more realistic to today's society because everything is on camera nowadays. It also funny how some of the comments included insults from Brave New World.

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I like it had a feminist point of view. Jazz advertisement was interesting. I like they included the willow song in their newspaper.

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Mikaela- nice dramatic intro, interesting take on the feminist perspective of the play. I dislike the "noisy" format with the variety of fonts, but it does provide a sectioning effect

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Mikaela - I like how you focused more on the women of the play and not the men. I like the ad you used and the poem by Shakespeare.

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Mikaela- eye catching article title, talk on the recap of the turkish conflict, Shakespearean poem, feminist theme

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Mikaela- Interesting take on the play/article with feminist view, good incorporation of plot into article, nice incorporation of the history of the time, Emilia portion stays pretty true to Emila's character

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Mikaela - very interesting newspaper name, interesting formatting, similar to a newspaper, good use of Emilia in the love column, fonts drew attention to the different columns

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Mikaela C- A Lot of Fonts, Interesting new view of the play from different perspective, Great Hook/Headline

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Mikaela- Unique perspective on the Battle Center. The inclusion of the poem by Shakespeare was something I haven't thought of before

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Mikaela:
- LOVE the formatting and most of the fonts
- like that the "Willow Song" was added
- I like the "battle center"

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Franky- absolutely brilliant shakespearean title and use of the modern Coke ad. The entire concept of the after analysis of events and the comments are great too, introducing some great humor.

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Franky - Love the rhymes in the title, brilliant, very modern, interesting use of video, names of the comments are amazing, good references to the play

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FRANKY ""MY MAN"- Fantastic title. Excellent improv and had a good comedic feel to the presentation, I'm so proud :')

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I like the pictures they used. Franky seems well informed on his article. Interesting Coca cola advertisement. I like they included a video and I appreciated the comment section.

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Franky:
- funny title
- organized formatting
- Nice incorporation of videos and comments

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Nice pictures
Organized
Very detailed
I like the comment names

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Franky W- Funny, knowledgeable of the play, great references to other works and history

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Franky-Good explanation of pictures, article tied very well to the plot of the play, nice incorporation of video, really funny comments

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Franky- liked the distinction in the caption of the photo vs the text with the bold. Like the video

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Franky - I like how it is the news from many different parts of the play and what happened to the characters. I also like the comments that you put at the end.

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Very organized
I like the inclusion of modern sports as its own article
Adonis as love section is fantastic

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I like how they had a sports section like an actual newspaper. Fun connection to the steelers and patriots game. I liked the quote at the end too. Had the feel of a real newspaper.

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Joey- quality title of newspaper, morning recap on the information, quote, response to a "football" game, advice from Adonis, and pictures from the time

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Joey - I like how you referred to Othello as "the Moor". I like how you had it be the news released on the day after the tragedy. Your extras are very funny

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Joey-Good inclusion of publication date and price, good commentary on prejudice of the time,  article is very nice summary of the events of the story, nice comparison to the information we know as readers of the play, and the knowledge of potential readers of a newspaper from this time, funny Adonis article, good explanation of the quote at the end

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Joey R- Great Formatting, Funny, Knowledgeable of Time Period, Great Connections to Modern Times

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Joey (Jameson, Julien)- I'm not a fan of the underline with the bold, but I have to give credit to the use of columns as I found it extremely difficult to format in that way. The florens are a nice touch to ancient times as well. "Less depressing news" is also humorous given the tradegy of the play, and reflects upon the whole comic/tragic juxtaposition

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Joey- Price was a good touch. liked how he took care of Iago's punishment. Funny sports article

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LOUIS "JOEY" RUBBO V - Good formatting, font makes it 10/10, good use of references to Shakespeare and use of book themes, nice overview of Iago and other characters, makes it seem more modern, football reference is still very salty, love advice from Adonis is a nice comic relief, quote is 12/10, would quote again

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Joey:
- i like the font
- nice addition of price
- I like that there is a sports section, humorous
- Cool addition with the 'quote of the day'

I'm also salty about the game.

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Julian, John & Cole - Good change from Venice to Cyprs, interesting title for main article, nice formatting, good use of information from play, good use of Shakespearean terms, nice TV listings and changing of names, interesting use of historical references to gods and currency, nice reference by Julian to Iago stabbing Cassio

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Cole-Good explanation about layout of paper and connections to the past, lots of research and effort put into the international politics article
John-Good explanation about layout of paper and connections to the present, in-depth explanation about quotes, funny TV listings
Julian-Funny ad for weaponry

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Cole- I like the explanation of the format for the paper
John- Great explanation and like the witness statements
Julien- Funny I like the ad and how it connects to the story

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John - I like the clickbait that you used for the title of your article. I like the TV listings you did.
Julian - I like the advertisements that you used and the detail you put into it.
Cole - I liked how your formatted the newspaper and the articles you did.

