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It was a good paragraph but the grammar needs to be improved.

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needs more better grammar and more organized

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Paragraph was good but needs better grammar

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Jerry Roman
Improve your grammar , you did a good job citing the pages.

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when I was reading your paragraph i was confused based on how you plan it all out. you got a good thing going on but you need to be a bit more descriptive and put your settings and background information a little more clear. also you are missing some words at the end which throws off many readers and myself makes them question about it.

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Your summary was good, but your grammar and organization needs improvement. And where did Anja give birth?

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He gives good info.

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it was good just needs better grammar

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it was good it just needs better grammar.

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When reading the words come off weird, sounds rushed.

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You have your settings all over the place so you need to improve on staying in one place while writing, but you did a good job citing your sources.

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he did good but messed up his sentences with grammatical errors

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You did a good job citing the pages, however you can improve on organizing your writing better. Also you can answer questions like where did Anja give birth?

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when I was reading your paragraph i was confused based on how you plan it all out. you got a good thing going on but you need to be a bit more descriptive and put your settings and background information a little more clear. also you are missing some words at the end which throws off many readers and myself makes them question about it

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Great work citing the pages, however you could improve on pacing and grammar.

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You did a superior job in implementing quotations into your writing but i think that next time you should better organize your writing. Also answer questions like who is Vladek when did he get to the hospital why was he arrested

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You did a good job. But the only think that was confusing was the setting. Next time try to fix it and make it more in order or organized so we could understand a bit more.

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Your work was descriptive by mentioning the characters well. Only thing is that is confusing on the setting, try making it more organized. By the way where did Anja gave birth?