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Something he did well is he said everything from the book and some thing he can inprove on is more lighting

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Something he did well was giving detail and and speaking clearly. Something he did bad was nothing

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+ Something he needs to work so is to explain more.Something he did well was when he was he was looking at the camera.

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+Something his did well with looking at the "Audience" when he gives details from the book!

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+Something he did well was that he looked at us and he  speaked  loud and clear.
- Something he needs to improve is to add more details.

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+ Something he did well was that he introduced us to the book he was going to be talking about.
- Something he needs to improve on is that he should have a hook

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+Some he did well is that he speaked loud and he did it with out a paper
- Something he needs to improve on is expression

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+ He did well on his summary,and his hook of the book.
- He needs to improve on sounding more clearly because i almost couldn't hear him

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Something he did well was he spoke loudly and clear als

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Something he did well was  speaking loud and clear.
Something he can improve on was expereshon.

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Something he did well is that we could understand what he was saying. And something that he could improve on is to talk with more expression

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What he did well was that we understand all the things he was saying he can tell how the kid looks.

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One think that he did well was telling all the characters names

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Something he  did good was that he was not looking somewhere els.Something that he did bad was he did not let us see the book that mouch .

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You had a good book that would make any kid want to read it but you should work on giving more details about the book but not spoil the whole book.

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Something he did well was that he gave  specific detalies

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+He did good on the hook.- he can work on his expershion

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+He gave  good,specific examples about what happened in the past and what is happening in the present.- He can improve on telling us how the kid looks like in the book

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+What he did well was that he said detail from what he said and he talked about what the book was about.
-Something that he could improve is to say an example from the book and could relate it to his life.

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Something he did well was telling some interesting parts from the  book so people can be interested and want to read it.something he needs to improve on is  putting more feelings into his voice.

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+ Something he did well was in the introduction.
Something that he needs to work on is speaking more clearly and have a hook

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+ You had a really interesting hook! It made me want to read your book!
- You can improve on speaking with a little more expression to make your presentation more interesting to the audience.