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i feel that we were very fluent and loud

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People wasn't in there windows and we need to come together through all the songs.

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We need to improve of pitch in inscription hope

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On count on me we should show some happiness to form feeling

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on u can count on me we said lie instead of life

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the pitch of some of the notes we sing aren't always accurate.

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We need to be more in tune on inscription of hope

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the tempo in soon in will be done was a bit slow

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people kept moving during bonse aba

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we dont need to go so fast on siyahamba

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in all songs, when there's a long note, we could crescendo.

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On Bonse aba we could have sang it a bit louder

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bonse aba we were too slow

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We need to fix our posture and not swings r arms alot

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Throughout the songs some people are going at a fast tempo and others slow we need to have a balanced tempo

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At the end of Inscription of hope the "Eace" in 'peace' sounded spread causing it to sound a little sharp. - Gabrielle

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We need speed up on inspiration of hope

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We need to on on talking in middle of song.

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When we sing silent it doesn't sound well, we need to blend together

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fidgeting and coming in fast ansd also slowing down throughout the song

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We need to work on  our posture and stop doing things like fidgeting and talking

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inscription of hope i can feel compassion from it..good job:)

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the suprenos need do be faster with the ouus "inscription of hope"(im slow)

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we need to blend better

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We need to work on inspiration of hope.

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We need to sing more enthusiastic on our faster songs because right now we sound dull

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on inscription of hope when we sang "i believe in god" is sounds like we said dog instead of god.

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(In Inscription of hope) somebody was going higher on the alto side.

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The men in inscription of hope were too quite

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We spend so much time on learning the songs so since we know the music we need to sing more passionately

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On Sia Hamba we need to cresendo on the hamba part

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people vowels weren't tall in soon i will be done

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During the reading at the beginning of inscription of hope there was a lot of movement which could distract the parents trying to listen to the meaning of the song. -Gabrielle Moore

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Some were doing ti right but some had their arm cross.

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We need to constantly keep our vowels rounded for a better sound

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i think we should put some dance moves in the songs

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On Tue Tue we need to work on our vowels and on Inscription of hope we need to work on the ooooo's

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People vowels weren't tall in soon i will be done.

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We kept slowing down which caused you to snap your fingers so we can speed up

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We kept slowing down on Bonsa Aba

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in every song, we look very dead. we need to lift our eyebrows or something, lol.

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We didn't blend and hold our notes out

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people need to stop moving their arms in soon I will be done

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In ( count on me ) we need to sing louder through the whole song.

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we don't sound or look like we wanted to sing the songs.

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We need to have more projection

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We should put more feeling in all the songs to make the audience feel the emotion of the song

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The "E" in Jesus during the song soon I will be done sounds a bit stretched.- Gabrielle

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We need to work our posture, people are moving everywhere

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We need to stop dancing inn the middle of the song. 

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We need to stop dancing inn the middle of the song. 

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Thomas

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The posture during soon i will be done was a bit off because we were slouching.

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On soon i will be done on the " i want to meet my jesus " part not much alto singed

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We need to try singing the songs with feeling

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on soon i will be done we lagged in tempo

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on soon i will be done we lagged in tempo

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-Ben

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We need to be alive.

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Some were moving like putting their hands behind their back or at front and moving around.

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We need to look like we are having fun although we are in school and this is the class holding us up before we leave

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On Soon I will be done the vowel were good.

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On Soon I will be done the vowel were good.

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Thomas

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We should round out are vowels on all of them for a even better sound

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on soon i will be done, when we say god we need to pud a D on the end

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on soon i will be done, when we say god we need to pud a D on the end

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-Ben

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In soon i will be done when we sung "going to live with god" it sounds pitchy

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We need smile more & keep our heads up not slanted to the side

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we were losing tempo in soon I will be done.

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people need to stop moving and swaying on soon i will be done

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The tempo for for soon i will be done was a bit slow.

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In Soon I Will Be Done we sound very unsure and that makes our tone odd- Sonne

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In Soon I Will Be Done we sound very unsure and that makes our tone odd- Sonne

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We need to keep up with the tempo in " Soon i will be done ¨ because some kept falling behind

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We  were fidgeting around a lot in all songs.

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the tue tue need to be more like thuaye than tooaye

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the tue tue need to be more like thuaye than tooaye

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-Ben

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We need to have much taller vowels

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if we weren't speeding up, we were slowing down. we need to stay at the correct speed the whole time.

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-Ben

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There was a lot of swaying going on

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we need to be able to keep the tempo we have to stay on track with Tue Tue and Soon i will be done

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We shouldn't move during Tue Tue or Soon I will be done,  but standing still. - Gabrielle

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Tue Tue... Dental "t"

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multiple people are swaying, moving their body, and hands.

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Thomas

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in "inscription of Hope" i don't really like the singing 4 the supremos because we sing very high pitch and i think people won't really understand what were singing

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-Ben

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We need more enthusiasm in Tue Tue. -Gabrielle 

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Tue Tue could have had more crescendos- Sonne 

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Tue Tue could have had more crescendos- Sonne 

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we were slowing up in Tue Tue

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We needs to be more still