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I liked the format of the newspaper. I liked the titles they wrote. I liked how they got statements from witnesses to support their suspicions. Funny TV show names.

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John Annunziatio- Whoever wrote the headline deserves a 110%, most clever title so far. Unique approach to the article, having it take place during the actions of the play is a nice way to display the information.
Dylan Cole Davis- had good information about the use of the design to make the information easier to understand.
Julian- The advertisements were high quality.

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Cole- Attention grabbing title, yellowed paper, and analysis of the sports during the time
John- Based on Daily Mail, eyewitness testimony from a friend of Othello, TV Listings with creative names, Iago interview
Julian- rapier advertisement with accurate currency

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Cyprus instead of Venice
Very organized
Like the title of the article
TV listings are so good
Lots of articles - very detailed in the differnet aspects of the plot

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John, Cole, Julian
- I like the formatting
- funny title
- @Cole, good projections
- good explanation of title and Daily Mail similarities
- Clever with TV listings
- I like the way you guys presented it, told the story
- Good details
- @Julian good persuasion with ad

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Jill-Nice title and explanation about title, article incorporates lots of plot/themes throughout the story, lots of humour in the names of the comments section

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Jill- Appropriate title, quotations and accurate usage of words, inclusion of fighting outside of the play, and Italian theme

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Jill- I like the somewhat complex diction used, it reminds me more of a Shakespearean play than a news article. I like the Italian names as well (Mario the Plumber). Great integration of humor

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Includes an extensive amount of plot and the interconnectedness of everything
Organized nicely
I like all of the people commenting

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Jill:
- I like the title
- good use of terminology from the play
- nice journalism terms, adds credibility
- I like the comments section

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Jill - I like how you incorporated so much of the play into your article, and your extras were very assuming.

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Jill- I like how she told the brief story of what happens in Othello and how creative she was with the ask Luigi article questions

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Jill U- Knowledgeable of book, Funny, Great relation to reality

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Jill- Personally, my favorite one, 10/10, best ever. Good connections to the text and explains the relevance to the article. Direct quotes from the text implemented well.

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Very well versed on the articles written and good knowledge on the history of the play. I liked the ads too.

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Max, Sadie & Emily - I love the title of the newspaper, nice use of making the play seem more modern/a modern issue, a lot of research was used in order to find actors, ads are well suited for the topic, a lot of research for the articles in general, very nice

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Clever title of newspapers and article. Thought it was interesting how the date related to the original viewing of Othello.

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Maxwell- Clever articles and "Full Metal Jousting" is really funny.
Sadie- Clever title. Clever premise for the article as well.
Emily- Did a lot of research about the characters and actors that have played them previously.

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Maxwell T- Funny, Great Explanations
Sadie S- Knowledgeable, Funny
Emily B- Funny, Great connections to real life & history

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Great article title
Lots of different articles, lots of detail
I like how organized it is

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Maxwell- Advertisement from Medieval Times, common during the time, metal jousting
Emily- Content with the character, comedic questions and answer
Sadie- Good use of the timing of the newspaper, the title, and the article name

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Sadie/Emily/Maxwell- I like the more modern style that is used, with white background, spaced text, etc as opposed to a traditional newspaper. The people of Broadway is also a neat modern addition. The "you might also like" is modern as well, it's as if I'm reading an actual online article with targeted ads

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Stephanie - I liked how you used modern people for the characters.
Hannah R - I like your crossword and cartoon.

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Hannah- Christmas comic and formatting of the newspaper
Stephanie- Good use of images of actors of the people, drugs, comics, swords, and crossword puzzle

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Maxwell, Sadie, & Emily:
- fancy title, good thought behind it
- so much thought behind everything!
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I like the name; super organized; looks pretty; elaborate with lots of detail; has every aspect of a newspaper

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Stephanie- I like the use of Dexter as Iago. She knew what each aspect of the article was and explained them well.
Hannah Ranae- Provided comic relief and explained the details of specific portions.

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Hannah/Stephanie- realistic styling, I like the wrapping of images and texts.
The pictures of real-life people (and color images) create a neat sense of depth. Also some humor which is always enjoyable

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Hannah R.- Funny explanations about thought process in planning the article
Stephanie- Good explanations of ideas, funny explanations about pictures

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Stephanie- Funny, Solid Explanations
Hannah R- Knowledgeable, Humorous

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Stephanie & Hannah R. - Formatting is awesome, the use of modern celebrities for the characters is a nice touch, advertisements fit the time period nicely, crossword and comic really make the paper

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I am commenting on Hannah's project I liked the name I thought it was creative
Commenting on Stephanie, thought the character choices were pretty modern and creative.

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Mikaela - The idea of a more feminist newspaper in the time of Othello is an interesting take. Article layout looks realistic for an actual paper.

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Franky - Clearly lots of work went into writing this article. The "Shakespeare" Coke ads are interesting. Overall pretty cool.