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Glow: Good explanations of the technologies used, and how they can be used in the classroom.
Grow: When explaining the lesson plan, clicking through and showing the lesson plan may have benefited the view when giving the overview of the lesson idea.

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Glow: In depth explanations of the technologies used. And good explanations of each tab on the website.
Grow: Having the embeded links on the websites more zoomed in would have been better for viewing.

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Glow: Everything was placed nicely on the website so you could follow along while each tab was explained.
Grow: Going more into depth when discussing the lesson plan and tech grant proposal would have helped the viewer understand what was discussed in the slideshows.

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Glow: Of what is explained of the Symballo and lesson plan was very informative.
Grow: Explaining every technology that was used in the website would have helped someone viewing the video who is unfamiliar of what the websites are/ what they do.

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Glow: Great descriptions of the use for each of the technologies utilized.
Grow: When explaining the PowerPoints, clicking through the slides while explaining them would have benefited the view to see and hear the descriptions.

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Glow: Great descriptions of the technology grant and AT s'more.
Grow:  Instead of stating the technologies within the website, it would have been beneficial to explain them all, not just the tech grant and AT s'more.

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Glow: Good descriptions of all the technologies within each tab.
Grow: Viewing the website in the published site would have prevented the highlighting of the embeded links.

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Glow: In depth descriptions were given about each tab.
Grow: At some points I was unable to understand what was being said.

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Glow: Going through the PowerPoints helped the viewer see the presentations, and understand the lesson, rather than just hearing a description of them.
Grow: When first talking about the home page, it was mentioned what the homepage consisted of, but it wasn't until when it was explained that it was scrolled down to.

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Glow: Explanations of each tab within the website were in depth and explained what would be found in under each tab.
Grow: Explaining what the website that were used would help someone who is unaware of them, understand what they are and how they work.

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Glow: I like how you clicked on each link within the website to expand upon the site, and explain the link with detail.
Grow: When expanding the links, the screen was cut off. For some it may have been best to leave it zoomed out to view without getting cut off.

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Glow: I like the explanation of why you chose certain things, like the shape of the Tagul used.
Grow: Viewing the website in the published view, and not the edit view would have been easier for the viewer because they tool bar was on the side, and the links were highlighting when the mouse moved over.

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Glow: Good descriptions of the websites you used, and how they can be used in a classroom by teachers.
Grow: The voice recording had an echo, so at some points it was difficult to understand.

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Glow: Provided great descriptions of what can be found in each technology embded within the website.
Grow: When explaining Blabbarize, showing the one you created it may have helped a viewer understand what the website does.

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Glow: Very fluent and was recorded to transition smoothly (both speaking and with clicking through the website).
Grow: Having to refresh the page to show the group project used time. That portion could have been deleted and re-recorded.

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Glow: I liked how you mentioned you had no skill or background with technology however, you were able to explain each technology we used in the class.
Grow: Showing your website would have helped when explaining everything within your website.

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Glow: Great depth and explanations of why you chose to incorporate certain things, like the reasoning behind your lesson plan.
Grow: It seemed like the explanations were thought of on the spot.  I think some pre-planning of what was going to be said would have helped with the flow of the video.

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Glow: I liked you explanations of how the websites work, like Tagul. It would really help those who have never used the website before.
Grow: At some points, you narrated the video as if you were talking to someone. I feel it would've been better to write out a script to keep from saying phrases you would say in a conversation to someone.