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Sounds unprepared - broken speech suggests lack of engagement with research and group

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he is not very clear about any of it

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seems very unsure on the science he's talking about, lots of pauses and visible confusion

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Don’t bring up that you can’t remember something - shows lack of knowledge or understanding about your topic

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less urm and ah and learn how to pronounce the compounds he is talking about

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“Errrmmmm” a bit unsure, not very well presented, “and yeah”

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should've prepared better, and gone through the presentation to be familiar with it

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Slides congested with words, unclear to read and understand

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he was not well prepared and didnt know the material

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Andy sometimes sounded unsure about the information being presented. Next time it might help to practice the presentation to a friend to make sure the information is secure

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try and get a more clear spectrum- was very hard to read and don't know what kind of spectrum

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not a lot of detail about the aims of the project, or the findings

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Formatting of the slides could do some checking over :)

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Excellent presentation, very clear slides and was very specific when talking about the reaction schemes.

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Lots of information presented but maybe layout a bit neater in the second (?) slide so you can read/understand better and to keep it consistent.

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Incredible, I wish I could do the same. I'll work hard to make it to Andy's level!

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Incredible, I wish I could do the same. I'll work hard to make it to Andy's level!

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Says "This I goes here" when you could have said "The iodine wss inserted at this position".

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try and use more scientific language, know what you are talking about

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slides overloaded with information, non-specific language used when describing reactions (eg. this thing becomes that thing)

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Lots of non-specific language was used like "this thing" and "that bit there". This made it hard to follow the process you were describing.

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get familiar with the actual science, naming of structures etc!
Stop saying erm!
Don't cram so much info and schemes onto one page, pick the important ones/ones you're actually speaking about.
Keep font/formatting the same.
Practise more - this was very unorganised and sounded unplanned

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Reviewing the slides and checking their formatting before giving the presentation would help to make the information clearer

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The units are illegible and the quality is overall very low.

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needs fluent speak, specific names of reagents products - amounts 

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needs fluent speak, specific names of reagents products - amounts 

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Too much hesitation.

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make sure the slides are legible

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Slides were muddled and unclear. Delivery lacked conviction and knowledge of the topic

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Slides were muddled and unclear. Delivery lacked conviction and knowledge of the topic

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There was a lot of time-filling words (ah/um/yeah) and not being absolutely sure on the name of the molecules means that more practice might be needed
There wasn't any context or explanation for the experiment or what was done
The text was inconsistently formatted
I think the presentation should talk about we as in the team rather than saying I did/didn't do this

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Slides were quite crowded and in one slide it was overlapping so the information couldn't be read. Presenter wasn't confident on his content, for example he couldn't pronounce the starting reagent. He also wasn't confident on the methods used and what that meant in the grand scheme of things as he couldn't convey what chemistry was actually taking place.

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Smoother delivery of presentations i.e. lessen the use of "ermm"

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Smoother delivery of presentations i.e. lessen the use of "ermm"

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Ask for questions at the end, thank people for attending and listening

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Text was overlapping on the slide with yields 

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Text was overlapping on the slide with yields 

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He needed to know his technical terms better

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A lot of “umm-ing”

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Use a lot of this/here but still hard to fallow with

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Not mention the specific name of the molecule

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Andy spoke too quickly in general and would say umm when he wasn't sure what to say next.

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In his explanation of the reactions it could have been clearer if he spoke more slowly, explained the process in order and was more specific in his terminology.

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In his explanation of the reactions it could have been clearer if he spoke more slowly, explained the process in order and was more specific in his terminology.

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Not structured

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Very nervous. Take a breather and think about what you're talking about, go over your notes beforehand and be clear and precise about what you are talking about, e.g. not just 'this and that'. 

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Very nervous. Take a breather and think about what you're talking about, go over your notes beforehand and be clear and precise about what you are talking about, e.g. not just 'this and that'. 

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When he encountered things he wasn't confident on he stuttered and dwelled upon them. Either learn the presentation more or present what you know clearly

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When he encountered things he wasn't confident on he stuttered and dwelled upon them. Either learn the presentation more or present what you know clearly

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didn't seem to understand the science nor have practiced to find the flow to the presentation to avoid using lots of filler words

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Lacked enthusiasm, information was badly presented, he didn't seem knowledgable on the topic.

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Lacked enthusiasm, information was badly presented, he didn't seem knowledgable on the topic.

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Not confident in what he’s talking about

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Not confident in what he’s talking about

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he didnt show a lot of understanding about the topic

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he didnt show a lot of understanding about the topic

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Need to have a clearer understanding of the topic being presented.
Slides used should have the same formatting.
Maybe should have conferred with the group more about who did what for the project.
More practice presenting needed to reduce the number of filler words used in the presentation.

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wasnt clear on what he was trying to present 

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wasnt clear on what he was trying to present 

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Drawings of structures weren't consistent and many weren't "cleaned up" in order to represent the correct bond angles.

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Too many 'urmms' made you sound like you didnt know what was happening

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Too many 'urmms' made you sound like you didnt know what was happening

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There was a lot of hesitation/pauses. The slides were not organised.

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Slides were overloaded with unnecessary info 

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Slides were overloaded with unnecessary info 